I Can Sneak Across the Wild World

Well, I've read most of it, and then I just couldn't help but want to complain about it. The first few pictures looked pretty good at first, but in the middle, they were grinding, and all kinds of women threw themselves into their arms. I couldn't figure it out, and it was a waste of time. When I saw Chapter 35, I had only practiced five levels before I improved to one level. I was also convinced. It was always wasted on women. It's not that women are bad. This article about cultivating immortals does not mean that there should be a female protagonist, but I think the large amount of your writing on such a trivial matter is a bit putting the cart before the horse, and it does not look smooth at all. Then it is useless and cliché, and then it is dark. And you can be cautious about this, but there is no need to think so darkly. When you are admitted to the Taoist Academy, you will definitely have to expose your genius. Isn't this going to be highlighted step by step? Then I hid everything, even from my parents and teachers. Well, this is a bit of self-entertainment and self-doubt. It feels like you are the only smart person in the world, and it also feels like you are the only one in the world living here, and you still pretend to be straight. This is my personal feeling. Let me comment on my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. I'll save my life.

Happy, Chapter 2 is a plug-in. In Chapter 34, I have only practiced five levels of qi. After a while, I have only raised one level. How powerful is the eight-hundred-year-old Zhuguo👍The foundation will explode and die. Then, after raising two levels of spiritual consciousness 🤭, let me tell you what the relationship is between the protagonist and the snake. Feedback, binding, or one soul and two bodies. A low-end prime minister and a low-end martial arts cultivator, right? You can practice a thousand pounds of qi, build a foundation and crack rocks, build a rockery with golden elixir, and break a small river with Nascent Soul. Catch up on the progress, don't write eight hundred chapters to break through the golden elixir

I don't want to read it like this. In the original world, I am stuck in the original world, writing about various women, pretending like idiots that I don't understand the intentions of the female protagonist. No one with any brains would think this way. I won't talk about these. It is obvious that it can develop quickly, but I have to stick to it. Then the sense of expectation and the sense of satisfaction that you introduced and wrote did not give me at all. It would be nice if you write more. Now the first 50 monthly votes are not a problem at all. It is so frustrating to write about such a good subject. I am really impressed. I will see if you can write the male protagonist later. If you can't write it, just abandon it. Personally, if you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Let's change the prehistoric to barbaric. Is this worthy of the prehistoric? ? ?

Nascent Soul Divine Sense and Qi Cultivation. Who do you think? Divine Sense can kill the golden elixir, so it is useless to practice Qi Cultivation. I have never seen such a suppression of Cultivation.

I would like to ask all you Shen Nong bosses, is this the kind of book where the super loser protagonist rises from the academy and pretends to be B-like without any brains or logic?

It's a bit uncomfortable, just like the protagonist has a golden mountain, but can only cut wood on the golden mountain, but there is no wood in the golden mountain 😰 An uncomfortable group! There is nothing exciting about it 😒 and it is difficult to create any desire to look forward to the subsequent plot. I hope the author can write better and better, otherwise it will be a bit difficult for this book to attract readers! Come on

It's not so much the prehistoric times as it is the wild wilderness. It's quite petty. Look at the post-apocalyptic prehistoric world next door. It's all a corner place. The gap between it and reality is very big. Yours is basically just a little bit of aura or something like that. It's too simple.

Author, please don't write emotional lines, write female supporting characters well, and make them elegant and independent. They are both sassy and beautiful, so don't write them as if they are licking dogs. Since the protagonist has written two ambiguous female characters, you either have to go all in and take them all in, or turn into a bulldozer, or follow the harem style, or choose them all and write the emotional line, single heroine, or explicitly reject them. It doesn't matter. It is forced into the plot without reasonable plot arrangements, and the emotional intelligence is lowered at critical times. The emotional line is ignored. The writing is not the same as 4, and it is not interesting.

You can write that you have poor qualifications, but you can't write that you've reached the prehistoric level and still can't get promoted, prehistoric! The spiritual energy standard can support one of the seven saints of heaven, dozens of quasi-sages, and thousands of great ones. In a place where even the saints cannot move in the timeline, the density must be terrifying. If you can absorb the spiritual energy, you don't need to inhale it. It can help you transform it into a standard that adapts to that density of spiritual energy in a few days. Don't you need to breathe while practicing? Can't even breathe through your pores?

Damn it, after so many chapters, it's still a period of Qi training! The pressure is too strong

Since the protagonist wants to be a straight man, there should be fewer emotional scenes, and there should be less dialogue between the two of them who are not on the same channel. They are both cultivators, and even if they don't have a tacit understanding, they can't guess what the other person means. This kind of dialogue appears once or twice, which is quite new, but a few times is a bit too much.

Don't be fooled by the name of the novel, it's just a romance novel

Look at the title of the book. You can sneak across the wilderness. . Can that thing be prehistoric?

I haven't read the book, but I read the comments. I went to the ancient world to practice qi. If I sucked in the innate spiritual energy, I might burst. What is the ancient world? It's like the sea pouring back. I can break through in minutes. No matter how bad the qualifications are, they will be improved after being washed by the innate spiritual energy.

You'd better stop writing about the prehistoric era, your combat power has been lowered by you😂 The situation you wrote about was about the time of the dynasty The combat power in the barbaric era was not that low

I feel that modern people are plotting against each other. Be more generous and write less about those inner dramas. There is something wrong with this person. His self, which everyone thinks is so dark, must not be a good thing. He can gradually change his character. It feels like he is not a cultivator, but a reserve for the underworld.

After starting the prehistoric era and still leveling up like this, it's unlikely that there will be a nuclear bomb saint behind him, right?

I just saw it. The training speed is too slow. The Qi training will not last for 200 chapters. Will the training speed become faster as the spiritual consciousness becomes stronger? Even if a true immortal is reincarnated into a person with four spiritual roots, he will still have to go to jail during the Qi training period.

The further you get to the back, the more you want to jump. The plot of the real world is cliche, and it tends to write dramas about women. Not interesting.

The dangers that Foundation Establishment doesn't face are all golden elixirs or Yuanying. After reading Chapter 98, I feel a little breathless.

The setting of this book is very good. I have read Chapter 121. It is a poisonous point so far, but it does not affect the fairy grass. This book is not suitable for readers of Shuangwen (the setting is rigorous and the upgrade is too slow), nor is it suitable for readers who skip chapters (it is interlocking and you can't understand it in one jump).

The update is too slow. I started reading the book on October 13th, and it was only today, December 11th, that I updated chapter 57.

No wonder there are so few updates, and they don't update from time to time. It turns out that these two books were written at the same time.

Why is there a repetitive section in the middle?