Spell Return: the Wheel of Time

I haven't found the magic point to be very good yet, but there are two books like Kakashi and Kira Yoshikage's Nanami next door that are okay.

The protagonist is really useless. He is one of those who is born with powerful spells but poor talent. The protagonist can exorcise the semi-special curse zero at the age of eight at the beginning. This is a sign of the power of the spell. After being taken away by Gojo Satoru, he doubled his age when he entered the high school and is now sixteen or seventeen years old. After seven or eight years of training, his strength has not improved. Damn it. , Look at Otoko Yuta, the incense is gone, he changed from special level to level 4, and then spent four months practicing and returned to special level, and upgraded from level 4 to special level in four months. In just four months, this is talent. Our protagonist has been standing still for eight years. This talent is a waste of ability.

Previously, all those who wrote conjuring fan fiction were afraid of playing too many tricks on the protagonist because of the "invincible" character Gojo Satoru. Even if he was stronger than Gojo Satoru, he was only slightly stronger. As a result, I wasn't very happy with the conjuring fan fiction. Now that this "invincibility" has been broken, can I be more unrestrained in cheating in the future? After all, "invincible" can be broken within the system, and there are also many invincible abilities outside the system, so why can't he be broken? If I was afraid of being sprayed by Gojo before, I no longer have this restriction. So, all the spell fan authors, please feel free to write! ! !

Since you want to write "time", then write it for invincibility. If you don't want to write about invincibility, don't set the time ability. Time is such an awesome ability, but it is written like a clown. It's so low-key. I have never seen such a low time ability.

The latest comic clown king wins

The update is interrupted... A sign of eunuchs...

Playing with the hands of time Walking in the shadow of fate The embodiment of fraud and mischief Praising you, Mr. Mistake

Why not write stories from the Su Nuo era or hundreds of years ago? It feels like there is more room for development. You can take a look at the big boss behind the scenes of Naruto: The story is well written in this regard.

Why hasn't anyone written about the ten shadow spells? The twins who directly traveled through time and became Fushiguro, and were born to control all shikigami. Moxuluo directly adapted to the curse of the twins and rewrote the future. That would be a killing spree.

It was written so poorly when I was a child. When I grew up, in order to keep up with the plot, I forced myself to equalize my abilities with those from the Conjuring Academy. After more than ten years of practice, I got stuck in my stomach.

Current ranking in the world of magic 1. Su Nuo 2.5 Tiaowu

Why do I feel that the recent plot is copying the original work? Apart from multiple protagonists, there are no changes.

The original work of Spell Master is not suitable for secondary creation. The system of Spell Master basically does not have any description of training, or it is talent, and the only things that can be practiced are physical skills and reversal of spells. And as 2.5 Jiao Satoru said, most growth relies on "epiphany", which can greatly improve strength in an instant. This leads to the fact that after Megumi understands the semi-finished field, opponents who were originally unbeatable can be beaten immediately. Torako understands Black Flash and immediately becomes strong enough to compete with stunts. Wild Rose does not feel much stronger even after offline. Such a power system means that it is impossible to write about cultivation at all, which means that the protagonist is either so powerful that he explodes, or he is very useless.

Author, can you please clarify the setting of your protagonist, a time-traveler? Why does the protagonist remember the plot for a while and not for a while, and he can remember it only when it is not critical? He brushes his identity as a time traveler, and then deliberately fails to remember it in a critical place, just like Baigui Yexing didn't know that Xia You's target was Yi Gu, and then he didn't protect Xia You's body after Xia You died. Your selective amnesia is really convenient.

The first chapter was okay, but the Shibuya chapter was too long. Of course what the fan wanted to see was to prevent a tragedy and beat up a real person, but instead the protagonist went to Mount Fuji to fight an inexplicable cursed spirit. I didn't want to read it for a moment.

Now that the protagonist has rescued Huzi from the cursed fetus incident, doesn't it mean that the uncle in the dead game can't steal Ah Hui's Moxuluo later? Okay, then let's just beat him up! 😋Great, looks like you!

The protagonist is so useless. Such a powerful spell turns out to be really rubbish and can only be used to speed up the game. It has no offensive power and no expressive power.

Author, I have subscribed to all the chapters so far. I just want to tell you that your original plot is also good, but it is a pity that you did not grasp the point of the fan fiction. You have not changed anything, or you have not changed those regrets. I have read your early stories and they are all good, and you have your own ideas, but why don't you change it? Now the latest chapter of the manga is 5T5 Resurrection. You should also have read the manga. Many of the plots in it are very annoying to me, so I came to read the fanfic just to ask for help from the parallel lines written by you, the author, so go and change it.

At the beginning, he killed a top level one curse spirit, and eight years later he was barely rated as a level one magician. I know how to use the technique to reverse, but I can't reverse the technique. The reason given by the author is "I'm a little better at it." The plot is so confusing that it seems like there is no outline. After reading more than 20 chapters, it is really addictive. The combat power is not so overwhelming. The world view of Curse is not a cultivation fantasy.

After more than 10 years of development, he is still not as strong as when he was 7 or 8 years old? What do you think

It is recommended to watch Liu Fanyi's B station video. This is the most convincing background setting I have ever seen about the spell return battle. It is better to use this background to write spells to return to the battle.

I haven't read much, but I can't stand it anymore because it's boring. The logic of this novel is okay. The protagonist's character is a bit thin. There are no bad points in the part I've read so far, but the problem is that the plot is too smooth and bland. Although he has such a strong ability, he can't do anything. Huahuo, a serious game of bow and arrow, physical skills and black flash, with serious move names and a serious plot. There is no pretense, no plot, not even a single line. A lot of pen and ink are wasted on some tedious, plain and dispensable places. Simply put, the author has no life. For someone like me who has been reading for more than ten years, no matter whether it is a good life or a bad life, the only reason why I can't stand it is if I don't live, because boredom is the biggest sin.

You know what the last person who stopped time for 6 seconds was thinking about? He's already thinking about how to rule the world

All I can say is that the structure of the work itself is too small, and your time system is just random killing. The author actually does not need to take care of Gojo Satoru.

After reading these recent chapters the next day, I was still ranked in the top ten for reading. This is already so cool. I'll finish it and start a new book.

I heard that the author of Spell Return has made a fuss again

I enjoyed reading it. I will continue writing about Chainsaw Man in the next one, just in time to keep up with the popularity of Chainsaw Man: The Movie.

Not bad, except for being a bit boring at the end, the author has written out several possibilities