Peerless Tang Sect: Huo Yuhao's New Life

I don't approve of the documentary without MacArthur.

I have a bold idea, if Xiao Huohuo travels through time and becomes Huo Yuhao, and then uses Huo Yuhao's equipment to go jungle! It's interesting when I think about it!

This book is really well written. In other novels, time-travelers behave and behave like natives. The protagonist of this book is a modern person.

As for the heroine, it's the early stage now and I haven't decided who it will be yet. You guys can discuss it and I'll choose whoever has the most support

The idea is probably OK, but the writing is not. The plot arrangement is a bit awkward and too novice.

There are so many clever tricks in hydrology! 😅 I have never been a fan of listening to books. Fortunately, I don't listen to books very much. In order to make two characters water into four characters, split right into four characters. If you have this time, I suggest you focus on optimizing the writing style and conceiving the plot.

No matter who the heroine is, can Ning Tian and Wu Feng really be together as women, instead of one of them becoming a boy? These two absolute beauties are true love.

Come on, it looks pretty good. The protagonist is very in line with modern people's thinking patterns.

As the heroine, I think Wang Qiuer is more suitable

It's very creative. If you don't know the plot, you don't need to lay it out in advance. It seems that the author has a hard time grasping it, and there are still some things that can be followed along the way, so I just don't know.

Just so-so, let's not talk about the Soul Master Competition and Shrek's competition. There are more than 20 chapters? A group of people who just ignored the awkward content and returned the favor😅

There is a lot of room for improvement in writing style

The author, except that there is no description of the environment and only sporadic expressions and psychological descriptions, is pretty good. But as far as my personal habit of reading novels is concerned, without these descriptions, I feel that the pace is too fast and I am very uncomfortable. (And these descriptions are not too much, they are all good word count opportunities)

Should I accept Huo Yun'er, Zhou Yi, Xian Lin'er?

If you're a single woman, just find a prison as soon as possible, why write a fanfic?

The writing is indeed beautiful, with a modern touch.

Not bad, but the number of updates is a bit small. Is the author part-time?