Fairy Tail: This Demon Is Not Too Cold

The writing style is excellent, and it doesn't look like a newbie. The author's current performance seems to be not very good, which should be related to the starting arrangement. I think the advantage of this book is that the battle scenes are well described and the plot design is also good. However, the beginning lacks explosive points and the rhythm is a bit strange. It can be seen that the author wanted to set up a foreshadowing and added a lot of twists and turns in the middle, but the game in this novice village did take too long, and he did not return to the guild until chapter 26. Generally speaking, the main characters of Fairy Tail fics enter the guild in the first few chapters, so that they can interact with more popular characters later on. This is what fics read. If you don't have a fan base, it's really easy to take pictures like this. If you spend two or three chapters at the beginning to fight the mobs, let the protagonist pretend to be fierce, and then return to the guild and use the first 20 chapters of this book as his next mission, the perception may be better. As for the plug-in, since I don't know the author's outline setting, I can only give a brief opinion. I have played Devil May Cry 5, so I know the approximate weapon capabilities. The protagonist can use the Yama Sword at the beginning. According to what the author wrote, it can even open space channels. Isn't this a bit too strong? According to the author's plot design, this is indeed the only way to save the girl. In other words, it is precisely because the protagonist has the Yama Sword that the author designed this plot, but this thing should be a late-stage equipment in terms of level. Maybe I didn't look carefully. If the protagonist has no restrictions on using the Yama Sword, why did he use Crimson Queen and Azure Rose to fight Cain before? Doesn't he not like to repair things? The protagonist should be able to continuously obtain other weapons in the future. For reference, Devil May Cry should be erupted from different BOSSs. But with the Yama Sword in hand, other weapons can only be used to increase the protagonist's magic power, because what the Yama Sword cannot solve, other weapons will certainly not be able to solve. Of course, the above are all minor issues. What I care about most is that the author's protagonist refers to the setting of Brother V and divides himself. But why did the demon side take away the other two legendary magic swords and left the Yan Demon Sword? It feels like another foreshadowing, but it is really difficult to understand here. If you feel that the opponent is too strong after all three magic swords are taken away, you can use the method in the book and find a reason to let the opponent throw one out and let the protagonist pick it up. The Yan Demon Sword represents initiative. To be honest, a boss holding the Yan Demon Sword poses a higher threat than a boss holding a Spartan or a rebellious one, because you don't know when the opponent will appear in front of you, and you can't just run away if you want. I would like to add a purely subjective opinion. The protagonist is 13, which is a bit too young. Although many Fairy Tail fans start with children, I think it is easier to bring in the game when it is set to 16 or 17 years old, and the age is not a problem, just like Lacusa. Finally, after reading this, should this book have a single heroine named Erza? If it is not recommended that the second heroine appear quickly, otherwise readers will easily misunderstand it. I hope the author can maintain his status. This book is indeed one of the best written in Fairy Tail fandom. Once again, the above are all my subjective opinions. I hope it will be helpful to the author. If you have different opinions, please discuss them rationally. 🙂

The description of character interaction has a classical beauty

In Brother V's childhood, you can refer to this for the protagonist's image

The biggest problem with this book is that it is not detailed enough. It is not detailed where it should be, and it lacks more detail where it should be skipped. Cain at the beginning was like, it took too long

How does Jellal and Erza deal with each other? Can the author reply? This is important to me. If they still look like in the anime, I will withdraw. I really don't like Jellal😆😆😆

Fairy Tail. There are demons. No one cares about them. Forgot? Just too weak.

The author, Quanqin, ran away after eating

I think Fairy Tail's collaboration with Black Clover is better

Okay, except for the beginning and helping Mirajane to be a bit verbose, it's okay. I hope Ulrutia won't die. If Jellal dies, he will die. The most disgusting person in Fairy Tail.

He ran away against the will of heaven, and the eunuch dog had to die miserably.

To be honest, I came here for Erza and Lucy. After all, the heroine has the most plot. It's a pity, I hope the more you write, the better 🙂

The combat power is a little bit low. You can dimensional cut without becoming a demon. After transforming into a demon, you can't speed pass anyone. Let's have a real demon. It's still the v version. There are still two of the three little ones that have not been collected. They are already invincible even before they have been combined with the other vassals. The protagonist's combat power explodes too fast.

The Erza Miraje is portrayed very well. I hope she doesn't give her daughter away.

When I watched the time-travel episode a few years ago, I had an idea. The protagonist was a local (or a time-traveler who didn't know the plot) and the protagonist had the fighting style of Vongola I. And considering that Fairy Tail's martial arts level was higher, I thought that the protagonist could use the seven kinds of flames. Mainly because of the temperament of I, plus the era he lived in, it felt very suitable for Fairy Tail! I just don't have the writing power to produce that kind of effect! In my conception, the protagonist is the kind of big brother who can take care of everyone (not a social big brother) I once saw someone who wrote about the ability to reach Fairy Tail in ten lifetimes, but that person didn't write it down, and he probably gave up because he felt that the combat power was not up to the line! But fortunately, that person didn't write the kind of temperament I wanted, so it's not a pity!

I put a plastic chair here

Why the hell is this an inexplicable fantasy again? Isn't the protagonist of the fantasy Mirajane? Why is there a protagonist again? What is this inexplicable thing? Is it a fantasy or the protagonist who was not separated from four hundred years ago? Inexplicably, he and Mira became brothers and sisters, and they have no shit to eat?

In my impression, most of the powerful demons in modern times in the story were created by Zeref, right? (But I seem to have read somewhere that Zeref also had "demon" creatures before. But I think it should be seen in some wild fan) I just read the fourth or fifth chapter of this book and three demons appeared. Is this a fusion of the worldview and a bunch of original demons?

Author, will the heroine accept Lucy?

Not bad, but don't be a eunuch