One Hundred Mes in the Infinite World

Why do some people think that the weasel loves his brother? You killed his whole family and made his life worse than death. You destroyed his entire family and made him live in hatred for most of his life. You can even use other gods to control its consciousness to distort his three views and let him kill his entire family. Is this love? Is this worrying that the owner has no dog to control him? Let's train the dog for them And isn't Shisui his best brother? Your best brother was killed in front of you and had his eyes gouged out. Your first reaction was not to avenge him, but to kill your brother's whole family. How unlucky must he be to have a brother like you And what I can't understand the most Where does that inexplicable loyalty come from? The family parents gave birth to you, raised you, cultivated your knowledge and talents, provided you with food, drink, and food to protect you as you grew up. From the beginning to the end, they never did anything sorry for you. On the contrary, Konoha has always rejected you, discriminated against you and smeared you. I have been thinking about how to persecute you and how to treat you all day long. The murderous hand, I have never done anything worthy of you from the beginning to the end, and yet, you can still lick your face and treat me like a dog And the reason for killing the whole family was that you thought the rebellion would not succeed. At that time, there were three pairs of kaleidoscopes and a bunch of jounin, Shisui's eyes were both gods from other gods, so the success rate was quite high So what if he failed? , If the third generation wants to maintain his image as a good old man, it is impossible to exterminate all of you. At least those pregnant women, those babies, and those ordinary tribesmen who have no talent and pose no threat to him, they can survive Besides, even if you don't plan to rebel, show your blood chakra eyes and act like you dare to touch me and I will die with you, With the attitude of everyone dying together, the high-ranking officials in Konoha will never dare to touch you. It's like there is a group of bullies in the village who bully you all day long. They occupy your land today, snatch your cattle tomorrow, and kill your people the day after tomorrow Your family can't bear it anymore, and you will fight them desperately when you go up. As a result, your eldest son doesn't know whether he is a masochist or has some serious illness. Suddenly, he had a sudden brain attack and went to help these bullies kill his parents and wipe out his whole family. He even cared about his enemy's lack of a dog to command him, and personally trained his younger brother into a dog for his enemy to command. This is not the most important thing. The key is that after doing these things, he could still be very moved. The most puzzling thing to me is that there are so many people who brag about weasels. I can even compare his image of a man who killed his relatives with the anti-Japanese hero. The prototype of this guy is the murderer near Kishimoto's house. A Japanese devil is still a murderer. What qualifications can he compare with the anti-Japanese hero? How can he talk about his spirit, his beliefs and how great his ideals are? Except for the theory of victim guilt, I really don't see anything else in him.

Kind of like a stream of consciousness. There's something about it that I just don't know when he's going to show up. I always feel that there are some things that the author thought of in his mind, but he did not write them down in words. Personally, I feel that it is very difficult to understand, especially for people like me who have never watched Jojo.

First of all, let me praise you. The idea is quite good (although many people have written about this setting). You have also written the unique battle of wits unique to Jojo. There are very few Jojo fans who have written well at the beginning. I hope you continue to work hard and look forward to the next chapters. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. There is nothing wrong with the Naruto chapter. There are countless Naruto fans in Qidian. What you need to know is already known. I even completed other settings and plots of Naruto based on Qidian. The Jojo chapter is a bit problematic. As someone who has read the original work, I had a hard time reading it. The first person at the beginning is a bit like a Japanese light novel. I can understand it, but I am not used to it. For those who have not read the original work, the reading experience is a bit poor and inconsistent. It's a bit of a stream of consciousness, and the person is confused, sometimes in the first person and sometimes in the third person. Qidian's online novels still recommend that you use the third person, and state the settings that need to be mentioned, but don't be too wordy. The settings of fan works should also consider readers who have not read the original work (if you don't care about this group of people, just pretend that I didn't say it, although as an old two-dimensional person, I have read these). There is a lack of description of the scene, and there are too many psychological activities of the characters. To put it simply, it doesn't have the flavor of an ordinary online novel, it feels like reading a light novel. There is another problem. It is not watery enough, and the information density is a bit high (and it is a fan, so some of the information is compressed, making it confusing). For example, those settings, the remains of the saint, the Red Stone of Ai Zhe, Kaz, Ripple, the stand-in, etc., Jojo is actually not very popular in China, only those few memes are popular. It is estimated that not many people have actually read the original work, and there must be very few people who know the settings clearly. For example, Kaz needs the Ai Zhe Red Stone to evolve into the ultimate life form. Kaz's motive for finding the President was actually to obtain the Red Stone of Ai Zhe. If you write these things all at once, the information density is a bit high. Anyway, that's it, nothing else.

