Cultivation: the Longer You Live, the Better Your Talent!

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but can the title "Cultivation to Immortality" be removed? I wrote for a long time and didn't explain anything. If you don't get criticized, who will?

The plot is average, the pace is very slow, the novel is high-end and low-end, the author is a bit of a literary youth, and the title of the book seriously does not match the content. I have been writing plots about the mortal world. Based on the current progress, I estimate that I have not touched on cultivating immortals until it is released. I estimate that cultivating immortals will start around chapter 200. Those who want to read cultivating immortals should consider it.

It takes more than 200 protagonists to practice the sixth level of Qi. It's too slow.

The monthly pass is provided, it's up to you to update it

The writing is okay, the author, keep up the good work and stay steady.

It looks good. This rhythm suits me very well. More updates will be better.

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Plagiarism! Absolute plagiarism! It's really sad. It's exactly the same as one I saw on other platforms. In order to prove that you are not plagiarizing, I will update 20 more chapters first to show my innocence. In everything, I have to provide evidence, so I will update 20 more chapters first!

The protagonist is too simple, and the plug-in is no different from ordinary farmers. The later effects of the plug-in may be too unbelievable, and the level may be suppressed. After all, in a few hundred years, the protagonist may be at an unbelievable level, and the writing may be read as nt.

We are currently at chapter 150. The previous chapter was pretty good, but it started to suck when my wife ascended. I don't know why the author created such a depressing environment. Desperate situations are not impossible, but they must be matched with a little hope - the determination to never give up, the fight with all your strength, the resourcefulness of strategizing, and even a plug-in to load files: you must leave me some thoughts, let me see the hope of making a comeback from the desperate situation, and then give me a beautiful job at the right place, so that I can feel comfortable. But the problem is that the development of the plot is not dancing on the tip of a knife now, but it is so locked in the iron maiden that there is almost no light. Pumpkin, the mistress who has been in charge of the Lu family for decades, falls out of wisdom and destroys her future as soon as she ascends to the throne. She is also targeted by Huang Mao - you really gave the readers a sense of urgency, and then it took thirty chapters to let the protagonist go to the spirit world. Still still in the spirit world, the speed of light arranged for Huang Mao to focus on the two "females" you appointed. It is normal for the male protagonist to have poor cultivation aptitude before he is fully developed, but you have repeatedly emphasized this point for thirty chapters, making it clear that the protagonist deserves to be despised by the world, and there is no real basis for resistance that can transform it. Of course, these malicious intentions towards readers are quite normal, but your protagonist's eyes have lost their light. Previously, the protagonist and his three little kids dared to seek a match with Zhao Hu, and fought with the major forces in the city to protect their family property. At the lantern festival, they relied on their talent and fame to the point where they had to spit out the meat in their mouths, and then a young man with both wisdom and courage disappeared! You may indeed want to show the change in the protagonist's mentality, but in my opinion it can only be said that the gap between the front and back is too large, and the back is too watery.

This is called a giant, but also a huge sin. . . Introduction is exposed

The plot advances slowly, the logic is not smooth, and the contradictions lead to surprises. The key is that the protagonist's gold finger is increased by one point in the first five years, but in the spiritual world, it is increased by fifty years? Can this setting be changed?

I'm a little bit embarrassed. Although it is said that one person can ascend to heaven, but I don't understand the way you write it. The pig's feet father was going to die, but he was given a few more years. The key is that he has a few more cheap brothers, and the pig's feet's eldest brother is also really good at giving birth. Your use of force to enter the Tao reminds me of the masked writing, but the pig's feet are really not as aggrieved as you. Although the longer you live, the higher your talent, you are almost like a turtle with your head reduced. You have a lot of things to sew, and I see that there is no orgasm now, Xiao Gao In the last two chapters of the tide, I had to be bullied again. I was admitted to Tongsheng, and then I was bullied, and I was admitted to Jieyuan. There were a lot of trivial things, and I was born innate. As a result, my wife went to the spirit world, and the immortal cultivators were about to come down. My wife still had to be bullied in the sect. It was so frustrating.

