
Versatile Mage: Heretic? Sorry, They're All My Alt Accounts
全职法师:异端?抱歉都是我小号
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 165k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
79Chapters
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555Recs
55Fans
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Reader comments 22
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Regardless of priority? Who is the protagonist? The one in simulation or the systematic one? Or are you planning to write a group portrait? After reading a few chapters, I found that it was always a simulation. I went directly to the directory and found that it was still a simulation. So what is the system? Behind the scenes backdrop? I've written 80,000 words for one simulation and haven't finished it yet. There are 66 introductions. Do you plan to write 660,000 words for the simulation alone? Looking at it now, I only know Lin Bei. I'm afraid I will have to wonder who this person is when the protagonist appears in the future.
The simulation time seems to be too long. If you are the main writer of the simulation, then the final reward for the real protagonist must be not only invincible but also have top-level combat power. Otherwise, the simulation will be stinky and long, and the rewards will be useless without development. It is too slow.
More than 50 chapters simulated? No distinction between priorities? I'm afraid it would take 100 chapters to simulate one protagonist in this way, and 6,060 chapters to simulate sixty-six. And if there is no good plot later on, I am afraid it will just keep repeating itself. Moreover, the character creation cannot be almost the same, otherwise it will be another big poisonous point. The subject matter of this novel is too difficult. Author, you have taken too big a step.
It's not interesting. You have to write dozens or hundreds of chapters for this simulation. The real protagonists have no sense of existence. You don't even know who the protagonist is.
A eunuch? It doesn't matter if you become a eunuch, just change it and write it again. With the author's writing method, the 66 protagonists are not suitable to be written in the same book. It is more suitable for each protagonist to open a separate book. The most taboo thing about writing a novel is that there is too much gap between the previous and the last chapters. In the last chapter, the world was destroyed, but in the next chapter, you are fighting with the street gangsters? How about playing? Especially since each simulation requires dozens or hundreds of chapters, and each protagonist must develop slowly from scratch, the sense of isolation should not be too strong.
There is no distinction between priority and secondary, the simulation is too long and too detailed to write, and there are dozens of temporary protagonists later, each one is planned to take so long to write? It would be better to write a separate book for each temporary protagonist. It took too long to write this protagonist. After I finished writing the next protagonist, I started from scratch. In the last chapter, he was a big shot who influenced the world with his every move. In the next chapter, he becomes a newbie with nothing, and he has to slowly develop and write dozens or hundreds of chapters. Do you think this is good? Personal suggestion, please ignore if you don't adopt it: In terms of emotions, just write the emotions of the protagonist outside the simulation. Just write the emotions of the protagonist inside the simulation in the simulation. Then see how the protagonist outside the simulation reacts. There is no need to write first-person emotional reactions. There is not much foreshadowing. I really can't empathize eee.
A good novel, thank you to the author
Is this the end of the book? 6. Isn't this too disgusting?
Who is the protagonist of what you wrote? It's all a simulation, it's very uncomfortable to watch.
I'm speechless. I just finished the simulation and continued the simulation without following the plot at all.