A Middle-Aged Man Who Wants to Go Home in the Digimon World

Personally, I feel that the main character is too cowardly. He doesn't fight well at all. He doesn't even have a name. Although I made up the name Nanren in my mind, there are too many reminiscence scenes. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

I was a little confused when I read it. I thought it was going to be a Digimon story with a partner, but it turned out that I was going to strengthen the Tamer himself. In that case, wouldn't it be okay to just write about a different world? Why bother with the subject of Digimon?

After reading it forcefully, I feel that the author tried hard to write it well. But maybe the author paid too much attention to bringing it into reality, and it felt like he was enjoying himself. In fact, I feel like I don't have to force the writing to be deep. This is Zi Gongxiang's animation, so why not make it more relaxed! Reality is already very depressing, why not bring in the psychology of childhood and write in a childlike style? Chapter 71 I saw the traditional Chinese three souls and seven souls, and I felt very disconnected! Extremely divisive! ! ! The digital world can use codes, use 01, and use hexadecimal systems. Even if it is explained by the emotional module of Transformers, it should not be explained in terms of three souls and seven souls! Ghosts in my childhood are monsters, but ghosts in China are just ghosts! The soul of the little life is the soul! Summary -----The depth is there, but the stitching elements are not right! The author has too many subjective factors and insufficient description of the group portraits. It feels like the protagonist is a coward and is forced to moan when he is not sick.

I'm a bit confused now. I tend to turn into Abelmon (it doesn't have to be the Ultimate), and I can follow the Vampire Demonmon to smuggle in. Everyone has different ideas. Come on, write the digital world in your heart.

To be honest, it's actually okay. I can see that I remember all the tips for fighting very well. It means that the male protagonist is mentally retarded and gives you some eye drops from time to time, just like he insists on stuffing some papa in your chicken soup.

The author chooses a full family of loyal beasts as his partner?

Brothers generate electricity for love. It is difficult to achieve results in this book. On all websites, most people say they hate Long Aotian, but whenever you see someone being wronged, just come out and jump on the street. Use your IQ as the core and relatives as the radius to output. It can be seen that I want to write my own life insights, not that kind of template, but it is really difficult. When I wrote it, I also wanted to lay the groundwork, and then people started outputting like crazy. Then ran away. The reason why a template is a template is that it lasts forever. Anyway, keep it up!

Can you stop recalling the past in reality? The protagonist is only in his 30s, which is the golden stage of a person's life. He is not a 60-year-old man who has a cold and is sad. I don't know if it is a problem with the author's writing. When he meets a stronger person, he is particularly useless. When he meets a weak person, he recalls the gangster state of his childhood and feels very self-satisfied. Also, can you stop writing about your first love? This is the type of boiling sheep on the Internet. After reading the first 50 chapters, the overall feeling to me is that it is not a loser, but a loser. One is that the knowledge of the university teacher is not reflected at all. It is completely like a gangster who has not graduated from junior high school and is working hard in society. He has no knowledge and is proficient in human relations and corporate culture. This is quite encouraging to quit.

It is recommended that the previous peeing and peeing plot be condensed/cut at least in half, otherwise there will be no one left. I even doubt that the author has ever brought in your protagonist? In addition, the author underestimates human nature. When survival is not guaranteed, there is nothing that cannot be attacked by a snot beast with eyes that can talk, especially when the opponent is still an enemy. (Can't imagine empathizing with a ball of gelled snot)

Why are you starting to write the rest of the plot? I haven't written the front yet, so I don't have any expectations for the future plot.

Maybe those who pursue the invincible flow of upgrading and fighting monsters are not used to watching it. But for me of a certain age, the pacing and content are just right. However, the traditional way of writing is indeed at a disadvantage in the market. I hope the author can persevere and finish writing a complete book, and his writing skills will improve a lot.

Trivia: those born in the 1990s are already over 30 and have reached middle age 😭

After reading it, I don't think there is anything wrong with it. What others think is the ancient style of speaking of poisonous lobsters and cuttlefish is actually a bit interesting, and the Japanese accent is quite interesting. Relatively speaking it's pretty good. It may also be that I have read too many novels and my poison resistance has been maxed out. Come on, author!

If there is a difference between being a reader and being a writer of online articles, no one told me that all red envelopes will be snatched away by robots... I learned another new knowledge.

Maybe it's because I don't play games, so I can't understand this golden finger.

It's basically not a fanfic, it's the style of the anime "Bump Hero", so don't get your hopes up if you read the Digimon fanfic, but I still strongly recommend you to watch it. It's very interesting. It has a semi-fantasy, semi-realistic venting based on reality that is divorced from reality. People who like Bump Hero or understand the undercurrent of Bump Hero must not miss it.

Just these few chapters, the donkeys of the production team can't rest like this. Others think we look down on them. Please update soon.

The writing is actually okay, but the pace is a bit slow. The most troublesome thing is that the protagonist is in his thirties, and he only has the IQ of a three-year-old from time to time, which is difficult to resist. It doesn't have to be how powerful the protagonist is, but at least he shouldn't be too mentally retarded and just have normal cognition. But now even the protagonist's cognition has been challenged. To be honest, it's doubtful how he survived in his thirties.

What happened? I became a thief again and got injured after stealing something. Does the landlord need to pay compensation?

It looked okay at first, but the further you look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. You know clearly that some parts are very poisonous, but you don't want to change it. The male protagonist doesn't even have a name. Every day, this man and that man play with that snot monster all the time. I don't know what he is doing throughout the game, and the Digimon machine is useless.

It's been so long, I don't know how much benefit this book has brought to you, I thought you were a eunuch

Can I still read this without regular updates? 🙂 I came here from the book list, but no one even commented.