In the World of Science Fiction, My Vest Is a Mechanical God

Finally, there is another creation instrument called the Constructing Hexahedron. The entity has a body shape of three light-years but cannot be observed. The total volume in the folded space is counted as n entities. Before XXX was successfully produced, the entity was only a 10x10x10 translucent crystal-like structure that now appears to be white. Need to use sub-body to operate. Now renamed [God] (the owner just took the wishing machine as her name)

Playing space-based weapons in the extraordinary world? Do you dare to let the big boss of SkyExplosion Star blow you up in minutes 😁

This phone looks so much like Sha Niu. However, it's a bit exaggerating that the hacker's intrusion is still directly displayed on the opposite mobile phone screen.

There is a saying that it seems that the protagonist's upgrade speed has been deliberately suppressed recently. After the Rubik's Cube was fused, it only unlocked the ability to temporarily upgrade for one hour. His own strength level has not yet broken through LV3 and upgraded to LV4. You must know that the protagonist does not have a God's perspective and does not know that a LV5 has come and is specifically targeting his enemies. However, readers with God's vision will inevitably sweat for the protagonist Of course the author may be You want to create a plot of over-level killing of enemies or arrange a difficult and impressive battle for the protagonist, but this is an invincible novel. What everyone wants to see is the protagonist easily crushing the opponent rather than a brain-burning battle of wits plot (of course this kind of development is possible, but I personally think it is more appropriate to arrange it in the later stage) Even leaving aside the combat part, with the protagonist's current upgrade speed, when can he leave behind the "psionic plainclothes" and start his own business? You must know that the protagonist is still in this kind of official organization one day, and that day he still needs to be subject to various constraints (such as having to attend various meetings). How can he maintain his own power with such an organization that is restricted by various rules and regulations? However, if the strength does not allow it, but you cannot leave the protection of the official organization, this is very contradictory So to solve the above problems is actually very simple, just speed up the protagonist's upgrade speed, as for the specific level to speed up... I personally think the author can be bolder, in the past ten years If the protagonist's own strength is raised to LV5 or even LV6 in a few chapters, then the perception of the book will be at least doubled. Of course, the above is just Xiaosheng's personal opinion. Considering that the author may have unique arrangements for the rhythm and plot of the work, Xiaosheng will not be dissatisfied with it.

Alas, writing about martial arts under the guise of science fiction

I can't stand it anymore! ! Let's talk about it briefly: Disadvantages: In terms of grammar, "this" is used throughout the text, before place names, before people's names, and also before company names and item names. . I can't stand it anymore. In terms of plot, as a member of a large force, when encountering problems, he does not want to find any way to report to the organization, but fights alone. Advantages: The setting of Shuangdian is reasonable. Although it has the above two shortcomings, the setting of Shuangdian is very excellent. There is no plot delay and no overnight feud. The dialogue is logical, there is no forced intelligence, and the villain setting is reasonable. If you say you want to fuck the protagonist, you will fuck the protagonist. You are fully prepared and there is no ink when you do it. The writing style... It's hard to say, most of my attention was attracted by "this" (for me, "this" is too dazzling).

The mechanical communication at the beginning is very good. You can immediately understand the functions and even emotions of the machine. Then in the blink of an eye, you don't know how to use the enhanced mobile phone, and you don't know what functions it has. You have to rely on the system to explain it slowly, which is quite speechless.

Comrades, it doesn't matter what your degree is. Elementary school, junior high school, high school and university are not important. Even if you are a college student, let me tell you that what you study is a framework. The teacher can only teach you a framework. Don't write a book with just a fucking framework!

This Qi Xun Ming is very tough, he wants to survive until he is on the shelves.

You are very similar to an author. You give the same reply: I know it, I know it, but you just don't change it.

I'm curious, how did you stay on my daily guide for 6 days😰

I have read a similar novel before. At the beginning, due to unknown reasons, all human beings turned into various robots. Then the earth began to merge with other parallel worlds. The first was Attack on Titan, parasite beast, demon slayer, Tokyo Gnawer, Inuyasha, and the Great Sword. Weaker worlds, slowly followed by Sword and Wind Legend, Pirates, Naruto, Bleach Fairy Tail, Dragon Ball, these relatively powerful worlds and after becoming a robot, the food is the soul of living things. If you want to live without starving to death, if you want to continue to evolve and become stronger, you can only continue to evolve. Killing and devouring the souls of other living beings And people on earth can drop skills by killing them, such as killing Konoha genin to get white scale incendiary bombs, killing gnawing seeds to get super alloy tail blades, super alloy feather blades, killing Aburame clan jonins to get nano metal insect swarms killing Namikaze Minato to get space teleportation Send the device, kill Blackbeard to get the Black Hole Annihilation Cannon, Kill Charlotte Lingling to get the fire source, kill Hawkeye to get the plasma ship-killing knife and a series of skills In this case, none of the people on earth who can survive are kind, and each one is more cruel than the last

I feel like the tone of voice is so strange, it feels like I'm listening to a translator.

