Konoha: Prepare to Defect, the System Is Coming

It doesn't look good. The author probably thought he was humorous when he wrote such a system. I was immediately persuaded to quit. Maybe the author wanted to imitate the Mahayana period before having the system, but the prerequisite for having this wasteful system is that he is already invincible at the beginning. In this book, the protagonist's talents usually make him defect and return to this system. If he is impatient, he is directly persuaded to quit.

This is a pitfall for those book friends who haven't read it yet. The main plot progress is slow. Because it is not the original plot, it unfolds very slowly and the transition is very long. It gives people the impression that the subsequent plot is not planned well. The two updates every day are in vain. It is not recommended to continue reading. To be honest, I think if the paid chapters are of this quality, it is better to read the AI ​​​​article, at least the pace is fast.

I only have to read Chapter 281 before I decide whether to subscribe to it all. Later, I not only eat water but also eat books, and the plot becomes more and more vicious.

I actually feel that the writing is pretty good, not as rubbish as some reviews say, and this Naruto fanfic is considered to be in the middle or upper reaches among fanfics.

It's a mess, it's incomprehensible, I don't know what I'm writing.

It feels very good. If you read too many cookie-cutter fan fiction about upgrading and defeating monsters and pretending to be Naruto, you can give it a try. This Naruto book focuses on a rural love story in another world. Uchiha and the village have no right or wrong, only different positions, and it is told very well. They tend to be relaxed and positive. During meetings, they hold each other back and throw blame on each other. The atmosphere of a United Nations meeting is very realistic. Disadvantages: Bloody, violent, conspiracy theories, powerful cheats, mindless pushback, no

Let's just say that when Obito became Ben, Uchiha Madara really should have committed suicide. In the anime, after Ban told Obito about the Eye of the Moon plan, he cut off the contact with the golem and died. But in this article, Obito eavesdropped on the conversation. Why is Ben still alive? Obito should have been in the kaleidoscope when he eavesdropped. , That class should be dead. After all, when Obito turned on the kaleidoscope for the first time and killed the ANBU of Kirigakure Village, he returned directly to Ban's hiding place to listen to Ban talk about the Eye of the Moon plan. Then Ban committed suicide. After a while, it took a while for Obito to eavesdrop on Kyu Yukina's pregnancy. This happened.

This book is well written. It didn't make me feel that there is a routine to fight monsters and upgrade. At the beginning of the fourth battle, the protagonist's strength is at the peak of the movie level.

A bit hard to understand, but very funny

Personally I think it's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, I hope I can catch it in the update.

Interesting

Rare, rare, too rare, Ye Cang becomes the heroine

Updated every day, are you ready to hit the streets?

😏The author stopped writing and shouted: "I'm so disgusted with this!" He punched the editor and stepped on the reviewer. It is said that a Taoist's loyalty is very important. A few taels of silver can break my waist. Then he turned around and left in style, joining the factory to become the God of Fast-hand Screws, attracting the attention of factory workers and being appreciated by the boss. Even if the trees are beautiful in the forest, the wind will destroy them. What a pity! He was severely injured at the hands of Tang Feng, the urban soldier king, and Tianba, a gourmet traveling in the fantasy world, and was knocked out of the small black room. Later, I met the author who stopped writing 14k and went home to share the profits before the end of the year. I felt how timeless it was. I met an old author from prehistoric times and got the initiation on a rainy night, carrying a knife without an umbrella. Later, he joined other places, showing his talents in AiDian, forums and other places, and disappeared within a month. People at the time said: I've made enough money and went to study for an MBA.

I always feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain circuit. He can't walk but can't.

