
Writing a Diary in the Marvel Universe, and the Avengers Are Falling Apart
人在美漫写日记,复仇者们崩溃了
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- Completed
- Length
- 150k Words
- Subgenre
- Infinite Flow
- Updated
- 3y ago
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It's true that few Marvel writers guess they are comic book characters. The only downside is that there should be fewer main characters. Diary-style novels don't need main characters; they're just tools. Your awkward and overly sentimental main character is worse than Marvel fanfiction.
Don't idolize the original characters too much, don't inexplicably become a superhero, and don't use an exaggerated tone.
The diary entries are written too much and too quickly, while the plot is far too slow. Unless the entire original movie plot is completely rewritten, this book is just a money-making scheme. But the number of people who can control and rewrite the plot is probably less than one in a million.
Putting everything else aside, as a diary-style novel, the tone of the diary entries is incredibly inconsistent. One minute it reads like a diary, the next it's like a movie review ಥ_ಥ Who the hell writes a diary like a movie review, endlessly replaying the beginning and end of events, and repeatedly explaining the hidden details of the events to themselves? →_→
A Marvel character writes a diary, causing Iron Man to break down in 260,000-word diary. A Marvel fan wrote a diary, and the Avengers broke down in 96,000 words. Tsk, the quality is about the same ✘
I remember the last one I read was also a diary, and it was the first time a diary appeared on Stark's workbench! This time it's on Stark's sofa, haha. Are the similar tones in these stories written by the same author?
So you're just cutting your losses if you can't make money? If you want to make money, you should at least come up with a storyline...
It's tedious and watery, lacking the ability to develop a plot; it's always just the protagonist writing in a diary, and then everyone else guessing. It's the same old formula over and over again (the part about finding Matt and then Tony being assassinated felt like a forced plot). You think you can just publish this and scam subscribers? Couldn't you put a little more effort into the plot?
It's a bit slow, but it's not bad, at least readable. It's like picking the tallest among dwarfs.
It's confirmed, it wasn't written by one person.