The Peerless Tang Sect's Xuan Ming Shakes the Sky

Shen Nong, it's not about the plot, but the information is not bad at all. He signed up for the supporting role, Xingluo royal family, surnamed Dai, and also created a dark gold fearclaw bear martial spirit and a sect. At present, I find these two points intolerable, and the content is also very out of the ordinary. He may write a lot of things in one chapter.

The rhythm is a bit chaotic😰

The author's writing about Xu Sanshi is good. I hope he won't stop writing more.

I hope it will be updated soon. Don't wait.

Do the heroines include Snow Emperor and Zhang Lexuan?

Where did the Netherworld White Tiger come from? He was a forced character

Shouldn't we use amplifying soul skills in the early stage? 😰😰

Junk original novel Xu Sanshi is better than you

It's really awkward, there are many typos, the rhythm is confusing, and there are inexplicable plot additions, which makes it even more of a failure.

Personal opinion: When I first read the cool novels about "Tang San's Small Group" in Dou 1 and Dou 2, I could still do it without thinking. After reading more than 10 books, my level of reading has improved a lot. Dou 2 is a pretty good novel written by San Shao, before the plot of "The Valley of Love" appeared. The main shortcoming of this book is that under the "2 settings + plot", it feels relatively flat, and I don't feel like I want to continue reading. After reading Chapter 5, I quickly read through the next 30 chapters without seeing any surprises. I hope the author can work hard and develop his writing skills as soon as possible.