Lu Mingfei Returns from the Holy Grail War

The title of the book is very good. I came here as soon as I smelled it this month. The chapter names are also very good. It is Avalon, Princess, and Liang Yi. It is very good. It is more attractive. Before I started reading, I saw that the heroine was an unknown person, and I thought, which onion is this? But I haven't read the original work, so maybe I'm just a passerby? The key point is to see the collision between Xingyue and the dragon clan, and then they are shattered. Then I saw that the protagonist had obtained the Evil in this World and the Third Law, and I thought that this protagonist was a bit awesome. Then the more I looked at it, the more I realized that it did not reflect the characteristics of the Third Law at all, and the protagonist did not look like someone who had lived in the same era as Dumao. Then when I got to the princess chapter, I felt something was wrong, and then I started the Crimson King and passed the rest of it quickly. Summary: There is no conflict at all if you change it to a world of magic/magic/witchcraft and so on. Then I put aside Yue's filter and simply looked at Lu Mingfei's return. The original heroine was a major drawback. The appearance of this character and the plot were too stiff. Then I felt that the character's style of painting was inconsistent with the dragon family, and it always looked weird. Finally, for me, this book is not worth reading.

Suddenly I found that there are not even any Dragon Clan, but only a few domestic families. 😏 Horses from the Northeast, Majia from the Northwest, Fire Worshipers from the Western Regions, Panchen Dalai Lama, not to mention the Central Plains, and a bunch of imperial mausoleums. Poison in Miao territory, driving corpses in western Hunan, worshiping gods in Fujian and Guangdong, Qian family in Jiangsu and Zhejiang, southern Zhang and northern Kong

The new Lu Mingfei begins to rush to the battlefield! ! !

There are a lot of poisonous points 🙂 Xingyue's magic should be stronger the less people know about it, the aunt's family is no different from the original work, the protagonist pretends to be a grandson, let's not say indecisive, someone steals your things and shoots you, the protagonist and his apprentice let him go, with the plot, there is no difference between that kind of follow, it can be said to be a hard follow,, Original characters, I am already addicted to watching, will Shen Nong continue?

Laughing to death, even the bastard described in this article can win the Holy Grail War. I'm really curious about which subspecies of the Holy Grail is the one who fished for the Holy Grail through the center of the earth. With the cowardly appearance of this concubine, it's hard to say whether she can qualify for the competition.

When writing fan fiction, you have to write original characters. So, wouldn't it be better to just write original characters when writing fan fiction?

I don't quite understand why magic should be promoted, even if there are no restrictions on magic in the Age of Gods. But Lu Mingfei didn't come from any traditional martial arts school, so he still wanted to inherit it. Don't understand, can't understand

I really hate this, when a randomly created character overrides the original character

I thought it was quite interesting, but the original heroine was really... Abandoned. The girl's portrayal was too contrived and unnatural, and she took away a lot of the protagonist's scenes. I didn't like it very much.

When will you summon me, my king, quickly?

Is there Lu Mingfei who has returned from the Black Beast?

Byd Isn't the thirteenth Knight of the Round Table Xiao Mo? With one glance at Ding Zhen, he was judged to be a person who has never passed by.

Alas, Liang Xiaoru, the female supporting character, wrote it... It's really hard to describe in one sentence.

... I don't think I need to complain, but let me say it. First of all, it is a big taboo for fans to create original characters. The biggest contradiction is that readers are not here to see original characters. Secondly, as I complained in my post, you might as well say it is the power of other worlds, which is more in line with the positioning of this book. The protagonist is the ancestor of magic in this world, and after the magic system spreads, and in the case of the Dragon Clan, it is not a problem to directly use modern magic technology to teach the gods how to play magic. Question, not to mention that the protagonist has a third method. In terms of mystical status, the protagonist can be said to be the root of this world Again, the issue of the heroine, let's not talk about the original character. Regarding this subject, most readers will want my king or Morgan or Mordred to be the heroine. So the best way is to use the harem, just don't use it. Confused Once again, the protagonist behaves as if he has no experience with the moon, and there is no need to follow the original work. He can use magic to get the information about these hybrids, let alone being threatened. As long as the protagonist's third method adds evil in this world..., Only the dragon kings come to fight..., The hybrids have no ability to follow the master. By all means, including non-combat capabilities, unless the author wants to strengthen the hybrid at an epic level, it is reasonable. Because of the different world, the protagonist becomes the only Mystery of the Moon, so the magic effect becomes weaker. Specially spread the magic system and enough popularity to reversely strengthen the Mystery, making himself the new magic base, etc.

The character card is an original female character, 6

It can be seen that the author wants to write a Western fantasy style dragon fan. The lines have been written as realistically as possible, but what about the writing style? I think it is not as good as normal writing. I don't see the elegance, but it has the taste of a killer speech 😏

Could it be Lu Mingfei who returned from glueing😃

When you are confused, books will enlighten you. When you are confused, books will show you the way. When you are lonely, books give you courage. When you are sad, books give you joy. When you are manic, books calm you down. When you succeed, the book guides you. This book is my enlightenment to the world of novels. When I read this book, it will point out the way forward for me who is confused. I am optimistic about this book.

I have only read Chapter 3. I remember that there is a basis for using Xingyue magic, except for the super ancient gods. What is the reason why Lu Mingfei uses magic directly? Is there any explanation later?

Who is Lu Mingfei, a traveling frog? Why did you come back from so many worlds? Where did you go back?

The newbie flavor is quite strong, I like it It's like raising a cub ()

Why do you describe such a woman? What is the difference from the diaosi in the original work? Become a heroic spirit and experience the Holy Grail?

Dissuaded by the chapter about being robbed of a cup. The poisonous point lies in the illogical logic. 1. Why does the heroine have to bring a cup when shopping? 2. As a reborn knight, what is special about the protagonist's personality? Just this guy with a wry smile at every turn can seal the evil in this world? 3. Knowing that this gift is very important, why don't you pay attention to it in your actions? In short, the plot of throwing the cup is too blunt, so blunt that the sense of substitution is instantly lost. It's not that the original female protagonist is not good, but the female protagonist who is holding back is likely to die in a male video. Unless you focus on a main character, the Overlord, like Kusuo Saiki, he has full combat power from the factory.

It's great to come back from the Holy Grail War and still be a loser!

As someone who saw Long Wu from Long Yi, I was put off by so many scenes with Nono in the early stage. Is it true that anyone who saw Long Wu from Long Yi still has a good impression of Nono?

Does adding an apprentice at the beginning have any special significance?

The new Lu Mingfei is heading to the battlefield! ! !

Is there Lu Mingfei who returns from Tom and Jerry?

Let's add Renata as the heroine!

I'm over a hundred years old. Do I still care about interpersonal relationships and unrelated people? Can I still fall in love? Probably not.