Daming: My Boss Zhu Yuanzhang

If Xu Yao is written down, your book will also be useless, alas. If you have to make this kind of turning point, do you want to write about the rebellion later? The rebellion can deal with Zhu Yuanzhang. Without rebellion, if Zhu Biao dies, the protagonist will also die. This kind of introduction is easy again, and the protagonists in the novel are all helpless and cowardly. I specifically subscribed and got 100 followers worth coming over to scold me.

This novel is very well written, especially the portrayal of the character of Zhu Yuanzhang. As a time-travel novel, it does not skimp on the writing of this king, but it portrays him just right. It is really rare. When I read the author's words, I automatically compared him with Zhu Yuanzhang played by Hu Jun 😁. The characteristics of the king Zhu Yuanzhang are that he is both upright and ruthless, with a reckless and heroic spirit, as well as a keen sense of smell, accurate intuition, and a strange mind (many people criticize the author for always arranging plots in which Zhu Yuanzhang beats Li Wei. I laughed many times when I saw these plots. First, this is in line with Zhu Yuanzhang's personality, making the character more vivid, and second, the comedy brought by beating Li Wei with a stick in certain plots). I wonder if the author can consider arranging some plots in the subsequent code words to highlight the two characteristics of Zhu Yuanzhang's accurate intuition and strange mind (this can be regarded as a small wish of mine 🐷).

Having read so many novels, you can usually get an idea of ​​your level by reading the first few chapters. I have never posted a book review before, so this is my first time making an exception. This novel can be like a plate of delicious shit. I read it with gusto before, but when I subscribed to the chapter, I realized that it really relied on the defense. If the supporting characters are killed, it feels like the main character has become darker. If it really doesn't work, I can just make the supporting character fake his death. The main character is so fucking harsh and then this is what happens next? Is this how it ends? Others are eunuchs at most. You are rotten and don't cut it, right?

I can't think of how to change it, unless Zhu Biao is still alive and Zhu Yuanzhang died naturally. Only then can Li Wei's anger disappear and the conflict be settled. The story can continue.

It took me three days to finish it. Thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful work. Although it has some flaws, it is still a wonderful novel.

The main character looks like a dog and is boring to watch. If I had stopped playing, I would just take the next one. Of course, it may be that my life is too smooth and I have never been a social animal.

Zhu Yuanzhang trains the protagonist like he is training a dog. He only beats and beats him, and shows no respect at all. He will only keep urging the protagonist to do things, and will take things back when he is not happy. Although the protagonist is like a normal person, it does not mean that readers like to see a protagonist who has the same personality as a common citizen. I am doing the right thing and you dare to punish me? Then stop playing around. What kind of thing is the emperor? A remnant of feudalism. He's just doing this nonsense. Just slap him in the face with Marxism and tell him that the emperor is nothing.

After reading more than ten chapters, I used up my monthly ticket to ask, will the protagonist be manipulated by Zhu Yuanzhang like a dog later on? Dogs in modern society are doing better than the protagonist. At least they won't get beaten for nothing, live in a small dark room, and eat food without oil and water. How miserable is it? The key point is that the protagonist still thinks there is no problem. Isn't this a problem of him abusing his master? Is he so servile? In the novel, he is like a turtle son.

Emmm, in fact, I am quite speechless about the ancient people who only wanted to do business without considering official status. This kind of idea is simply ignorant and has no identity. Those officials can exploit you to death, and destroy your family at any time. It is good to get 30% of the profit from 10%. I really think that those officials are gentlemen... Otherwise, those businessmen in ancient times wanted their descendants to be officials.

As for the relationship between the protagonist and Lao Zhu, without the author's blessing, Lao Zhu would have been taken away by Lao Zhu before his death. After all, he must be worried that the successor would not be able to handle the protagonist.

It's okay to watch, but the main character is a bit too involved, like a dog. I suggest you reduce the number of plots like this.

I voted for a monthly ticket just to complain. The protagonist is a really miserable dog. He is beaten every day and eats green vegetables and tofu but he is not crazy. If I do this, I will probably be useless. After all, I have been trained well 😥

This is the most authentic ancient times. No matter how capable a time traveler is, the feudal rulers don't trust them. There is nothing they can do about it. I felt a lot of the male protagonist's helplessness. He wanted to change the society at that time, but he couldn't change it on his own. After all, the feudal rulers at that time could kill people with just a word.

