Tokyo: I Loaded the Love Advice System

How should I put it, the setting is quite novel, and the character design of the heroine can also be said to be well written. Originally, if the author had good writing skills and the plot was handled well, it would have been a good work, but it was too cliche, and it felt like just one word, awkward. The three major poisonous points are the mentally retarded supporting characters, the dull protagonist, and the embarrassing plot. This guy has written it all right. Let me explain: First of all, the first thing that makes people feel poisonous is not the plot or the mentally retarded supporting characters, but the protagonist. The protagonist gave me only one perception: a diner who knows nothing but the system. This was reflected in the exam plot for the first time, which made people feel that he was eager to show off after winning the golden finger. It made me feel that he was a fool for the first time. After reading the story of Hayakawa's foster cat for the second time, I no longer thought the protagonist was stupid. Instead, I began to think, "Ah, this author can only write this kind of character." Why, because what he writes is like a fool, shaping for the sake of shaping. In terms of supporting roles, the heroine is the only bright spot. The writing is indeed good, and the heroine's image is very vivid and vivid. However, the others are terrible, especially Mr. Hayakawa. Let me describe it: the first time they met, he was "simple, gentle, and caring about others" (the gym scene). The second time they met, he was "venomous, and he would spit on me no matter what." The third time, "I had a crush on the male protagonist." The fourth time, "I completely fell in love with him" (without any foreshadowing, I suddenly liked him) 😥😥😥 What kind of brain circuit could write such a plot? I don't want to type anymore. Typing is too troublesome. All in all, one sentence reveals the author's attributes as a dream boy (this is very hard to hear). As for this book, everyone should not read it. It is a waste of time.

After starting to elect members, the protagonist is indecisive and is not as good as a girl. He is a good boy and a good book.

It doesn't look good. I suggest you update a few more pictures to attract readers. After all, if the quality is not up to standard, you can rely on quantity. I'll give you the number. I'll update it ten times a day.

We are not afraid that green tea has no bottom line, but we are afraid that green tea has a conscience. The little green tea pear mulberry is so cute

The logic doesn't make sense and the plot is difficult to follow. Very toxic, I ran away, I won't reply to robot comments anyway

My blood pressure rose while watching it, the supporting characters looked like idiots from beginning to end. There is no logic at all, and the male protagonist is really bad and very poisonous.

Anyway, after watching a paragraph, I thought: Why does the protagonist do this? Isn't this a stupid coin? Why is this woman doing this? What does it have to do with you? Anyway, the plot is the same as ten years ago. Conflict for the sake of conflict, slap in the face for the sake of slap in the face. But it is not popular now. I read light novels to watch Se Se and watch daily life. What I need is relaxation. Anyway, someone will come out to create conflicts in two or three chapters. The protagonist is not solving it well enough, which makes you more and more frustrated as you read. Then you will subscribe to a chapter in advance. Features: Come here to curse

After careful analysis, this work contains common elements of ancient urban cool novels: 1. A plug-in that is highly linked to female characters; 2. A wealthy lady who cheats; 3. Pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, and then get slapped in the face; 4. Culture, sports, entertainment and politics are multi-faceted, and you will succeed as soon as you start; 5. No maintenance or cost is required, and it can always be used Direct and unconditional use of favors, backers and younger brothers; 6. No matter how well-known no one is, no one can remember the name and appearance of the protagonist, unless they need to show off; If you are really hungry and anxious, it is not impossible to watch without thinking, but the male protagonist is really disgusting. He opens a harem and grinds away. The plug-in disappears in the middle and late stages, and his existence is almost invisible.

Ah, my brain, the protagonist has to be helped to walk even when he is being attacked, but he can still save others. Author, can't you change it? It's not extraordinary, don't you think it's outrageous?

The theme is good and the writing is good, but it is a bit deliberately embarrassing. It is okay to run after class in the evening, but it happened to be raining and fell down. Although it is for the sake of contact, it is a bit mindless. Maybe I personally prefer to quietly transform and surprise everyone, so I am a bit picky, but I will still follow the book. I hope the author can take off.

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This is the first male protagonist in Qidian that made me feel sick and disgusted

The setting is still good, but the development of events in the plot is a bit deliberately manufactured, which is very strange. He just had to go for a run on a rainy day and then fell ill. The heroine Huali took care of her, and the relationship between the two further improved. It was too deliberate and cliche. Then in order to improve his swordsmanship skills, he asked a bad boy to beat the male protagonist. This is okay, but the key point is that the female protagonist is here early. She is still the daughter of a congressman. The congressman's daughter will not have a car to pick her up and bodyguards to protect her. This must be used to improve the heroine's favor. Moreover, the system usually improves abilities or gives money. It is very strange to buy a house directly. How can it be solved when others ask?

