After Being Defeated by Qingmei, I Became a Top Player

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In the middle, you were a little too self-indulgent, and you were competing with others to rap. They had finished singing 3 chapters, and you were still closing your eyes to relax, and you were asking everyone to wait. It was really embarrassing for me to watch, I wish it would be less

I recommend reading it. I feel that the regret expressed by Qingmei in this book feels more real, very subtle, and looks very real. I have also read a few similar books. After losing the male protagonist (the key is not to be a virgin, but to lose a licking dog.) In those books, there are often Often exaggerated descriptions are often used in very long paragraphs. The women in them are crying and wiping away their tears, and they are all fake. It may be quite refreshing to read one book, but after reading two or three similar books, I feel a little uncomfortable. This book describes the feelings of regret, loss, and not being able to get close to it just right.

Forget about martial arts, traditional Chinese painting, ancient poetry, and calligraphy. Although it is traditional Chinese culture, it always feels awkward. When I first started reading this kind of novel, I thought it was quite good and refreshing. But after reading too much, I feel awkward. Especially the ancient poetry couplet conference and face-slapping Sanda anchors are all cliche. I'm on my way, I can do a little bit of Chinese painting and calligraphy, but it's really embarrassing to write too much. What I like most about the new book is that I gave up when I saw an ancient poetry competition. You can also do some modern poetry, which is in line with the times. You can use ancient poetry at most to mention it in an interview, to show that you are more educated, or to use it as a promotional slogan.

After reading Chapter 52, there are three points that I can't help but complain about. I also hope that the people behind or the author himself can explain it. First, the protagonist does not reveal his pen name, which means he does not explain that Gui Chuu Deng wrote it himself. According to the system settings, the greater the fame of the protagonist, the more advantageous it is. Revealing the pen name can also allow different types of works to increase each other's fame. Otherwise, if the rewards of a work become famous, it will continue to decrease and it will not be worth updating for a long time. It is better to only produce short stories that are quickly acquired. After the pen name is disclosed, the popularity accumulated by the long works can be transferred to other types of works. The second is not to explain to the family the problem of breaking up with Qingmei. The points have been divided, what else can't be said? My sister used this as a blackmail and took away 2,000 yuan. What can I hide about this kind of thing? Wouldn't that have to be made public sooner or later? Or does the protagonist really want to hang himself from a tree and continue to have a good relationship with Qingmei in order to comfort his parents? The third is the issue of copyright. I have studied copyright law before, and the plot of the protagonist selling songs also made me a little confused. Why must I sign an exclusive license agreement? Logically speaking, composing music and lyrics are all signed with exclusive licenses, that is, the original author and the authorized party have the copyright, but neither can be licensed to a third party. Moreover, the license only transfers economic rights. The original author has the right to sign under any circumstances. Even if others are allowed to perform, the name of the original author must be written. If it were me, even if I had less money, I would still retain the right to perform my own interpretation. Other minor issues are acceptable, but these three points (which should not be considered bad points) are really hard to resist complaining about. The writing style of the book is very good, and some of the characters are okay. Don't let some small settings lower the quality of the entire book.

Full-time artists, Qi, Chu, Qin, Yan, Zhao, Wei and Han, Qinzhou's music is the best, and then the Linyuan fish might as well retreat and build a net, and there is Chu Kuang's vest. These are not important, it's just the setting. But your decision to go to the Yangzhou branch is too similar. A few college roommates competed against Xia Fan, simple? The teacher's aura... Does he need to recruit a few apprentices? There is also the fusion of Dazhou... Lin Yuan also has a sister who works in a publishing house, and a younger sister who is a genius. The conditions for becoming a father are the same...

No. If you want to hit the charts, you should at least pick some hits that can hit the charts here, right? Your inexplicable song with two parts that are just for your own entertainment is number one on the list. Is the world you are traveling through a cultural desert?

The writing was okay at the beginning, but in the middle I kept writing songs for others, and I didn't really want to read them. I kept writing and writing, and it was endless.

Can the author pick some hits? Can even a song that is not popular be ranked number one every month? Dad Qu is too low😤😤😤

It's quite outrageous. If you show your work to others, how can you get a lot of attention if you write songs but don't sing?

