National Awakening: I Am a Civilized Breeder

It's so abstract. Wouldn't the protagonist give knowledge to accelerate the development of civilization? It will only speed up time and wait for the tribe to develop itself, right? Is this also called feeding?

I think this book is very good in the Belief of the Gods style, but the pace is a bit fast. For example, the author wrote about 30 chapters in the establishment of a country. If the pace is slower, the 60 or 70 chapters will be good. If it exceeds 100 chapters, it will be a bit slow. Of course, what I am talking about is that there is only the protagonist in this world. If it is the Bankai style, this is not fast. The identity of the protagonist of this book, the god, is maintained very well. I think it has a sense of mystery and a sense of responsibility. It does not interfere too much in the birth of civilization and the main world. There are no disgusting famous scenes such as wisdom. I am not a professional, so I can't see it.

Well, it's true, but it's too little.

It's inconsistent, the incense is poisonous, and it even leads to the brain,

You can summarize the latest three chapters in a few sentences. There is no need to write like this.

It's pretty cool, but the name seems a bit awkward.

If you have some strength, show off. You don't know how to develop in this environment. It is estimated that there will be all kinds of intrigues and intrigues. If it were not for the protagonist, the boss would be dead.

16 Chapters, 2 posts. Didn't the newcomers promote themselves? A bit miserable

It's well written, but it's too watery. In two chapters, the main character just raised a finger. I was quite optimistic about you at first, but it turned out that you were so weak at the beginning. It's hard for you to gain popularity if you act like this.

I still really like your writing of plots in Small World, and I hope to write more of them.

It's okay. I hope it can keep up. Many books have to give up in the middle of their masterpieces.

I would like to ask if the protagonist's battle pets are all female in the back?

This book is quite good, and the plot of the small world is quite good. The real world can be read as another book, and there is no overlap. If the people in the small world are brought to the real world earlier, there will be stories to write, but later the protagonists will become gods, and there is no point in bringing it to the real world, because the people in the small world cannot be more powerful than the protagonist. Then the people in the small world will have broken into the void and ascended to reality.

Well, I enjoyed watching it anyway, but it's a pity.

At fifteen I was determined to be happy, at thirty I was unhappy, at forty I was suffering, at fifty I was weeping, at sixty I knew my fate, at seventy I was liberated from the mortal world, at eighty I attained enlightenment, at ninety I transcended tribulations and became a golden immortal at the age of a hundred. Therefore, visiting this treasure land to respond to the thousands of cultivators shows my inner joy.

I predict that the protagonist will become a god within 100 chapters. So are gods the pinnacle of this world? If not, why can the Yang family dominate a city? How many cities are there in the entire world? So will there be a federation? The realm of this book feels like the realm of the protagonist's world view. After 35 years and 800 years of reaching the level of a god, has the realm not been extended?

Well written, keep up the standard.

Is the protagonist's rebirth caused by his friend? After all, everything is too coincidental.

Criticized? It's all praise!

The author furry controls one and the identification is completed.

So the author needs to rewrite? Started to rewrite with a squeak