Game of Thrones: Red Flame Dragon Lord

Most of the writing is good, but there are some flaws in the character of the protagonist. I don't know what the author thinks. When the protagonist is talking to, for example, Aquaman or Savage, etc., The protagonist gives me a feeling of being humble, stupid and having more money.

Game of Thrones engages in pure love. You are really smart. Both men and women are lustful. It's just that men want more women and women want more men. Aren't female-channel novels always about several men surrounding one woman? Use your brain to think about what is the audience for your novel? If you are a man, write what men like to read. If you are a woman, write what women like to read. If you are purely using love to generate electricity, it doesn't matter. If you want results, you have to use your brain to think about it.

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

This is updated, awesome, come on, update, author, many new Game of Thrones books have been aborted, and we are in urgent need of fresh blood.

What the hell did you write before? It's okay if your writing is not good. You can practice it. I feel inexplicable with Little Rose. Also, it feels too outrageous to make 100,000 gold dragons from a bet.

What I wrote before is pretty good. Why did Daenerys suddenly become so smart after she came out? When it comes to Daenerys' plot, the protagonist becomes a bitch. When beating Rhys, he obviously feels that something is wrong, but he still takes things given by others. Are your Blood Dragon Guards doing nothing? The plot will not be the same later, right?

Others have been assassinating his fiancée, but he only knows how to defend himself. The protagonist is really a turtle man, who is as useful as a dragon.

Is it better to be the heroine or the dragon mother? After all, she has claims to Westeros. Little Rose is unrealistic and her family only sees the queen. The protagonist herself also has claims to several countries in Essos. Restore Valyria directly later

I have to say that taking the dragon into the body is really a failure. The song of love and sex is attractive except for the love and sex. If you have a dragon hiding in it, you might as well write without the dragon and just focus on the love and sex. . . .

Robert still dared to send assassins over. Why didn't he just ride a dragon and burn the Red Keep? Don't tell me it was because he was afraid of the dragon hunting crossbow.

Why don't you update it? Author, you said you don't know how to be a eunuch

So now the question is, the protagonist has a dragon so soon, what should we do in Westeros? Fatty Lao is still alive, but the news about Long cannot be hidden.

I'm so fucked up that the protagonist still stretches her hips like this. I have to say it's really like being a fuck.

Overall, it's okay, and it makes people want to continue watching. However, there are many minor flaws. For example, the protagonist's attitude towards Daenerys is too flattering. In addition, the protagonist already has so many dragons, so what's the point of marrying a few more wives? If you are afraid of civil war after the protagonist's death, you can directly divide them into feudal lords. How many are divided into Essos and how many in Westeros? You have to trust in the wisdom of future generations.

Always respect history. Medieval marriage is a major feature. If you have seen it, tell me about confiscating women.

The author can't grasp the plot, there are too many poisonous points, there is a panel where he doesn't learn medicine to save his mother, and he just sheds a few tears when he dies. He has energy and is blind, which is not interesting.

The protagonist's behavior is uncharacteristic of a human being

Will you write about God next? If we don't write it, the protagonist is basically invincible now. Except for the Latte Throne, there seems to be no plot for the rest. Or should we continue to attack the ruins? But the ruins don't seem to be anything. When the dragon grows up, more than a dozen dragons will just push it, and they can all finish it.

Read the comment section, dog licking article? How fucking sweet is the single female protagonist? Most of them like to read erotic novels with many female protagonists. Men are lustful, and women are the same. Reading novels is just for YY. If you don't read YY, it's just a piece of cake.

Author, I think you should strengthen the protagonist's family sovereignty. The Targaryen dynasty died long ago, and now it is the Beleris dynasty. The fact that you gave up the throne is really discouraging. Since ancient times, the throne belongs to whoever takes it. Author, you have made this protagonist more and more difficult as he goes to the back. This licking of Targaryen is too harsh.

You wrote the war too quickly. Even when the Targaryen family was at its peak, there were more than a dozen dragons, and the war against the Three Daughters Kingdom was not that fast. The scenes of the conquest war could be more detailed, but the war scenes are too rough.

Author, when will updates be resumed?

Author, you don't know how to braid your hair, right?

Are you really not going to update it now, eunuch? It's been almost a month. If I don't want to update it, I'll just post a single chapter 😅😅

The protagonist is just a loser and is nothing without a dragon

It took me several months to write so many chapters, but as the author, you said you wouldn't update it. This means that you wrote the previous few months in vain, and I also read so many chapters in vain, just waiting for the protagonist to fight Westeros. But at the critical moment, you got cold feet.

It was updated, I thought it was a eunuch

With the support of the system, I won't save my mother who loves him, but just go and cool off.

Is this the fucking guarantee you said you would finish the book?

Found a cheating book, Black Blood and Kingship, not bad🤫