Just another "full-time artist"

What Gouba song did you choose for your concert? There is also the order of singing. This concert of yours is not a solo concert of a professional singer. You do not blow up the venue at the beginning and heat up the venue, but also hold a gross concert. In the words of Uncle Benshan, "We have gone through the process of education 365 days, is it useful to educate him this night?" " "Chasing Dreams" is not appropriate to sing at the beginning. Firstly, it cannot heat up the venue. Secondly, it is an inspirational and sensational song. It is suitable for a boy band to sing with the audience at the end "The Light of the Righteous Path" is a song you play in a concert to make it funny? That's not how you play jokes, right? It's better to let him sing "I won't go to work tomorrow" or some of GAI's songs to heat up the place directly. They are all in Sichuan dialect, just a Chongqing dialect The song "People Like Me" is not suitable for concerts at all. Wouldn't you make some lyrical songs better than this? "Toward the Cloud" is okay, but it's not suitable for Brother Dao to sing. Why not sing it for that fat dog? Because there is a lyric in it "Maybe you are fat like me" "My Paper Plane" plagiarized Stitch Monster "My Beauty" uses the original song to insert rap in the middle, which I think is the most rubbish rap "The Wind Rises" is okay "So Annoying" Douyin Divine Song, my evaluation is that it is better to make "Meow Meow Meow" Liu Maimeng I won't comment on "Ideal Thirty". I have blocked that singer, but I can sing it for Zhou "Flowers Along the Road" is okay Three rappers, plus Huang Hai are considered half, but they want to do some melody rap. I don't understand it very well. Of the three and a half, one can sing melody, one can sing trap, and one can sing hardcore rap. , Or singing "By the Campfire" and "Floating to the North" in groups are quite suitable and have depth

Don't write niche songs to win the championship. Why don't you go home and drink tap water? You've never heard of it, and it doesn't sound good to you after listening to it.

Ahem, I prefer Jay Chou's songs. Let the other world experience Jay Chou's era🙂

1. Don't improve your appearance, it's boring 2. Don't mention Qingmei from now on, let's all be well 3. Just listen to the heroine Qin Baobao, the senior sister should be more grateful and admired 4. Don't write extraordinary, don't write extraordinary, many works of art do not need extraordinary

The book is okay, but the title is so bad that I didn't click to read it after seeing it several times. Then I read it three months later when I was bored. It's okay.

Why does it feel so similar to a novel I read before?

The world is divided into thirteen states. Imagine how big one state is! Such a large state is written like a city! There are many plots that are too loose, just like playing house! Overall it's pretty good, but don't delve into the details, or you'll lose if you overthink it!

The author should give a big red envelope to Zong Zong. Unless it is the same author, you owe Zong Zong too much. The writing is very good and great. It is hard to say about the setting. It is at least half. Although your writing is better than him, it is just like Journey to the West and The Legend of Wukong. I like The Legend of Wukong. Without Journey to the West, there would be no Legend of Wukong.

I subscribed to Chapter 108. I really couldn't accept it after seeing the rap. Although I still want to know the story behind it, does anyone have any spoilers

It's well written, but many scenes and passages reminded me of The Full-Time Artist. It's a bit of a drama, so give it a play and I'll come back again

Can you write more emotional interactions? Less copywriting

The two scenes of saving the heroine's grandma and grandma are really a mess. Let's just say that showing off in front of others is not so unreasonable. I can't stand it anymore.

It's very beautiful, full subscription plus monthly pass

Exactly the 100th

I can't stand it anymore. I read more than 400 chapters. Leave it alone for now.

I can't stand watching anymore. I originally wanted to pay the monthly subscription for the full subscription, but the 13-year-old teacher's part was really uncomfortable to watch. You just want to get started. Forget about turning 13 years old. Why do you still have to support her in her old age? I've read more than 400 chapters.

If there is a single female protagonist, I think Qin Baobao is 90% her. If there are multiple female protagonists, Teacher Tong and Luna have a great chance.

It's very beautiful, order it all and add some details

Congratulations on the launch