Versatile Mage's Magic Talent

Let me explain first, I think this book is quite interesting, but I just want to make some suggestions, and I don't mean to be negative. 1. During the World Academy Competition, maybe the author wanted to keep the protagonist low-key, so he kept suppressing the magic system used by the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist mostly used the space system during that period. I can accept this, and then I can understand the change of the space system into a sword, but... I think it is weird to have a 30-meter or 60-meter big sword. I know that the author may want to make the scene more explosive, but it really didn't show up! Don't you think it's weird to use a sword that's tens of meters tall to slash an object less than two meters tall? Personally, I suggest that it would be more normal to use a normal sword to cut the sword energy of tens of meters, or leave sword marks on the ground, which will make it more immersive. Otherwise, if you swing a sword of tens of meters in your hand and fail to kill with one blow, it will make people feel that this attack is flashy. (For another example, when training in the Asuka City Government Palace, Guanyu has to compete with the protagonist in killing demons. The protagonist uses a crescent moon and chaos element to change orbit. Isn't this unnecessary? If you directly fly out a crescent moon of tens of meters and kill six demons, I will say you are awesome. Why show off your skills?) 2. It is still a sword transformed from the space element. There are several passages in the book where the protagonist uses the space system to transform into many swords and then kills demons. However, after the protagonist shoots the sword made from the space system once, it consumes mana to create it. I think this is a bug. I remember that in the original work, Mo Fan used the space system to form arrows and they could be reused. 3. Plant system. The protagonist's plant system... How to put it, it seems to be very strong, but not that strong. It can be reborn when exposed to water, swallow life force to restore magic energy, and use life force to repair broken plants. These all feel very strong, but it doesn't seem to be that useful when the protagonist actually kills monsters. Broken plants will not be repaired immediately. Is it that fast to absorb life force and replenish magic energy? To summarize, the author probably didn't want to make the protagonist too invincible all at once, so he deliberately suppressed it, but it always gave me the feeling that the protagonist lacked firepower (the protagonist is strong but often feels that he can only deal with a single enemy, and others rely on teammates). You can suppress the protagonist, otherwise the whole book will not be written, but I suggest that you can suppress the level. For example, mid-level or high-level people cannot fight the monarch (otherwise the book will not be written), but I think it is still possible to control the whole group. If you want to suppress it, just suppress the level. Strength and scenes cannot be spared (Don't delete my article, I typed very hard 😭) Finally, I hope the author can write better and better books.

As a cool article, if you want to make money, readers will generally regard themselves as middle school. Except for some inconsequential things, it is the protagonist who takes the limelight. Instead of Mo Fan, readers usually put themselves as the protagonists, especially those who usually endure hardships. If you are not satisfied, you will give up directly. Find a really cool article!

The author should update it quickly. I have cancer and it will be gone the day after tomorrow. I don't ask for much. I will update it with 67 chapters, which is too much to finish.

After reading about thirty chapters, I won't talk about the emotional scenes for now. I'll just talk about the protagonist's combat prowess and the plausibility of the plot. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's skills are quite high at the beginning. He starts as the only son of boss parents (he can ride a monarch-level contracted beast when traveling), has various top talents, and has a lot of resources (the resources provided by the protagonist's parents can be compared to the heirs of a big family if taken alone) , compared with the core disciples), under the above-mentioned prerequisites, the protagonist's performance is really outstanding. Not to mention that his performance in various monster hunting operations is not outstanding, he even had a back-and-forth duel with the mid-level Ai Jiangtu who had just broken through in the space system. I'm convinced, is Ai Jiangtu's fighting ability very strong in the original work? In the original work of Ai Jiangtu, his strength is at best T1, he has no natural talent (at least it is not shown in the original work), his training speed is fast, but not top-notch, he has rich combat experience, and his spiritual power level is similar to that of Mo Fan of the sixth series at that time. Now Ai Jiangtu has just entered the intermediate level and only has two departments. He doesn't know what level of cultivation he has in the second department. Anyway, it won't be very high. In this way, his mental power has directly reached the peak of the third level. Ai Jiangtu is also cheating, right? Or is it just a few years since high school to college? And what about the protagonist? There are three mid-level systems, two primary-level systems, and two dimensional systems. The space system also comes with natural talents. With so many tricks added up, the mental power is only at the third level. Author, do you want to see where the problem is? Summary: There are a lot of things to say. It started out as a description of being tall and tall, but in actuality, it showed that the character is stretched out. I don't know whether I should say that the protagonist is biting off more than he can chew and is not good at everything, or that the author deliberately wanted to suppress the protagonist's growth. All in all, it's quite speechless.

