Honglou: I Really Don't Want to Be the Emperor

I would like to comment that the protagonist's opening is really poorly written. Jia Huan is a concubine, and the original work is very disappointing. I suspect that it was because Jia Huan was incompetent that he lived and grew up in the end. Because Mrs. Wang wants to keep Jia Huan to set off Jia Baoyu's good qualities. If Jia Huan was a little outstanding, he might really be killed by Mrs. Wang. The protagonist's first reaction after time travel should be to keep a low profile and survive, and work hard for the imperial examination. If the imperial examination fails, then join the army. Anyway, leave Jia's house as soon as possible. As for the protagonist, he just traveled through the past, just like the Twelve Hairpins of Jinling, he just wanted to have sex. Not to mention, there are several in front of you who are your sisters-in-law, and some of them are your sisters. For example, Tanchun is your sister. You have to be a little concerned about ethics and morals. The banquet just held was so high-profile, I really am not afraid that Mrs. Wang will kill you. I really thought that a time traveler could do anything after traveling through time. I read a novel about a time-traveler and thought I had time-traveled. But after singing a poem, I was slapped dozens of times by the clan leader, got seriously ill and finally died.

Why does Jia Huan, a concubine, solve the crisis in Jia's family? Without him, why are you still working so hard to enjoy happiness? No one in the whole house likes him, so why bother untying him? Why live for others? Look at Jia Yuanchun, there is such a big difference when he comes back to visit relatives. He is not treated as a younger brother at all, and he is worse than a slave.

In the second chapter, he teased Wang Xifeng with words and died under a peony flower. How can he be a coquettish person even if he is a ghost? I'm really speechless, so brainless.

Why are there so many protagonists of Jia Huan and Jia Cong now, with nothing new at all, studio writing?

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There is absolutely no need to rescue Jia's family. Even if you save Jia's mother, Mrs. Wang will miss you? It will only suppress you and steal Jia Baoyu's limelight. The Jia family's political resources and your share are all tilted towards Jia Yuanchun, Prince Teng Jiazheng (Jia Yucun), and you can't enjoy the blessings. Is it necessary? The big house is confiscated, and it doesn't have anything to do with the concubine in the second room. If you are successful in the Jia family, you may split up the family or make Jia's mother think that you are a threat to Jia Baoyu, so you separate and set up another family, and wait for the Jia family to commit suicide and be raided.

I saw another Red Mansion, and I said I would save up to 200,000 before reading it, but the first two chapters of yours, damn, 🍅 are not even written like this by you, and they are even worse than your previous book. In the first chapter, I just traveled through time and had no hair. I just care about the golden hairpin. The second chapter is even more ruthless. I am teasing my sister-in-law for no reason. How old are you? Look at the title of the next chapter. Baochai has not even entered the Grand View Garden. The characters you have created in these two chapters are not even as good as the original owner. Jia Huan is just a bit wretched. You are a lustful evil spirit. You also say that you have a gentle temperament. Damn it.

Jia Rong kneels down to Jia Huan? Looking for death...

Did you write Drunken into the Red Mansion? Various plots are repeated in it, poems are also used before and after, and the data appears inconsistent many times. Except for the plot of the garden, everything else is 0 points, and the relationship is also extremely unhappy. Damn, for the sake of the rare precious protagonist, people who can't hold back to finish it.

The maid who won the first prize for writing poems during the Mid-Autumn Festival told stories to Jia's family and taught the servants that they are always their masters. I guess I have seen many of the Red Mansions and felt that they are familiar. Everything else is okay. As long as they don't enter the palace, they are all good people.

Then take a look at my "Station Slave", it is not systematic and not poisonous. It tells the story of a Wu Zhou soldier who was sent to the Northeast as a slave and finally overthrew the Kangxi rule. After reading this, please give me a free collection and comment. I would be grateful if you could give me another investment.

Conspiracy theory version of Red Mansions. In fact, there were so many conspiracies, including the raiding of Cao Xueqin's house, just because his backer Kangxi was gone, and Yongzheng was short of money, so he raided Cao Xueqin's house.

Jia Huan is dying in silence. Without the halo of the protagonist, you would die eight or nine times in the first fifteen chapters.