The Strongest Guardian in the World

Brave readers, just watch it and you will find out, it is more exciting than the new game! 😎I can also teach you...

After reading it, let me talk briefly about my feelings, because writing novels is not my strong point, and I have read very few online articles in recent years. Therefore, as an author, I can make my own judgment and weigh whether what I said is useful or worth listening to. I don't think there's anything wrong with the general rhythm of the first three chapters. I first explain the setting and background, as well as the reasons and motivations for the protagonist to become stronger, and then develop the main plot of the first stage, and then a branch plot, without developing too many supporting characters and miscellaneous branch plots. But there are some places that I feel are not handled well. The most important thing in the novel is the character plot and environment. Without discussing the plot, I think the protagonist of this book is a bit boring. There is nothing unique and attractive about the character's setting and personality. The protagonist generally looks like a good baby with a sense of justice. In addition, the language and writing style are relatively humorous, and even have a bit of a bad taste. Because most of the characters in web novels appear in stereotypes and rarely involve the reshaping of later plot events, I think it is worth investigating here. It's not that this kind of protagonist won't work. Some readers will have a sense of empathy, but for me it will be unattractive. And I think this kind of protagonist will be more difficult to write. In addition, regarding the environment, the explanation of the background and setting is a bit too simple and complete. It feels like stripping off for people to see. Generally speaking, online articles about cultivation or immortality rarely reveal their cultivation system in this way. After all, this is a good tool to create a sense of grandeur, mystery and seduce readers' curiosity. Of course, you can add it later, but the effect may not be very good. And there is actually no good explanation for the protagonist's disappearance for half a year. After all, as a person with social connections, he cannot disappear for half a year without any reason and then return to his original social connections without anyone asking. There are also some flaws in the handling of the PC part. A plot like this should be more serious and rigorous, otherwise the novel as a whole will lose its quality. It stands to reason that when someone who looks like a student crosses the cordon and comes in, as a PC under the old order, the first reaction should be to stop the person. If his attention is distracted and he comes into contact, he should control him instead of directly pulling out a gun. After all, this is not the United States. Personally, I understand that this should be designed so that the police come up to arrest someone. He shows his hand and uses five consecutive whips to knock the policeman away. Then the policeman draws his gun. Then the protagonist says he doesn't want her to die and asks me to save her. If there are any problems, we'll talk about it later. There is also some writing that needs polishing. Although writing style is not that important to the novel, we should try not to make mistakes that are too obvious, as they will affect the perception. For example, you should pay attention to things like growing characteristics, crowding the lake with people, talking nonsense, and speaking loudly.