Naruto: I Was About to Defect When the System Arrived

😏The author stopped writing and shouted: "I'm so disgusted with this!" He punched the editor and stepped on the reviewer. It is said that a Taoist's loyalty is very important. A few taels of silver can break my waist. Then he turned around and left in style, joining the factory to become the God of Fast-hand Screws, attracting the attention of factory workers and being appreciated by the boss. Even if the trees are beautiful in the forest, the wind will destroy them. What a pity! He was severely injured at the hands of Tang Feng, the urban soldier king, and Tianba, a gourmet traveling in the fantasy world, and was knocked out of the small black room. Later, I met the author who stopped writing 14k and went home to share the profits before the end of the year. I felt how timeless it was. I met an old author from prehistoric times and got the initiation on a rainy night, carrying a knife without an umbrella. Later, he joined other places, showing his talents in AiDian, forums and other places, and disappeared within a month. People at the time said: I've made enough money and went to study for an MBA.

I always feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain circuit. He can't walk but can't.

The author is too slow to update, and starting from the first 20 chapters, the content becomes watery. After one chapter, it is either psychological activities or dialogue, and there is no nutrition and no main line. After being scolded, I calmed down a little, and then started to talk about it again... To be honest, people can see the daily content and the content. Everyday words are used to express warmth, but the entire content is substantial. As for water content, it means to expand the sentence of a sentence, to expand the sentence of the inner description that can be said in one sentence, to expand the sentence of the brief conversation. Even a few narrations can make you laugh. By stuffing some unnecessary Zhuang words and complements into it, the sentence itself can reflect the original meaning through reading and context, but the result is that it is expanded and the sentence is fixed, long-winded and rigid. Author, if you want to write every day, please refine your words. Otherwise, you will look very tired, and the word "water" is very annoying! (Non-advertisement) If we talk about daily activities, I can recommend the author to read the book Cangshanyue, Golden Jasmine. The daily writing in it is very good and slightly nonsensical. And for those of you who are more nonsensical Naruto fans, I recommend you to watch Building the World of Naruto. Then combine it. Reflect some daily warmth in the nonsense, and add more joy to the daily warmth. Otherwise, it will look tired simply by being nonsensical. It's better to adjust your mood. Finally, the author should strengthen the protagonist appropriately, it feels like it is a bit too much. As for the recent enhancement of "return to ancestors", the blood of several people was drawn, and the blood returned was not Otsutsuki's, but only the protagonist's grandfather... This strength was a bit too much. I was really looking forward to the protagonist becoming stronger, but he didn't. In fact, the author does not need to put so much pressure on the protagonist. You have already written 300,000 words, and the protagonist cannot even get a kaleidoscope. There are also dragon veins, monsters and other things in there. Add a few theatrical version plots, and you can also put in dungeons. Like the fire prison in the Land of Grass, the protagonist can go there as a member of Konoha, and you can do a lot of nonsense during the period. The protagonist has been promoted to the top of the ninja world, and there will be a lot of fun. It depends on your imagination. Moreover, it's a lot more fun to upgrade the protagonist. Pressing on the protagonist to upgrade makes people look forward to it in vain. Like that "throwback to his ancestors", he originally thought he would become stronger, but it didn't... So his expectations were in vain. The work is pretty good. I feel that Wanding will have it. Of course, the content must be rich and the characters must be pleasant. It's okay to have fun with people's intentions, but if you take it too far, it will make you sick. For example, when the protagonist meets the pregnant woman from the Uzumaki clan, even if she doesn't know whether she is Xiang Ling's mother, she still knows what the fate will be if she is sent to the "Kingdom of Grass". In the end, the protagonist was still able to come up with a "good way" to fulfill her wish and send her to the Country of Grass. I feel like this arrangement is either very three-dimensional or just for fun. Lezi people can't be inhumane. For example, in the humanities book Next Door, my stand-in is Steve, and this book is really annoying. The influence of Lezi people in the early stage is very good, and it reflects a free and happy attitude. Even if there is demand, it is through trading. If the other party does not lose, I can make a profit. Moreover, the performance of the transaction process, the process of getting to know others, etc. Is very beautiful. But after writing it, I became a fool just for fun. He has harmed many people in Marvel just to satisfy his own happiness. If you have any needs, just rely on grabbing. Relying on your own strength, you can grab at will. Hopefully this won't be the case with this book. Rely on the suffering of others to satisfy your own happiness. What I want to see more is a protagonist who is free and easy, but has a bottom line and a fun-loving person with priorities. A fun-loving person who can sometimes warm others. Rather than just having fun. Come on! Now that I am in Sanjiang, will my reservation last?

I haven't read it since Kyuubi. How is the writing now?

Naruto timeline, you can refer to it, there may be bugs, but this is the most complete one I can find. Reprinted from the excellent answerer on Zhihu, Dark Red Danyang.

Stealing someone else's

As a Naruto fan, as long as you don't lick the weasel and don't brag that he is a younger brother, you can say anything.

Let me tell you about the plot that was criticized later (Kyuubi Rebellion) The Kyuubi was controlled (Kyuubi: Tired, destroy it) →The Kyuubi was angered by the one tail and went to fight the Uchiha clan (one tail) (you little brat, don't let me catch you) →Madara PKed the Kyuubi, and he couldn't beat it by cutting off one tail in anger, and the protagonist appeared (it should be released at this time) A BGM of Ultraman) →The protagonist has to save people first, consuming a lot of chakra (Doctor, doctor, save!!!) →Two kaleidoscopes are about to defeat the Kyuubi, and two people lie down (one is too old, the other has no chakra) (with a BGM of the leader) →Okay, the male protagonist wakes up from a coma (my mission is completed) ! ) →The fourth generation Hokage and his wife are still in trouble (very good, give up, there is no hope) →Because Ichibi gave the tail that he had chopped off to Kyuubi, he was resurrected with full blood (this is Retsuo! Retsu! Are you?!!! Retsu!!) →The fourth generation couldn't beat him, so he used the technique of sacrificing the whole family (Sun Xiaochuan. Face) →The male protagonist Wake up (Yuanshen! Activate!!!) →Using the resurrection technique and the kaleidoscope to summon the souls failed (can it work? Xigou) →It turns out that it is due to the delay in network speed. There is a delay of about a day from the signal from the Yang world to the underworld (Yin Yang Dao makes a grand appearance) →Very good, prepare (Resurrection, my love!!!) Losing my love, everything is defeated

After so long of preparation, Madara was pulled out to fly Gundam, and then forced to kill the four-generation couple in the story. It really ruined the appetite, especially with the modification of the original plot to have Madara come out and protect Konoha. Returning to the original world line is too disgusting.

Do you know why I gave up the book? You will regret it if you continue watching