Mystery Revival: Evil Spreads Across the World

The biggest flaw in fan fiction is its portrayal of indigenous people.

I've read over ten chapters, and haven't finished the rest, but here are my initial impressions! First, the native inhabitants are a major flaw! Second, the plot regarding the protagonist's control of the first two demons lacks concrete details, leaving the reader confused about how he managed to control them! Third, the protagonist's personality is unlikable.

Having read up to chapter thirteen, I'm certain this is a brainless novel. The protagonist isn't a true ghost tamer at all. He ignores the problem of his own vengeful spirit resurfacing and has time for all this social practice, constantly pulling off ridiculous, cheesy attempts at cleverness. Author, I know you're angry when you see the above, but don't be angry with me first, haha ​​😄😄.

I only read a few chapters, but overall the protagonist seemed quite foolish, not as clever as Yang Jian.

A friend asked me a very interesting question: if Zhang Yi's consciousness from the previous timeline completely replaced Zhang Yi's consciousness in this timeline, would he be considered dead or alive? Feel free to share your thoughts.

I couldn't even finish six chapters. Fanfiction without knowing the plot can't get past chapters 30 or 40 until he regains his memories. Fanfiction is two major poisons: not knowing the plot and amnesia.

The protagonist encounters ghosts every day, and sometimes several ghosts in a single day. The plot also feels a bit chaotic.

As a novice writer, there might be some disjointed parts in the early chapters. I was writing while attending school, so the plot might not have been very engaging. I'm gradually making adjustments now, and I'll try my best to make the later chapters satisfy everyone. The plot should improve recently, and I'll continue writing diligently. I've been conceiving this book for a long time, so please feel free to offer any suggestions; I'll humbly accept them.

I couldn't continue after reading four chapters; it was too chaotic, and I hadn't researched the original novel's setting of the Ghost Realm.

I'm abandoning this story after just one chapter. Who reads indigenous fiction these days?