Mortals Live Forever, the Story of Destiny Taoist Li Feiyu

Tested for poison. Death. You, a mortal practicing martial arts, learned spells without practicing Qi? ? Does a martial arts sect have immortality cultivation techniques? But no one practices at all? Doctor Mo knew how to find a few oxen and horses to test the technique. Jin Guangneng can fire a fireball, and the martial arts master kneels down and kowtows.

I've seen a lot of people squirting without even reading the book. I've read dozens of chapters now, and it's actually quite enjoyable. There's nothing particularly toxic about it so far. Anyway, I listen to the book, and I don't feel the urge to stop and squirt even halfway through. This can be regarded as clearing mines for fellow Taoists.

Han Li has been skinned by these authors. If I mean what if, if Han Li traveled to modern times, would he skinned these authors and refined their souls?😁

I thought the comment section on QQ Reading was already deserted, but it turns out it's not much better here... I'm just here to give my opinion. I saw the protagonist fighting with the magician to win a magic weapon from Tianlan Mountain. The description was much stronger in terms of strength than the funny description in the original work, such as the ability to weigh tens of thousands of pounds at a time. Anyway, I wrote 100 million catties. But if you think about it carefully, author, have you considered that 100 million catties is actually too little. When converted, 100 million kilograms is actually only 5,000 tons. A large aircraft carrier is 100,000 tons. The part above the surface of Mount Tai weighs more than 140 billion tons. That is to say, the Tianlan Mountain magic weapon that is written to be a thousand feet high when enlarged, actually weighs only 1/20 of an aircraft carrier. It is almost one 30 millionth of Mount Tai. I feel like the weight unit can actually be changed in this regard. It's okay to change 100 million kilograms to 100 million tons. It's almost the same as the weight of a small mountain... Or if it's difficult to change, you can also wait for the protagonist to enter the spiritual world and have a surge in power... Finally, I wish the author a happy new year 😁

I really can't understand why there are always novels where the protagonist self-righteously reveals the future, not just occasionally, but often. In addition to making others think that you are incomprehensible and mentally abnormal, what is the use of this? Advance the plot? Could it be that this is the legendary flirting? No, no one would really like someone who asks incomprehensible questions all day long.

Five spiritual roots, the original book said that the heavenly spiritual roots are the best even in the spiritual world. It is difficult for your five spiritual roots to be in the mortal world886

There are a lot of women, but it doesn't feel like a running account. They are still thoughtful. However, when there are more people, there is no need to write, and some of them disappear selectively, such as the original wife Zhang Xiuer.

Damn it, the Taoist Master of Fate, and you are so scared of Han Li. I can rape whoever I want.

Good, good, good, the harem is good😃

Author, can you please revise the first chapter? It doesn't matter who gave this golden finger or the future protagonist. But can you not write it out? What kind of melon skin is Destiny Daozu? There is no sense of expectation at all. It feels like the current content of this book is just a joke for the future protagonist. There is no need, brother. The three golden chapters are really too important. You persuaded most people to quit in the first chapter, so the results are not ideal. In this way, the main character will be aware of it and then describe it in a jittery manner. It will have spiritual roots. It feels much better than your first chapter where there are people behind the system talking and pretending to be funny and rubbing hands on the spot. Please, brother, what era is it? Let's not be awkward. The expression I saw there was the old man on the subway looking at his mobile phone. Even if I have to explain, I will explain it at the end. Please change it. Author, I saw in the comment section that what you wrote later is obviously okay, and it is still a mortal harem. I really don't want to see you making no money.

The classic one got a bargain but behaved well, and even tried to steal the opportunity of the original owner. He said he regarded the original owner as a brother, but he didn't share the benefits very much. In fact, he was a sanctimonious villain.

He is really mean to his own woman. Is it because the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas and insists on doing such a mean-spirited little family thing?

For all this, I have to thank that ink dragon back then😜

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, Han Zhi Xian, Mei Ning, Wen Si Yue, Liu Yu, Bing Po Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Yuan Cha Saint, Bao Hua Saint, Dai Er, Black Phoenix Fairy, Jin Yue, Xian Xian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan

I think it's okay, but I don't know what the plot is going to be like later on. I heard that it's about eunuch training, and the style has changed a lot.

For example: I don't understand. Author, do you think you are smarter than hundreds of millions of people in the mortal world? Accept the mortal Zhang Xiuer. Also arrange a medicinal root for her. No matter how you explain it reasonably, I think you are being smart. You can think of something that others can't think of. Some people have exhausted their fate and have regrets, which is a kind of spiritual cultivation. When Mu Ran looks back, everything can be relieved. This is not about cultivating immortality. You have to accept both a mortal woman and Senior Sister Chen. These are burdens on your path to immortality. Is this really okay?

. I was tricked into coming in and ate a lot of it.

Sigh😔 I've read several mortal fanfics, all of them are harems, and I'm a bit tired of aesthetics. They all contain a lot of women. I think it's enough to write a few words. Too many women are not good and affect the viewing.

The young author has been updating 12,000 words per day for a month, and now he has run out of manuscripts. Follow-up update plan: 1. From today to the end of February next year, there will be an update every day at 17:30. This update guarantees a minimum of 4K words, and the most you can write is 6K or 8K words. The first update is to increase the average order, please readers understand. In the next two months, I will complete the outline of the chapter on the spiritual world, and then go through the chapter on the fairy world again. 2. Starting from March next year, it will be stable at 8K per day and 12K on weekends. Decide on one or two updates based on the average ordering situation.

TV series version of Hong Fu, tut tut tut!

Death from poison👍

The book is pretty good, but it's not popular. I fell in love with it after being dismissed by several reviews.

TV series version of Dong Xuan'er😁😁😁

This book may not be acceptable to people with low reading experience, but it is just right for a bookworm like me who has been reading for more than ten years! 😃😃😃

If you don't read the harem of mortal fanfics, why don't you read the fanfics? Wouldn't it be better to just read the original novels? It's because I felt sorry for the female characters like Mo after watching the anime that I came to the fanfics to see if they could make up for it, otherwise who would read the fanfics 😒😒

This work was still very good in the human world at the beginning. It was a work about women in the harem, but it was no longer good later. The eunuch training became popular, and then all the readers ran away, and the author did not update it.

Can you tell me whether this book is dead or alive? It's been more than a month and the author is brain dead.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that the heroines have less and less roles toward the end, and it's even a bit unfinished. If you write it well, it will still be interesting, regardless of those gui men.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

The writing is okay, nothing bad about it! It's just that the pace is too slow. By Chapter 70, we haven't built the foundation yet, and we've just started the blood ban trial! And now I'm a little annoyed by people who don't push their realm and just pile up their combat power! Also, I'm a big fan of the Fairy World chapter! 😁😁