Comprehensive Manga: I, Kotomine Shirou, the King of Uruk

It is currently fully booked. Let's put it this way: firstly, the author is not able to create the characters well, secondly, the system is not well stitched together, and thirdly, he cannot grasp the rhythm of the story. It is no wonder that it is the book with the worst performance. After reading these hundreds of thousands of words, I don't see any growth in the male protagonist, nor in the narrative. At the seventh singularity point, I can endure one time travel to improve my strength. Now it is the second time, and there will probably be a third time in the future. I want both the main world and the different worlds, but none of them have been written yet. Here are some suggestions: 1. Immediately return to Uruk and join the main line, be a supporting character with a certain outstanding performance, return to fsn after the game, wear it again before 5 battles, and start the 5 battle plot. 2. Books with more and more gaps in the ability system generally have no good end.

The most annoying thing is that Jin Shining summoned 7 heroic spirits, 4 of which were Japanese heroic spirits, and one defected and became the king of the mountain.

How about the author's first different world, Final Fantasy 7? He learned skills with Tifa and established a bond, and he became green. Even if he fell in love with Alice, he could still save her. It would be a pity that Alice died. Final Fantasy 7's magic is relatively easy to learn, as long as you have magic crystals.

Nioh, A Certain Magical Index, The Irregular Student at Magical High School,

Without complaining about the name of the plot, it is a joke that Kotomine Kirei and Gilgashmi would save people, and Shirou survived because Kiritsugu was the winner, and he rescued him directly after winning. Kirei and Gil were both resurrected after bathing in black mud. They were both dead, so why should they save people? If they really teach, why don't they teach a happy monster? Kirei doesn't even care about his own daughter. Just look at your profile, which is full of flaws.

The setting is weird. It is impossible for Jin Shining and Mapo to save Shirou at this point in time. The first Jin Shining Shining and Mapo are pure evil, Jin Shining Shining is eager to release the black mud to destroy the world and rebuild his village. Mapo is even more happy when she sees others suffering, and she doesn't care about letting her own daughter be tortured by others. The second original work records that Mapo took children like Shirou who survived the fire and directly used them to provide magic power to Jin Shining. After killing a bunch of children, Shirou would still be alive?

It can't be a harem. That would really make me dream about five years ago. Farewell to the harem, author. It can be either a single heroine or no heroine. Don't be ambiguous at all.

I've read more than 100 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. It's dry and not interesting at all. It doesn't have the middle-class feeling of Xingyue at all, and there is no sense of passion.

It's so funny, Su Nuo realized the space chop and cut 5t5 in half while being suppressed. I heard that the 5t5 revolving door has come out, and now the spell fans are rioting.

The author didn't come back from the countryside, but he died in the countryside, right?

Flash Menor does not need to eat people, because he has a body made of black mud. What is black mud? That is part of the Cup of Heaven. Although it is contaminated, the Holy Grail also has almost infinite magic power for heroic spirits. What can be said is that after ten years of five battles, Shining has never lacked magic power, and he does not need the support of a magician to use the EX Noble Phantasm. Fighting Saber is like showing off your skills, using Wang Cai. A certain family prepared thousands of Sieg's super-standard magic batteries to support seven heroic spirits fighting for seven days. Do you think dozens of children can keep Shining alive for ten years?

It gave me a headache to watch. Uruk, the adopted son of Golden Sparkle, is about to face the end of the world. He traveled to Fairy Tail again. Instead of learning to collect all kinds of outrageous magic in Fairy Tail, he just followed the original plot and made jokes to pick up girls. I wonder if the plot of Fairy Tail doesn't require you to do anything. There wasn't even a serious injury in the early stage. He just followed the plot of water magic and learned the magic of two female partners. Don't you understand what you are thinking 😅 The subject matter is good. It's a pity.

It's so easy to write. Just copy the plot and change it as you like.

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If you caught these two at the beginning, are you sure they didn't throw them into the basement to use as a battery?

The first part is just okay, but from the second chapter to Fairy Tail, there is no nutritious content and it's all nonsense. It's a waste of time to read it.

The protagonist learns how to change clothes and receive magic. Let's talk about changing clothes first. The magic of changing clothes is not to create a different space to put equipment, but to directly summon the equipment at home through the space and put it on. A lot of luggage that Erza brings with her every time she travels is equipment, and her home is full of equipment. One article said, wait for me to find it. Receive magic. If the protagonist wants to use it on the heroic spirit, he must first kill the heroic spirit, or go to Final Fantasy 7 to collect magic crystals. The magic crystals contain the souls of monsters. If you get the magic crystals from the top of the Twelve Round Table, Odin, and Mecha, and practice receiving them, the protagonist and Tima will have no problem. I recommend the basic energy, space, time, telekinesis, Accelerator, gravity, and the four basic forces that every world has, gravity, electromagnetic force, strong nuclear force and weak nuclear force.

This type is much prettier than the pigeon nest next door.

Can you describe less of the protagonist's faint smile?

There are so many unpopular anime, so the results will not be good.

If you don't want a harem, don't write about women. If you write about women and don't accept them, it's disgusting.

It's getting worse and worse. The first few books were pretty good, but why are they becoming like this?

It's almost coming to an end, why can't it be finished well? You are so easy to fall in love with

I followed two of your books, but the third one stuck. Alas 😔

Now that your book is finished, you, whose credibility here has been ruined, have temporarily recovered a little credibility. I followed you for three books, but I didn't expect that the third one was a trap. Add the new book to the bookshelf for the time being, so I won't chase it anymore. I'll read it when it's finished.