There are many plots in it that are completely incomprehensible, and there are also many plots that the characters in the original novel have never encountered before. They are forced to enter just to give the protagonist a chance to save the beauty. It is quite sudden. In some plots, the reactions of the protagonist are so different from normal people that it feels awkward to read.

Sometimes you want to express that the protagonist is not the Virgin. But that's not how you express it, right? It's not like when you saw a group of ordinary people in the ancient capital being killed and couldn't help, you wrote a long paragraph saying that the world is just like the jungle, and the protagonist would be indifferent to the people around him. Why are you writing this? If you don't write that ordinary people are being killed everywhere, no one will know that the protagonist will just fly over there and see a bunch of them and ignore them. I don't know if it's true, but I don't think anyone would feel comfortable seeing ordinary people being killed and flying over without helping them. At least it wouldn't be tiring to kill the monsters you were massacring with a low-level magic as you passed by. It's normal to not care about life or death in the follow-up, but if you see any slaves, warriors, monsters, or monsters killing people, just kill them in seconds and it won't waste your time. There is also Flame Fairy and Lei Ji. Mo Fan casually said that I got Lei Ji when I went out. Then why on earth did the protagonist want to steal his Flame Fairy? Anyway, you have to compensate him for a new one, which also ruins the relationship between Mo Fan and Flame Fairy in the original work. You don't often write about Flame Fairy's feeling. It's just a little transparent. It doesn't feel as good as the protagonist getting a new original element, the Holy Spirit.

There is a poisonous point in the first chapter. The magic has not been awakened. Goldfinger dares to rush to grab the core of earth fire without knowing its use. He is really not afraid of death. Even if he changes it to Goldfinger's resonance treasure, he can take the initiative to get the treasure, or Goldfinger can sense it and take the initiative 😅

Author, you are too outrageous, and it is too unfair to the protagonist. In the chapter about the Demonic System, the protagonist said that the Demonic System has become a real magic system, and there will be no side effects when using it. But later on, it costs the same as Mo Fan, and the protagonist worked hard to get the quota. Mo Fan You can get them casually, but the latter ones are not like the protagonist's solo, so you have to take Mo Fan with you for everything. There is also the Flame Lady that the protagonist got with great effort. Mo Fan just got that Lei Ji casually. Isn't this just a chance for the protagonist to overpower Mo Fan? Just give him another one!

Write the plot quickly. Don't let the protagonist have the heart of a virgin from time to time. It's a bit disgusting to see it. Sometimes Mo Fan's aura is stronger than the protagonist, and it's a bit uncomfortable to see it. If he is the protagonist, write it well. If he is not the protagonist, just write something casual. Sometimes I feel a little bit that the protagonist is Mo Fan. Also, don't flirt with women when you see them. Like a TM stallion novel, don't write a chapter that hits a certain realm. Write less bullshit and more fights. Don't overexaggerate the realm of fighting.

It's a pity that in the end, Jiang Shaoxu didn't even win

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What does this book say? The details are okay, but the writing on fighting is so-so. Damn it, when I look at this fighting, I feel like you stand and cast magic to defeat monsters, cast a skill, and write a name. You just cast magic directly, and what else do you have to do with the name? Isn't this just a bad word count? Go up and activate your ultimate move. If you can't hit it with your ultimate move, you'll run away. Damn it, test it, test it, test it with grandma. What bothers me the most is that every time I fight, I have to write the name of the magic. I also have to write down every little thing about the plot. There's also melee combat. I just want to ask if your weapon is put away after just one cut with the sword. Can't you do melee combat? All you need to do with your sword is to use it once. Your body is so strong, why don't you engage in close combat? Damn it, just cast magic on the run, cast magic on the run, can't you just enchant the magic on the sword and fight him in close combat? Watching that fight, it was so embarrassing that all I could do was use magic. You are so powerful physically, why don't you fight in close combat? You have to use your body to be strong. You don't fight in close combat, but you use it to pick up girls. These days, the plot is just about some shitty things without a climax, and the main character, damn, the main character's family is so awesome, I don't even feel that I have used the status of this family. It's like this main character started from the grassroots? You need to do everything by yourself. Damn it, you wrote about his family being so awesome, but it turns out that he has to get supplies by himself and get any quotas by himself. This is useless. This family is just a decoration, that's about it. I mainly want to complain about fighting. He is so awkward. He only puts an arrow away when he has a weapon. He is so strong physically that he just doesn't use it to fight him. If there is no such thing as close combat, you can just set a precedent. His physical body is so strong, but he doesn't use his physical body, he just runs around and uses magic. Write it once with a magic skill. Write it once with a magic skill. The number of words is water.

