I Am Immortal in History

Come back after it's finished, don't dare to fall into the trap easily

The author wrote that there is still hope for Slow, so what the hell is it ending now? ?

Second, do you want to write about history? 😍😍😍😍

There are two hundred or so chapters looking at it,

I bet that there will be a eunuch in this book within 500 chapters. I will post it as proof. If there is no eunuch, I will give my father-in-law a monthly pass.

When writing a novel, just think about the plot carefully, and export your values ​​​​with private goods every day. The court will criticize, the people will criticize, and the heroes will also criticize. Why don't you hold a criticism meeting? In one chapter, there is not much serious plot, and there are a lot of flimsy values. Forget about criticism, my own level is not that good. It is disgusting to watch, and it gives people the feeling of Kong Yiji scolding the Qing government. If you really want to write about ancient social issues well, you can read Zizhi Tongjian or ancient history. If you don't have that material, just make up a good story.

Hey, in my opinion it is another masterpiece, the details are perfectly controlled! Every work in the second update is making progress. If Demon Slaying is the first to show off its talents, then the Book of Changes is the work of a great master (not a bunch of great masters who can't stand it now). Unfortunately, the plot in the middle changes from fairy grass to food, but the final eunuch chapter is really all I want to watch. There are three books in the top three. I have been working for 8 years since I started to read online literature in high school until I graduated from college. It has been almost 16 years since I started reading. Zhouyi is my favorite book and it is also the most regretful book... Let's not mention old books. After all, regret is also a kind of longing and beautiful. Closer to home, I didn't plan to read this book so early, because the quality of the second update... Is really questionable, but the quality of the book is never doubtful. I have read it in the past two days. I really regretted it after reading it. I regretted reading it so early. Others wrote books, and the second update writes the stories of all living people. The protagonist's way of thinking is more like a normal person facing the situation. This is also the common point of several books - it can easily make us look like and feel after entering society! To be honest, every time I open various rankings or daily guides from Qidian, I feel disappointed. I have passed the age of passion and enthusiasm, and I have become immune to cool articles, so now when I read articles, I want to read other people's lives, a life that resonates with people when they are involved in it! That's a lot to say... I will keep reading this book because it is really perfectly written so far. Although I can't give any large rewards, after all, the monthly expenses for a few people in the family are too much (the helplessness of ordinary adults 😄, mortgage, car loan, milk powder money for children, cosmetics, parents' living expenses...). But it is still possible with a little support. I hope that the second update of this book can be improved to a higher level and also have a complete ending. After all, if there are too many regrets, there will be too many disappointments 😒, come on!

This 🐶 thing is not as updated as the last one. Who has the connections to let this guy owe 1.8 Million in gambling debts so that he can calm down and write books honestly to earn money to pay off the debts?

I don't understand where this book comes from so much resentment? I feel like I am living a pretty good life now. I have enough food to eat, clothes to wear, land and a house at home, and life is full of joy. To put it bluntly, you only think about these things when you are full. Do you think about these things when you are not full? Our country has just had enough food for a few years. The so-called road must be walked step by step. You can't just fly into the sky right after walking, right? Some people must learn to protect their own rights and interests. In fact, the basic laws of our country are relatively complete now. As long as you understand the law, know the law, and know how to use it, as long as you don't break the law, you can basically walk sideways in this society. Of course, for those of you who I don't understand and haven't learned yet, there is nothing you can do. If you don't want to protect your own rights and interests, then others can't help you.

I discovered that there are actually some people who think that this writer can become a great writer as long as he is not a prisoner. If he does not talk about anything else, he will only rely on his achievements to become a great writer. He has a book that has been stable at the top of the rankings for a long time. This standard can be said to be the most basic requirement. Remember, it is long-term stability. Let's take a look at this eunuch. I won't mention this book. His grades are just a bunch of crap. Take a look at this guy's last book. When his last book had the best results, it was around 30 on the ranking list. Later, because he wrote a big mess, it disgusted the readers. The rankings were straight. After that, he was ranked outside the 100th place. From then on, the ranking has been around 100th place, and finally reached the eunuch. From this point, it can be seen that even if his last book did not have the eunuch, it would be a book that ranked around 100th place. Do you expect this result to be a god? I'm afraid you don't want to laugh me to death.

Bah, eunuch, if I read any of your books from now on, my name will be written backwards! ! !

I am really disappointed. I will read your book again this time. I will never read your book again in my life😡😡😡

I ordered dozens of chapters even though I knew you were a eunuch. How mean of me.

Nnd, if this book is too eunuch, I will never read your book again.

Does anyone have the author's home address? I'd like to send him some of our local specialties.

