Gou Becomes a True Immortal in a World of Low Martial Arts

You actually wrote "A Hundred Refinements to Become an Immortal"... Is this a sales account?

What nonsense are you writing? Back then, I was chasing Mortals and Bailian at the same time. I felt that your plot was better than Mortals. Now, if I look at this book, it's the same as He Ni. Let's rewrite it. The writing style is like that of a primary school student.

Secondly, the copying of the text is also messy. The world view of the 500 to 600 chapters is still messy, and it becomes even more messy after the protagonist is introduced.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Definitely sold. I can't tell the story clearly now, but at least the account of becoming an immortal through a hundred refinements is clear.

A great author who writes this kind of rubbish novel. Some people become immortals through hundreds of refinements, but you become shit.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel like it was written by a novice author, and your status as a master doesn't match.

Isn't it a low-martial world? ? Why are there monsters, ghosts, and fairies...

Nowadays, ordinary people are thrown directly into the deserted forest in no man's land. If they don't have a lighter in three days, they are basically dead.

The author should have sold his account long ago. These systematic articles were all written by Ai.

Write another novel about cultivating immortals. Back then, when I became an immortal and a mortal, I was still young.

Can't you continue to copy Wangyu? Make money? Don't shiver?

I suggest you try writing group portrait articles. The era of online articles has changed.

The title of the book has nothing to do with the introduction, and the introduction has nothing to do with the content. Content has nothing to do with looking good.

You become an immortal through a hundred refinements and write a second part.

From Tieba, this is the writing style of a great writer?!

From the beginning, I knew it was all water, all water

I hope you will still write the fairy tale type, so that you can become a fairy through repeated practice. The magic rain is great. If you think of the topic well, you will become a fairy. Haha I know it's not easy to write a book, so do your best!

You can write a fairy tale about farming! ! ! !

How can this be Gou? It's obviously Long Aotian's Shuangwen. All the books written by great gods are like this. The protagonist has the kind of depressed to death mentality that he wants but doesn't get.

I have read "A Hundred Refinements to Become an Immortal" before. Although it is based on mortals, it is also a novel that I like very much. Today I came to see the author. I didn't expect... Writing a book is not easy.

Recommend a new book, Cultivation of Immortality, Awakening of Doomsday Physique,

Please improve your writing style, I feel like I only have so many adjectives to write about...

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book that makes you laugh like crazy, don't read it while eating, "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies"

I have started reading. The author's writing is very good. It is definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...