Shiori's character design took a look at Yukino, and I got a little tired after reading too much. There are really ten love books with this kind of character. On the contrary, Kari's character design is a highlight, very vivid, and the male protagonist is also weak in comparison. Like most romance novels, the male protagonist is just a tool who follows the plot. Regarding what Kari does, after reading it, I felt very good, and it was well written, but the male protagonist was worried that he would not be rewarded if he was really liked. , This is a worrying aspect, but it can't just be this aspect. I think most people will be touched by the kindness of girls like Huali. The male protagonist's setting is not dark and cruel, he is an ordinary person. I feel that there should be some psychological description to deepen the male protagonist's character, instead of quickly pushing the plot away, or simply ignoring it for the sake of plot development. Such a male protagonist lacks the humanity that people can relate to. Romance novel? It's all about the people.

What should I say? I read a dozen chapters. It can be said that the author's writing style is still not good. The supporting cast's intelligence is off the charts. And the protagonist seems to be a waste. Totally no brainer. Not only the supporting characters' intelligence is not good, but the protagonist's intelligence is also not good. Nor is it okay to doubt the author's intelligence.

Let me just say a few words If you don't use your brain, you can indeed read it. The system setting and character image are quite lovable, provided that you ignore the villain But the writing style is limited and the character portrayal is relatively thin. Considering the first book, it is understandable. But it is a bit speechless, just like a light novel. Tnd Long Aotian's routine makes me very capable. The IQ of the protagonist and the supporting villain are at the same level, so they are not too separated. The protagonist can pretend to be a hero and save the beauty, but the villain has a low IQ and does things too low-key, which makes him look disgusting, just like a piece of shit, and you have to step on him. There are several good-quality light novels in recent times. Some of them don't have villains. Some of them have villains, although they are antagonistic, but they don't stop doing things. In fact, light novels don't have so much pretentiousness and slaps. People who read this just like the relaxed feeling. However, writing about the quiet feeling of time requires experience and level. Generally speaking, the theme of system light novels is to save all kinds of loli girls, sisters, aunts and wives. The novel relies on the system ability value and the plot between the characters. There is no need to make it so bitter and bitter To summarize, you can read it, but I look forward to the author's progress and changes,

What the hell is this book about? There are poisonous points one after another. If you don't rush in, who will rush in? If you slip away, this book won't be good.

After watching 111, I feel that it has become more and more popular since it was released. The subsequent conflicts are simply forcibly created. It feels like everyone has been dehumanized. The characters portrayed before are no longer good. I asked the protagonist to take the eighth-dan exam, but everyone knows that the reform has been implemented. In front of the public, the deputy referee said that the protagonist is eighth-dan, but I still don't believe it. Pretending for the sake of showing off, I'm getting more and more novice questions, I can't stand it anymore, so I slipped away, bye

Why is it fat? I really can't read on. When I say lose weight, you lose weight.

Since running for parliament, the protagonist has become mentally retarded. What is the latest chapter about? The protagonist can't tell that it is Lily, and the sister can't tell what Kanbara is thinking. You wrote about these two people in the early stage as human beings, but now they are purely intellectual.

After reading the previous free chapters, I feel like I can tolerate everything else, but the portrayal of my childhood sweetheart is a bit disgusting.

How should I put it? Just have fun in your free time without thinking about it. Later, you can directly tame the gold-worshiping green plum into the wooden hook star and get angry. It's very refreshing.

After reading Chapter 128, the male protagonist actually gave his first kiss to the teacher 🤫🤫 I can only say that I am really hungry. Let's eat something good. Doesn't sister Sakurai smell good? This kind of Neptune is too discouraging 😅

I have been reading all the way, but after more than 380 chapters, I feel that it is too bland, and the more I read, the more boring it becomes. The protagonist is now climbing up, and he writes all about this kind of thing, but what readers want to read is a love story.

It's all the same, Why can't we have a superpower? Build a cultivator

Why does your latest update feel like it's coming to an end?

I feel like it's gotten better recently. The author could consider balancing the emotional and career lines. Some of the emotional lines have jumped over recently.

Author, you can finally be a human being, and the rosehip sauce is worth it

It was quite uncomfortable to watch, even though I didn't watch it for long