Order a book and say something. I personally think that the author has too many private things. The book cannot be objective, but there cannot be so many private things. He is really a petty bourgeoisie. He stood up and cursed. I came to read the book and the story, not to criticize you. Who can't criticize? What was the main plot in the first few chapters? The main line of the novel "Can't Live Immortality" is that it is slow and just about life. The key is that the author criticizes the protagonist for not doing anything and getting involved. You don't even get involved and you criticize all day long. Do you rely on heroes or God to save the world? Or just finish criticizing and pick up the main plot, improve your combat power or have some adventures. But what I said is my opinion, just like every reader has a unique Hamlet in his heart, but in the first few dozen chapters, I don't think it is an excellent Sanjiang work, it is more about arousing the empathy of some readers. Moreover, many readers who read the chapter reviews are still very self-righteous. I moistened it first so that the blood does not splash all over me.

You have to first think about what you want to write about. If you want to write about temples and rivers and lakes, then write about temples and rivers and lakes well. I can finally see that you are just like Xiao Ding. As soon as the world view becomes bigger, you will immediately collapse. Then write about the temples and rivers and lakes of your small world. As for the protagonist, just exist as an ordinary bystander. The protagonist does not need to be immortal, nor does he need to have martial arts qualifications, but he needs to be able to practice and become stronger step by step, and then behave obscenely, be nimble and slippery, have a keen sense of smell, escape from disasters many times, and then watch the ups and downs of dynasties and gangs of heroes over a hundred years. Let the protagonist step by step from a worthless little loser to become a supreme master in martial arts, live for a hundred and dozens of years, and then die. That's it, this person's story is finished. Just like Jin Yong's novels, each novel has a protagonist. When the story of this protagonist is finished, it is finished. Even if it appears in the next book, it is just a guest. The protagonist or main line is always clear, just like Guo Jing in The Legend of the Condor Heroes. Be sure to make a good outline, first set the realm divisions and the life span settings corresponding to the realms. Then think about the different copies and identities of the protagonist at different stages of cultivation. For example, the protagonist can be a jailer, a martial arts gym owner, a restaurant owner, a police officer, or a traveling businessman. In short, we need to deal with all kinds of characters in this country, write about the society and the ugly exploitation of the bureaucrats, the naughty wisdom of the little people at the bottom of society, and the protagonist's cleverness, nimbleness, exquisiteness and sharpness. , Wretched development, etc., These are what you are good at, and they are also the real selling points of your novels. As for whether the protagonist is immortal and whether there is a large-scale world of immortality, that is not important to you, it is just a frivolous addition to the readers. You are talented and have the potential to become a great master, but it is a pity that you cannot find your own position and make a good outline. After writing to a certain level, you can no longer write, and then you become a eunuch. Abandon the setting of the immortality fruit. The protagonist is a diaosi who has a certain talent in martial arts and constantly has some small opportunities. He relies on his agility to avoid murders and obtain opportunities, and then slowly grows into a supreme grandmaster. He stands at the top of this small world, lives for more than a hundred years, and watches the ups and downs of this world for more than a hundred years, and then dies.

This guy definitely still has a vest.

Stop writing and quit the online literary world. For someone like you who spends three days fishing and two days drying nets, what else is there to write about? It's not that you don't have the writing skills and talent to write novels, you do. You are just lazy. If you have a legitimate job or have a mine at home, it is understandable that you treat writing books as a side job. But if you take him as your main business, then you can't forgive him. You are sorry for your family, you are sorry for yourself, and you are even more sorry for the gift of writing books that God has rewarded you with. If you don't want this talent, transferring it to someone who needs it and keeping it here with you is purely a waste and a waste of natural resources. Stop writing, go out to work, drive a taxi or deliver food.

After seeing so many Changsheng-liu movies, apart from Wen Chao, this one is yours. The other writings are not that interesting at all, and many of the writings cannot grasp the point of enjoyment.

To be honest, the creative ability and writing level of this second update can definitely become a god, but it does not have a long-term vision. To be honest, I have been studying at Qidian. Over the past 15 years, I have never paid more than five novels to read. This is one of those books that I found very enlightening after reading it. The jailer beat the child and asked the adult to confess. There were many details and many words that made me feel very enlightened.

The author is not lucky, I like to tell the truth, ironies 😡

This book felt too deliberate, the pace and plot didn't feel as natural as before. How about you just cut it off? It's still not too late to open the next book.

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If you really can't write a medium-length novel, then write a short story. Two hundred chapters, nearly a million words and thousands of knots. Write about low-level martial arts.

As expected of Eunuch, I didn't even finish the last one, so how could I possibly finish this one again?

I specially subscribe to you at 10 o'clock to offer you incense. The last one was really unclear.

Even though I knew it was a eunuch, I couldn't help but subscribe. Damn it.

If you really can't control the world view of the big world, then write about ordinary people.

Immortality is actually quite boring if your character is not good enough, especially when you are at the top of the mountain, unable to make progress, have no goals, trying to climb outwards, and you will get tired of all the power, food, and beauties.