The Glorious Generations of Hogwarts

Madonna protagonist. I was surprised. I had only met Lu Ping once or twice. After saying a few words, I went out of my way to see if he was sick. You are already a second-generation man, but you are still so naive. Hogwarts is a school. If something goes wrong, the principal and professors are responsible. It is proper for a teenage child to study hard and not get involved in such things.

I think the biggest problem with Hogwarts fan fiction is the beginning. Except for some ingenuity, the rest is a very natural process, including owls, professors, Diagon Alley, bars, Gringotts, wand shops, textbooks, and everyone has read it countless times. There are many chapters in the process, and it is rare to see an author spend pen and ink describing the protagonist as a time traveler. The impression and opinion of people who have only seen the magical world in novels or movies about the magical world for the first time are as dull as if they were produced on an assembly line.

Write about magic. I'm just 11 years old. How can I learn if I don't write? I'm always involved in various things. It's not necessary. If you don't have the strength, you can't just be a coward.

I really hope Lily is with the protagonist or Snape

The level of first-year students is that they only know a few learned spells such as the Spark Curse and the Levitation Curse. Before entering school, Voldemort at least learned the Silent Wandless Flying Curse and the Lock Picking Curse without any teachers. Deng was raised as a savior when the protagonist did not perform well, which can only mean that Deng has read most of the protagonist's memories using wandless Legilimency.

Why does the protagonist have to take care of everything? Some things have nothing to do with you. You just rush to help with things. If you just want to make money or collect information to improve your strength, then forget about it. There is no benefit at all.

Another one to clean up Snape. Fortunately, the author started early and was able to explain and straighten Snape. Otherwise, I would have left immediately if I had followed the original route and still cleaned up Snape. The original Snape was not a good person at all. It's so sweet that I regret standing on Sili CP for so long when I was a child. Snape is not good enough for Lily

It feels like a generic wizard or magic setting is used to set up Harry Potter. Harry Potter is an idealistic children's novel. There is no "scientific" magic in it, only spiritualist witchcraft. To cast magic, they don't need to learn a lot of theory (it won't have any impact if they do). They learn how to cast spells rather than why they cast them. There are no spell principles or spell models found in other Western fantasy types. The only reason they cast the spell was because I wanted to, so I could do it. The reason why they can't is just the gap in magic power and the gap in will. In the Harry Potter magic system, mind and will directly affect the power of martial arts (that is, whether you use general-purpose bullets or special bullets), and magic directly affects the upper and lower limits (that is, what weapons your arsenal contains, whether you can choose a small pistol or an assault rifle, RPG, or missile)

The plot serves the character of the protagonist, but authors with insufficient writing skills often let the characters serve the plot, and the main perspective makes the protagonist appear to be sick.

Not good-looking 1 Pig's Knuckles, I don't know the plot, it's a failed fan work

It's quite interesting at the beginning, but for some reason the plot feels like a replica of a game walkthrough, long and boring.

There were too many events that happened, and it gave the impression that the protagonist didn't even attend classes, and was either playing Conan or fighting.

There are too many inexplicable things. I originally thought it would be combined with other magic systems, but the result is this, writing a Ravenclaw with the same virtue as a teacher.

This book can be simply understood as the author wrote a super-enhanced version of the "savior" that Dumbledore trained in his father's time. In the third month of the first grade, he singled out a group of werewolves under Dumbledore's arrangement and for various reasons of his own.

I've always been curious about writing about the hp of a fan, whether it's Naruto or not, why not write about the same era as the protagonist? Don't you want to write a combat system and background story?🤔

Cut? I really wanted to read it. Since I had it cut, the long-term pain would be worse than the short-term pain. Fortunately, I only read Chapter 10.

It looked good from the beginning, and I had a lot of feelings about it, but until Chapter 90, I was still a weakling. I couldn't hold it anymore and I moistened it.

In my opinion, if you are writing a fanfic of the Harry Potter series, you should not write the same rhythm as the original novel. The original novel has a particularly bad problem, which is that it is too ink-stained. The reason why the original novel can not let others say this is because it is an original story. The content below the original story is unknown to readers, so they have the desire to read it. With this, many shortcomings can be covered up or tolerated. But if you write a fanfic with a certain rhythm, it will not be easy for readers to want to follow it. You might as well write with a different rhythm, so that you can still be considered original.

⊙∀⊙! There are more than 80 chapters. Except for the first dozen chapters where the protagonist has a sense of presence, it is completely useless later. Although it is reality, it is meaningless.

The waiting party is still waiting. I really like the plot and description of Magic Tide, as well as the unfolding world view