Peerless Tang Sect: Tu Zong Rock Bird

I've read more than a dozen chapters, what can I say? Fans who write too many secondary settings usually get frustrated. First of all, you have to look at why others want to read the fanfic. If you write so many secondary assumptions, the essence of the fanfic is actually gone. In order to add your own settings into the book without any sense of inconsistency, you need a certain amount of writing power, otherwise you will find that not many people will read it as you write. Judging from the fact that you have written dozens of chapters and there is still no popularity, it already explains a lot of problems. I just want to make a suggestion. If you want to make a living by relying on the popularity of the fandom, you should not write anything that deviates too much from the original work. Of course, if you write it for fun, just pretend that I didn't say it.

Douluo novels are difficult to write because it is too easy for people to overwrite them. Like other fan fictions, you set a set of skills for the protagonist and then let the protagonist use these skills to defeat the original character. Readers will question whether you have not read the original novel and made the original character weak, but in Douluo, the protagonist is slightly If the original characters are slightly stronger, they can't be beaten. If they can't be beaten, they don't have to write. If they don't have to write, they have to suppress their combat power. If the combat power is suppressed, readers will feel disgusted. To be honest, after reading the fandom for so many years, the first time I realized that the poisonous point of suppressing combat power was in Douluo. This situation does not happen in other fandoms.

The foundation of the industrial revolution: energy and materials. As long as these two points are solved, the door to modern technology will be open to you. In addition, the most important radar in modern warfare must be developed, which is the stepping stone for advanced warfare.

If you want to play with earth, go check out Avatar. Rock Bird, Green Steel Shadow, and Nila are all based on this work. Especially the earthbending skills inside are amazing

I started with a bunch of summoner skills and could change them at will. I couldn't bear it Then I added a set of equipment and made the skills unique. I couldn't bear it Now I got a set of soul bones and a thousand-year soul ring at the start. I couldn't bear it...

Congratulations to all my brothers, I have been playing Three Kingdoms for ten years (I forgot when I got into the mobile version), and today I picked up the white horse in the recruitment order. Now in the classroom, I will go back and update it! ! !

Isn't it just me who thinks it's overpowering? I just read a few chapters, and when I saw the system of LOL, I felt that the cooldown was very long, and the salary and gold coins were all given on a monthly basis, and the protagonist took the path of scientific research, which personally made me unhappy. 🙂🙂🙂

Shurima thrives like the sun

Well, if you don't accept it, let's fight

Shurima your emperor is back

I'm a little dizzy looking at it, and I don't know which one with the surname Cheng is the protagonist.

Good, good, good-looking. You will really be at a loss if you don't watch it. Great idea.

Author, if you want to play with the original, I will just come and drop it 🤓 I have been saving it for several months.

Do you plan to watch Jing Ziyan or the original heroine? If you don't want to remove the original CP, you can comment under this post. If there are more people, I will change it to the original heroine or no heroine later.