Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Huo Yuhao's Heavenly Eye

One thing to say. The writing is okay. The biggest poisonous point of the previous book is that Tang San always calculated the protagonist's growth. It's disgusting. It is recommended that a cheat appears or the world of gods is isolated due to the turbulence of time and space that the protagonist travels through. Wait until you become a god before opening a copy of Tang San. Otherwise, it would be disgusting to be plotted by the God King and not be able to defeat him.

I've ordered them all. I want all the heroines, and they're all in the harem. You can't be worse than Tang Wei. Write it according to the patron saint of the Chinese zodiac.

Since there is no emotional drama between Xiao Xiao and He Caitou, let's accept Xiao Xiao as well. We already have Yu Jie and girls, so accepting a loli is not too much.🙂

The homogeneity is too serious. You don't need to buy many chapters. You can know the general content just by looking at the title and prelude. The taste is very different from the most popular Dou Er books. In fact, many low-popular Douji fans have recently developed new flavors. It is precisely because of the low popularity that the author can play freely. On the contrary, such relatively popular ones have restricted their imagination.

I skipped it to the end. I won't talk about the writing style. I mentioned it in a post before. Many plots are very bloated. You have to write a few sentences to express your meaning when there is no need to write. It feels like we are talking instead of reading, you know. I wonder if others feel this way. Many times when I read this book, I felt that I was not reading a book, but talking to others. Of course, there is also a lot of progress. The writing style of Sesu has improved very quickly. At the beginning, I obviously felt that the emotional scene was awkward, but it got much better later and looked very enjoyable. This is worthy of praise, and there is obvious improvement. 😀 The biggest problem is the writing. It depends on you whether you can change it or not. I feel that this is a matter of style and it depends on you.

I'm very angry. What I've been thinking is Huo Yuhao's truest thought. It's okay to kill the white tiger, civet, and Yi tribes. Let's see if the author can write it out.

I watched the author increase the number of female protagonists from three to six, which really spoils the readers. It's very popular and readers like it, so we'll be satisfied 😍

There is something wrong with the plot of Chapter 145. It lacks logic. Suddenly, a Zhu family member who can fuse with Dai Yueheng's martial spirit appears. Haven't you tested the fusion degree before? If you are a six-year-old child who has just awakened and has soul power, you can still accept it, but you are already fourteen or fifteen years old. Everything serves the plot, right? Logic is not so important.

To be honest, why did the heroine choose Ma Xiaotao? Choose Wang Dong'er, Auspicious Beast, Meng Hongchen, Tangerine, don't they taste great?

The character of the protagonist is not established, and he has no personality charm compared to the original grilled fish. The biggest problem is that the writing method is a bit single-threaded. For example, when writing the game, many chapters did not include emotional advancement or upgrading to become stronger.