Domestic culture, coupled with foreign environment and ability system, still have an indigenous protagonist, it's really weird

The protagonist has just created a mechanical creation and has such a low hacker level that he can hack the mobile phone of the ghost in the museum to obtain the hiding place and other information. Then the plainclothes find a scapegoat with a hammer. Wouldn't it be a better choice to arrest the person directly and commit meritorious deeds? Don't tell me that in a world where mobile phones that collect biometric information are developed, there are no official computer experts.

Mechanical Ark

Cheers for the new book, good introduction, already collected

The beginning was a joke about the ex-girlfriend breaking up with a gift of 300,000 yuan, and she immediately persuaded her to quit. I originally wanted to give it a try.

After reading Chapter 51, even if you get a watch, it's better than a belt. You can't wear the belt with you all the time, but the watch is different. It's better to get a smaller one.

Brain storage building

Author, can you use this less in the future? Ah, it feels awkward to use this in some places. It would be much better not to use it. For example, in the novel, so-and-so went to the bathroom to take a shower first, and then he sat on this sofa. Didn't it feel a little awkward?

From the latest chapter, it can be seen that the author has really listened to Xiaosheng's opinions to speed up the protagonist's upgrade speed, and paved the way for the protagonist to break away from the "Phantom Plain Clothes" in the future. However, it may be because the subsequent plot has been greatly changed, the author has changed from two updates per day to one update per day ( Sorry, the shortcoming of the author is Xiaosheng's fault 😭) If there is anything wrong, it is the way Qiu Zhe dealt with the "Dark Knight". Since he thought that the "Dark Knight" might sneak attack him, why not kill the opponent with a sneak attack? If there really is a huge force behind the "Dark Knight", then he might end up being beaten up by a group If Xiaosheng were to write a paragraph, he would describe that when Qiu Zhe planned to start doing business, he first collected intelligence and tried to find out the true identity of the "Dark Knight" from various clues. In this way, even if the gold coin is exploded in the end, he can still be regarded as a cautious and thoughtful villain (of course, writing this way is suspicious of a low word count, so the author does not need to change this paragraph) And the part that deals with the relationship between the protagonist and the "Phantom Energy Plainclothes" is even more brilliant. My original idea was that the protagonist would either choose to resign or run away directly to achieve the purpose of escape, but this kind of disconnected way in the article was something I had never designed. Thoughts Let's talk about the disadvantages of the first two methods first. Resigning is certainly the most formal way to break away from a force, but don't forget that the "Plain Clothes" is an official law enforcement agency, and it is still such a turbulent and troubled time. If the protagonist proposes to resign at this time, there is a high chance that the superior will not approve it. Even if it is approved, the protagonist will not have a full-time job to earn income. But living an extremely comfortable life can easily arouse the suspicion of "Plain Clothes", and it is difficult for the protagonist to survive and develop And running away directly is the worst of the worst, because doing so means defecting, and choosing to defect from an official law enforcement agency such as "Plain Clothes" will face no need to explain in detail what kind of troubles will be faced Of course, there are also successful examples of running away directly. For example, Han Laonong in "Super Mechanic" successfully escaped from the sight of "Thirteenth Bureau" with a mask, but Han Laonong is a reborn person who is familiar with the development of the story, and there is not a completely trusting relationship between Han Laonong and "Thirteenth Bureau". From a God's perspective, we can see that Han Laonong would have lost most of his freedom if he did not run away But the protagonist of this book is not a reborn person and cannot predict the future. , And in the eyes of his superiors, he is just a newcomer with excellent expressions recently. Although he also has a mask with similar functions, he does not have such an urgent need, and he still needs to grow up in this small place instead of looking for opportunities in the outside world where he is unfamiliar. Therefore, from the beginning, Xiaosheng thought that the chance of the author writing like this was very slim. However, there are many disconnected relationships in the article. This is a path that the author has never imagined. After completing the certification, the protagonist will receive the same level and treatment as the captain, but does not need to go to work on time every day. In this way, the protagonist can have a legal and high social status on the surface, and can have a stable and abundant source of income, and can liberate himself from the heavy official duties. It is simply a plan to kill three birds with one stone Finally, about the guy from Qi Xun... Or Qi Xun... Or the guy from Qi Xun... Whatever, I just don't understand why some people are always unhappy that he won't die for the time being. You have to know that this guy is just a stupid, bad, and greedy clown. Not to mention that the author guarantees that he will die. Even if he really escapes from prison and finds a place to thrive, can he develop faster than the protagonist without cheats? If you meet the protagonist, you can only get a gold coin. If the plot doesn't develop like this, Xiaosheng will walk upside down for the rest of his life. Let's see who is brave enough to make a bet with Xiaosheng.

Very well written, keep it up!

Fun

No, your wife is gone? Isn't there an original wife in front?

Just reading the objectionable content in the first few chapters, in a normal and orderly society, law enforcement officers would not behave like this. Look, the police in the United States don't even dare to act so brazenly.

The entire system can be expanded in many ways.