Starting at Wonderland, a Thousand Kilometers Away

The heroine of China Entertainment Entertainment is confused, where do you put this card buff? You have all the taboos in Chinese entertainment

The fandom has finally reached the target. I still want to say that Taohuawu is for Sister Meng. I can't be the heroine in this work. I hope that Sister Meng can be the heroine next time. The author is great 😁 I hold the banner for Sister Meng

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The novel does not have too many poisonous points. The only weird thing is that there are bugs in the protagonist's character. The relationship with AB at the beginning shows that the protagonist has no taboos about relationships (divorced, has a baby, and is familiar with her husband). Later, flirting with Malzaha further proves that the protagonist is not an honest person, but when he meets Oda, he becomes a 24-year-old husband, which is not in line with human nature (maybe too many calls for a single female protagonist). Generally speaking, the shortcomings are not concealed, and the variety show ceiling.

Let's write Xiao Tian as the heroine, I really like her.

The heroine is too confused. She was playful in the beginning, but she had pure love in the back.

Over the years, my favorite thing about 9500🌸is still Sister Meng, who has a beautiful heart, a kind personality, and good acting skills.

There are too many variety shows. There is too little written about the heroine, too little about career, and too little about fun. Let's start a small book and write it well. I want to write about the conflict between Shuangdian and the protagonist in the entertainment industry. What are I afraid of? If not, it's just fiction.

Is there another type of book like this one that started writing about China Entertainment in 16.17? Please, it's best to be more specific.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. Generally speaking, this is a Chinese entertainment novel that is above the standard and has a relatively new subject matter. Advantages of this book: The first one is new. The protagonist starts from Taohuawu, and the variety shows, TV series and movies he comes into contact with are all new in recent years. This is much better than the Chinese entertainment novels currently on the market, and the freshness of the characters is also much better. , Finally it's not just those few people who go back and forth The second is that the overall description of the characters and plot is relatively realistic. The setting of the protagonist's background is very good and has a cool factor, but it is not brainless and looks very comfortable But at the same time, there are many shortcomings The first is the setting of the heroine. I have never understood why I have to focus on Tian. I won't let go of Xiwei (to be honest, I really didn't know there was such a person before this). If the author takes a look at the comments and posts, it can be seen that most people have no feelings for the heroine. On the whole, he actually sticks to the cynical and ambiguous approach in the early stage and does not have a fixed heroine. According to the development of variety shows and plots, which character is more popular, the plot will be added accordingly (just like in Taohuawu, Sister Meng will be more popular) Add in the interaction with her, and Reba is the one who shoots scenes with Reba). The limitations of a single female lead are too great, especially for a star who has little publicity. Including the recent two chapters, the male lead Jiuzong Zi is trying to catch up with the current popularity. The most popular point of this drama is the spark between the male and female protagonists. If you have a fiancée, how will you start a business with Sister Meng to speculate on CP? If not, what will happen to your drama? ? And a conflict in writing style is that on the one hand, when you and Xiao Tian are playing pure love, on the other hand, you interact and have ambiguities with other female stars, including interacting with Sister Meng in Taohuawu after talking to Xiao Tian, ​​and having an appointment with Da Baobao. You are so inconsistent! To be honest, it looks really contradictory, and it doesn't end well so far. I really don't recommend writing it so awkwardly. It's better to find a reason to break up with Oda later and return to your early style (there are many people who like to see such photos. If you write about pure love, you will only attract Oda fans, and when you write about cynicism, you can attract many fans, and the author writes about pure love sincerely rather than writing about ambiguity.) Another point is that for Li Cheng Some parts of the character look awkward, mainly the part about the death of parents and family, and the part where the protagonist promotes the Northeast. The setting of these two parts is okay, but the description is too embarrassing. I can understand that the author wants to make the characters more fleshed-out and three-dimensional, but generally speaking, online articles do not have the soil for this kind of emotional description, and the author's writing style really cannot reach that level. It is recommended to reduce it and just mention a few strokes occasionally.