The protagonist of this book perfectly explains what it means to be able to be angry for days in an extremely angry situation.

How should I put it, this book, the writing is not bad, the plot is a mess, I keep getting beaten and licked, it is better to just write Zhu Yuanzhang as the protagonist and squeeze the time travellers. You get beaten every day and still want to show off? Still showing off yourself? ? Still thinking about helping Zhu Yuanzhang, the protagonist is Naruto, so tolerant

The writing is good, but the author just likes to put shit in the rice. The main theme is to actively admit his mistakes and never repent.

Finished reading. All I can say is that writing online novels is not for you to engage in literary creation. Before writing, think about whether the readers will enjoy it or whether it will become enjoyable later. It was already wrong when you cast a supporting character at the beginning. Later, think about how many people came to see you cast as the heroine and then it ended badly? In the end, he didn't explain anything, just gave a hint and traveled back in time. History is over. You left a mess for so many people who went to sea. Alas.

Alas, it can be seen that the author wants to write about the process of an ordinary person slowly awakening, but it is too divided. The protagonist, an ordinary person, can understand a lot of industrial or military things and can be said to be a technical talent, but as others have said, his ideological awakening is too slow. Talking about equality, and the lives of others will only make him angry for a day or two, and then it disappears. He continues to have fun with Zhu Yuanzhang, and then continues to explode modern things from time to time, and then people continue to die. He continues to feel guilty for two days, and he cannot keep doing this routine.

This plot is really torture. A book tortures the readers, the author, the protagonist, the supporting characters, the emperor, the princess, the ministers and a bunch of common people, which is true torture among tortures.

The writing is so fucking awkward and disgusting to readers. It's funny. Feudal society is either about selfishness and power play, or revolution.

The writing is really twisted. If you want to be contrary, then do the opposite. If not, then write cool articles. You are a disgusting person who is neither rebellious nor happy. He acts like a slave every day.

The writing was really good in the early stages, but as I get to the back, I feel more and more like LJ. The sloppy Zhang came out and became more and more annoying to read. The heroine of the sword is also convinced. Good work for new authors. Anyway, I have thrown away my brain when reading books. I think they are garbage. It is a waste of my starting coins. I will give you a vote to encourage you.

Every book has its own style. This one is lighthearted, cheerful, and a little funny, which suits my personal taste. There is no need to read it with particularly strict historical logic. I haven't found any poisonous points so far. I hope the author will keep it up and don't put it on the shelves. I will definitely subscribe to all of them.

Waste of my money, writing to rely on the defense. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel

This is a new book for a newbie. The writing was not very good at first. Please forgive me for the shortcomings. The author is working hard to learn and make progress. Thank you all for your support, okay?

Alas, I don't want to read the 200 chapters. The plot is too slow. The author may want to write about a state where ordinary people in modern times are not so ambitious and can just muddle along. You can either stick to Lao Zhu till the end, or you can slowly train people to work alone. Read the book review results Both sides failed to please. The book review said that the last 20 people failed to rebel and the protagonist traveled back in time. But when Xu Yao died, you were so angry that you were so angry that it was like Lao Zhu. I thought I was starting to wake up. If I can't fuck you Lao Zhu, how can a Lan Yu still die? The result was that I was really angry for a few days. The book review said that Xiao Qing also died later. After seeing that the protagonist has not developed his own power in the 200th chapter, it can be said that the protagonist is still alone now, just a coolie of Lao Zhu. The book review said that the protagonist was squeezed by Lao Zhu like a clown. I originally wanted to come here to review the book to find the motivation to read it, but all of them were just complaints, which also saved me from wasting my book money, so I gave up.

The author is new, so please forgive me if there are any bad things in my writing. If you have any suggestions or comments, please reply to this post. To avoid affecting other people's perceptions, please do not open new posts. Thank you for your support. The author will accept it humbly and learn to improve in future writing. The published chapters will not be revised to avoid revision failure.

It's so painful to see that it's based on identification.

To be honest, the author, you should change the ending. I feel uncomfortable and uncomfortable for the readers. To be honest, I want to scold the author for the first time after reading a novel in so many years. Your novel is a precedent for me. The previous ones are all good, but this ending, Cao Mu Ma😡😡😡😡😡😡[fn= 47]😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡[f n=47]😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

The author is a good author and knows that producing things requires not only drawings but also qualified materials and production processes.