Versatile Mage fan fiction has fallen into a weird rule story, just like Douluo fan fiction. No matter what the background is, you must compete in the World Academy Competition. I found that it is really easy to write, so I just copied the original work and that was it. But I just added the fan protagonist. Just give the fan protagonist some pretentiousness. And no matter how fast you level up, it is impossible to get stuck in the World Academy anyway.

First of all, I accept multiple female protagonists, but you should at least write the emotions of each of them normally, and even better if you can write them well. The emotional description is so rubbish, if you can't write about emotions, don't write it, just fight. Is it reasonable? The expressions I used to describe the girls after that were not reasonable at all, and the more I looked at them, the more disgusting they became. It really brought down the label of multiple female protagonists. If you can't write about emotions, don't write about multiple female protagonists.

Finished spreading flowers! Let me talk about my personal feelings. I have actually saved this book for a long time. I read it for a while before but was put off by the protagonist's speechless operation. Now I continue to read it because I am in a book shortage Slowly I became interested in reading it later. Although many of the outlines are the same as the original work, the process and results are of course better than the original work. After all, it is a fan. For me, the most exciting part is when the Holy City and the Kraken invade. After all, very few fans write about this. Most of them are about becoming invincible after becoming a forbidden curse. They finish the book with a little explanation, so overall it is a good book 👍

Full skill list!

Having written so many words, I believe this is a good fanfic, but does the fanfic have to include the original characters? I think this is a big poisonous point, especially when writing female characters from the original work I think good fan fiction should only use the world view of the original work, try to avoid the original characters, and write more self-created characters It is best to avoid the original characters, especially in the early stage, and it is best to appear occasionally in the form of guest appearances Write an original female character and then make it into your own book Write an original male character and then steal his opportunity in your own book and change the trajectory of his life All of them are extremely poisonous

There are so many female protagonists, so why not add Jiang Shaoxu ?

In this book, the demon corpse is too worthless, right? Slave-level demons throughout France are often five or six meters in length, and warrior-level monsters are three or four stories tall. Even if they only sell flesh and blood, it will cost more than this. Fifty thousand slave-level crabs, is this cheaper than pigs, horses, cattle and sheep? An ordinary hunter team would sacrifice their lives to kill a slave in the wild. After the battle, the monsters were all torn apart. After all, they collected a few materials and it was still less than 10,000 yuan? What's more, the corpse of the demon killed by the protagonist is extremely complete, and the carapace and other materials are more valuable. There is also a certain probability that alien blood, alien bones, etc. Will explode. Is this money embezzled by the authorities?🥵

If you really want to flirt with a woman when you see her, starting a harem like this is not ethical. After time travel, there really is no marriage law, right? It would be perfectly fine to have a harem like this in ancient times, but it is completely illogical to still do it like this in modern times. Others are monogamous, so your protagonist is going to have a harem.

Finished spreading flowers!

Skip any plot involving women

This book is great. In my opinion there are many advantages. 1. There are a lot of plots in which the protagonist fights monsters, improves his strength, and makes money. That's great. 2. Based on the original work, many new plots are interspersed to fill in the original work. And have a good ending. It's not like some fans who copy the original work and end it badly. 3. The protagonists have various types, including curses and plants. These non-elemental talents and strengths are rarely seen in other fans. It's much better than other fans who always start with the thunder or space system. 4. Know how to use various resources, such as demon blood, summoning planes and trading dragon blood. Not to be used as a gun by Shao Zheng. Can read books to improve super level strength. 5. The protagonist has an overall view, can develop power, and has great leadership charisma. No personal heroism. Disadvantages The protagonist is too carefree and has multiple heroines. Although it is said that a strong man cannot do without a beautiful woman throwing himself into his arms. But the protagonist is a bit too carefree. You could have fewer female protagonists or write fewer plots between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. Overall, this is a very good full-time mage fanfic. If I were to rank the Versatile Mage fandom, I think this would be the well-deserved number one. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more good fan fiction

There are some typos in the article. If you find them while reading, please point them out in the original text and I will correct them within a day.

Is this book going to be continued? 😁😁😁

Is there a real-life version of the book? Why is such a good book that no one has made it into a real-person reading board? ? ? ? ?

Why can't the Supreme Monarch Black Snake kill the Great Monarch Silver Dome Lord?

Come on, it looks great.

Add more essence, add more essence (rubbing your hands, hey hey hey)

What are the protagonist's natural talents?