The Japanese speaking style is too serious, and it is difficult for ordinary readers to use it as a substitute for Shu Huang. It is even difficult to replace it. Why don't the author polish the character's speaking style? If your brain circuit matches the author's, you may like to read it, but you are not the first to create the brain-done mode in this book, so it is difficult to work on.

It's purely a stream of consciousness writing method. I assume that everyone has seen the anime works you mentioned. Those who haven't seen it would take it for granted that they can't understand what you are writing. It's purely a layman's writing method.

Analyze the reason why there are so few people in this book now: I always feel that it is because the world of JOJO has persuaded a lot of people to quit. In fact, it is written later It's pretty good, and the author has also worked hard on his writing, but the first world is really confusing. If I hadn't read this book after the author updated it for a while (updating the second world), I'm afraid I would have quit. The writing is indeed good, but for people like us who haven't read a few original works, it's really not very friendly. I don't mean anything else. I'm just here to analyze it. The author's follow-up is very good.

Is it my imagination? I feel like the ninja chapter is not as good as the first one.

I don't understand how you determine the ending. Those great Platinum King-level writers don't dare to say what the ending will be like. Their outlines will also be slightly changed bit by bit according to the author's requirements. At most, they only have a vague concept and grasp of the ending. You directly determine the outcome

Is this a new way of writing? So messy

He's the author, everyone, if you have anything to say, please feel free to say it!

I haven't read this book. The only one I've read before was a serialized series about traveling through 99 worlds at the same time.

Can someone explain to me what Wenqing is? I used to think it was nonsense, but I was fascinated by the comments.

My assessment is a bit abstract, especially for typewriters.

Has the author entered the palace? I saw the Dragon Clan in the back. Since I haven't seen the Dragon Clan, I didn't watch the Raising in the Back. When I looked at it today, I saw that there has been no update for 13 days. Is this a cut?

Brother, let's break it into paragraphs. You really have no desire for people to read this long paragraph.

In the picture of King of Ocean and Water, you are a water escape ninja. Why did you choose this name? I don't believe that the protagonist's water escape ninjutsu is more powerful than Senju Tobirama.

Jojo is not as famous as Naruto, but you are writing about The President, and the last two Jojos may be even less famous than Incombustibles. If you were writing about Dio or Liu Qiao, you may have hundreds of fans already. Don't underestimate the influence of Dio Ye and Wu Qiao.

Uchiha Yun has been almost molded, so why did he suddenly become a literary youth? He has already reached this point and should have figured it out by now.

No wonder no one opened it. The author was so moved that he let himself go.

To make the weasel suffer, you have to do this: "First control the Daimyo of the Fire Country, then kill all Konoha on the grounds that Konoha is too dangerous, and then make the Fire Country become stronger and stronger after Konoha is destroyed. In the process, the weasel cannot die enough to be able to clearly feel the outside world. You can cut off its five limbs and make a bottle man. This is the ultimate insult to it!" It is a belief! It's a sacrificial ascetic thing. It doesn't care about Sasuke. What it cares about is: "Ah~ I'm even willing to kill the entire clan for the sake of the village! Ah~ I'm so great! In order to make the village stronger, I want Sasuke to be Konoha's dog and then sacrifice myself in the end. Ah, I'm so great!" It is an extremely self-motivated thing.