I'm Just in Kindergarten, and the System Says I'm Taking the Martial Arts College Entrance Examination?

I would like to ask if the plot of Goryeo was written by the author Fei Lie Yezi? First of all, why are there so many descriptions of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers? This kind of description that looks down on the protagonist and then moans and groans lasts for dozens of chapters of the Bull Demon. The entire Goryeo plot is all about this description. No, I am not saying that it cannot be written, and I dare not say on behalf of other readers that I don't like to read it. But your eyes are tired of seeing all the descriptions of the Bull Demon, you know? Secondly, do you think your plot is reasonable? At the beginning, I asked whether Ren Daozhi would cry in elementary school. I also said that it is just a matter of time and effort. But what did you say in the end? Eyes? Okay, then I will obey you. The protagonist has martial arts energy and has evolved. I think your protagonist has that whim and intuition. Then, everything is over. As far as you are concerned, in fact, the plan of the cult leader has always been under the control of the protagonist. The protagonist is using his plan, isn't it? Do you believe this? Let me ask you, wasn't the protagonist of your previous plot confused? You have to show off your tricks, are you a DC screenwriter? Let me ask you, is the protagonist the Laughing Bat? Nothing was shown in the previous plot. In the end, everything is under control. I'm not saying that you can't create a strategizing protagonist, but you have to show it in the plot and shape it through a plot, right? At the end of the plot, you finally said, "Hey, my protagonist wins a decisive battle thousands of miles away. Do you think readers can believe it and find it reasonable?" Then, may I ask who taught you how to organize the plot in this way? Every time I think about it, I feel that the plot is about to unfold, and I insert some so-called pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, or some daily routine. It's not that you can't write these plots, but you have to arrange them, right? Are you playing with me? Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to watch? Whenever I think the plot is about to advance, you start writing the so-called spiritual plot and daily plot. Logically speaking, these should be plots used to connect, foreshadow, and transition between the main plot stages. Then, how do you write it? Write a paragraph here and a paragraph there. The first time I read the book, I felt dizzy. I was so uncomfortable. I felt like I was holding back. Every time you can strangle my expectations for the plot to death. You feel that you are setting up and foreshadowing, right? And what I said before about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, you think you are suppressing first and then rising, right? Let me tell you, you can't use a technique indiscriminately in writing once you know it. I suggest you read the works of those literary giants and see how they use these techniques. Then you say that traditional literature has nothing to do with online literature, then you go and see how the great writers on the site use it So all the poisonous points in your plot come together to create the effect of one plus one is greater than two. I don't understand. Isn't it good for you to follow the rhythm of going to the martial arts school before the spiritual energy was revived? Let me ask you, what are you writing now, flying leaves? Skating? Or did you eat poisonous fungi?

A female protagonist watched 😍😍😍

The author's writing is pretty good, but the main character is too young, which makes readers feel less involved. The main character has just graduated from kindergarten in Chapter 80. The subject of spiritual energy recovery and children is still too niche. The author should try to balance the growth rate of the protagonist in the future. If it is too slow, no one will read it, and if it is too fast, it will easily collapse.

I feel like the writing is too detailed. I should take care of this in the early stage as soon as possible. It's boring to watch children playing around. It's already at the payment stage. It's not good if it's too watery, and it's watery where you can't see the end at a glance. If it doesn't feel better, most people will give up.

It's so funny. I just watched a bunch of them recently. The system was delayed. Here is a system that was advanced. Ha ha ha ha

I hope you can turn to the last page

Your past life, system world, and current life are all different, and the timelines are also different, but they are forcibly connected together, which looks a bit messy. I feel like it's better to have less pre-birth. If there are too many, it's easy to get confused.

No, this kind of routine is not written by no one. It is a daily routine in kindergarten. What can I see?

This system comes early when the protagonist is in kindergarten, and the mission rewards and so on are reasonable, but if the system does not come early, those mission rewards and so on are very unreasonable.

I just read the newly updated chapter. I want to ask, don't people in this world have blood circulation? 😰

Open a harem and write more emotional dramas

The subject matter is very novel, but the protagonist is too young to be involved at all, and it becomes boring afterward.

The pace is too slow, 68 pictures or a small kindergarten class? Do you really want to thank the elementary school, junior high school, high school and university? I can just get 10,000 pictures.

It's too boring, I don't have the patience to read it

It's such a strong anti-theft device. After searching online for a long time, it turns out that it's all anti-theft device. 😅

Can the author post more posts a day?

Indeed, I felt bored after watching it 🤫

The writing is good, the author is so awesome 😏

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