To be honest, reading is just a way to feel comfortable. It's not that you can't endure low points and endure. But after writing for so long, the protagonist has been worried about all the things and has a bottle of support? From the beginning, you have to look at the faces of wealthy families, then you have to look at the faces of the royal family, evil cultivators, and then you have to look at the faces of people from the Zhu family. Will you have to do this again in the fairy world? Since I left Pumpkin for more than ten years, I have just endured it. I originally wanted to endure it, but now it seems that it depends on the person's face. I don't understand why you have to bring two children to the fairy world. With two spiritual roots lower than yourself and 3.40 Years old, your father needs to take care of you. Please write down what your purpose is. Is it to help or to gather information? Is it useful to have so many descriptions of my family? Every time I read a section, I feel like it's holding me back. Could you please ask the author to tell me directly what features or strengths of the protagonist you want to write about in this book? Are all other aspects like this except for surviving the years? Then just watch some social or costume movies. You can also look for novels.

As soon as things started to turn around, I started to suppress it again. It seemed like I wouldn't be able to write it if I didn't suppress it. I continued to suppress it for hundreds of chapters. The more I read, the more depressed I became. I didn't even want to read it due to the limited exemption. I regret that I subscribed 😤😤😤😤

A brief review of the full order. It was well written in the early stage and very detailed. I ordered it even though the pace was a bit slower. When entering the fairy world, the pace was suddenly 10 times slower? ? ? Have you calculated how long it will take you to stay in this Qi refining period? If you change the map, the plot will be the same. You start as an entertainer, and promotion is all based on exams. There is a slightly hostile master, and then all kinds of targets, and the heroine is forced to give pills and then be expelled from the school (what kind of qualifications have attracted the attention of the sect for so many years? She was fished out of the small world, and then the master didn't care when she entered, and she was expelled from the school without anyone's guidance??). Change the Pila long rhythm and continue the water? All in all, the early stage is good, the writing is good, the plot rhythm is too slow and stretched, and the world view and logical setting are flawed.

Those who are invincible in the mortal world become the lowest in the spiritual world. And there is absolutely no highlight. Originally, the root method was an advantage. I relied on my martial arts talent to deduce the root method and opened my own path to martial arts. As a result... You will never take the road of fire, and you will never end up on a fork in the road.

With the way you write it, you will be dead as soon as your spiritual root reaches the lowest level. If you are still building a foundation, your spiritual root, family background, and cultivation will not be improved. Why do you have it?

In the early stage, the protagonist has a low status, so it is understandable that the pace is slower, but later on, the pace is even slower, and he also suppresses the protagonist's golden finger. What do you think, this golden finger means that the older you get, the faster the pace. In the end, you are not good, and you also deliberately suppress the protagonist.

After going through more than a hundred chapters, his talent was finally full, and he turned out to be the inferior five spiritual roots. Disappointment. . . This is too slow to heat up

The pressure at the back is so heavy that I can't watch it anymore. I don't have the same feeling as before. At least I am improving steadily step by step. It took more than 30 years to reach the spiritual root stage, and then the twenty-year integration that was promised was delayed again and again. Everyone around the protagonist felt that they were suppressed and couldn't breathe. The protagonist still had a breath. He was obviously like an old man in his twilight years when he was supposed to be high-spirited. Many supporting characters could not be written at all and were forced to put them aside to continue their lives.

The first part is really good, but the second part is too poisonous and I can't bear it. It poisoned my desire to read novels all at once. Marriage is indeed the tomb of love. The author lost hope in life after getting married. The story after the ascension to immortality is depressing and dull. It seems that there is some hope based on the golden finger, but the bad news always comes before the hope.

The qualifications were poor at the beginning - just keep on - - they became awesome - - the qualifications became the worst again when changing the map - - - just keep on - - they became awesome... It's an endless cycle.

There is a question that I didn't realize before, but a book friend asked it, where is the protagonist's sister, Lu Heitu?

It says that the protagonist's sister is gone, so Kurotsuchi doesn't want to save face.

Basically, I have almost reached the point where I want to abandon the book. One is that the updates are slow, and the other is that the protagonist's strength upgrade is too slow! I hope the author won't let us give up!

This book is a divine book, so beautiful! !

I have been reading for twenty years. This is the first time I have spent money to read a book. I used to do it for free. This one must be refined for me. You get my first deposit.

The protagonist is very solid and can be watched by old bookworms

There is a saying: it is 5:13 now, one of the few books that can keep me up late and still retain the desire to continue reading This is not often the case, the previous horror recovery is considered a book It means that the writing is very good, write more.