The author is too slow to update, and starting from the first 20 chapters, the content becomes watery. After one chapter, it is either psychological activities or dialogue, and there is no nutrition and no main line. After being scolded, I calmed down a little, and then started to talk about it again... To be honest, people can see the daily content and the content. Everyday words are used to express warmth, but the entire content is substantial. As for water content, it means to expand the sentence of a sentence, to expand the sentence of the inner description that can be said in one sentence, to expand the sentence of the brief conversation. Even a few narrations can make you laugh. By stuffing some unnecessary Zhuang words and complements into it, the sentence itself can reflect the original meaning through reading and context, but the result is that it is expanded and the sentence is fixed, long-winded and rigid. Author, if you want to write every day, please refine your words. Otherwise, you will look very tired, and the word "water" is very annoying! (Non-advertisement) If we talk about daily activities, I can recommend the author to read the book Cangshanyue, Golden Jasmine. The daily writing in it is very good and slightly nonsensical. And for those of you who are more nonsensical Naruto fans, I recommend you to watch Building the World of Naruto. Then combine it. Reflect some daily warmth in the nonsense, and add more joy to the daily warmth. Otherwise, it will look tired simply by being nonsensical. It's better to adjust your mood. Finally, the author should strengthen the protagonist appropriately, it feels like it is a bit too much. As for the recent enhancement of "return to ancestors", the blood of several people was drawn, and the blood returned was not Otsutsuki's, but only the protagonist's grandfather... This strength was a bit too much. I was really looking forward to the protagonist becoming stronger, but he didn't. In fact, the author does not need to put so much pressure on the protagonist. You have already written 300,000 words, and the protagonist cannot even get a kaleidoscope. There are also dragon veins, monsters and other things in there. Add a few theatrical version plots, and you can also put in dungeons. Like the fire prison in the Land of Grass, the protagonist can go there as a member of Konoha, and you can do a lot of nonsense during the period. The protagonist has been promoted to the top of the ninja world, and there will be a lot of fun. It depends on your imagination. Moreover, it's a lot more fun to upgrade the protagonist. Pressing on the protagonist to upgrade makes people look forward to it in vain. Like that "throwback to his ancestors", he originally thought he would become stronger, but it didn't... So his expectations were in vain. The work is pretty good. I feel that Wanding will have it. Of course, the content must be rich and the characters must be pleasant. It's okay to have fun with people's intentions, but if you take it too far, it will make you sick. For example, when the protagonist meets the pregnant woman from the Uzumaki clan, even if she doesn't know whether she is Xiang Ling's mother, she still knows what the fate will be if she is sent to the "Kingdom of Grass". In the end, the protagonist was still able to come up with a "good way" to fulfill her wish and send her to the Country of Grass. I feel like this arrangement is either very three-dimensional or just for fun. Lezi people can't be inhumane. For example, in the humanities book Next Door, my stand-in is Steve, and this book is really annoying. The influence of Lezi people in the early stage is very good, and it reflects a free and happy attitude. Even if there is demand, it is through trading. If the other party does not lose, I can make a profit. Moreover, the performance of the transaction process, the process of getting to know others, etc. Is very beautiful. But after writing it, I became a fool just for fun. He has harmed many people in Marvel just to satisfy his own happiness. If you have any needs, just rely on grabbing. Relying on your own strength, you can grab at will. Hopefully this won't be the case with this book. Rely on the suffering of others to satisfy your own happiness. What I want to see more is a protagonist who is free and easy, but has a bottom line and a fun-loving person with priorities. A fun-loving person who can sometimes warm others. Rather than just having fun. Come on! Now that I am in Sanjiang, will my reservation last?

I haven't read it since Kyuubi. How is the writing now?

Naruto timeline, you can refer to it, there may be bugs, but this is the most complete one I can find. Reprinted from the excellent answerer on Zhihu, Dark Red Danyang.

Stealing someone else's

As a Naruto fan, as long as you don't lick the weasel and don't brag that he is a younger brother, you can say anything.

Let me tell you about the plot that was criticized later (Kyuubi Rebellion) The Kyuubi was controlled (Kyuubi: Tired, destroy it) →The Kyuubi was angered by the one tail and went to fight the Uchiha clan (one tail) (you little brat, don't let me catch you) →Madara PKed the Kyuubi, and he couldn't beat it by cutting off one tail in anger, and the protagonist appeared (it should be released at this time) A BGM of Ultraman) →The protagonist has to save people first, consuming a lot of chakra (Doctor, doctor, save!!!) →Two kaleidoscopes are about to defeat the Kyuubi, and two people lie down (one is too old, the other has no chakra) (with a BGM of the leader) →Okay, the male protagonist wakes up from a coma (my mission is completed) ! ) →The fourth generation Hokage and his wife are still in trouble (very good, give up, there is no hope) →Because Ichibi gave the tail that he had chopped off to Kyuubi, he was resurrected with full blood (this is Retsuo! Retsu! Are you?!!! Retsu!!) →The fourth generation couldn't beat him, so he used the technique of sacrificing the whole family (Sun Xiaochuan. Face) →The male protagonist Wake up (Yuanshen! Activate!!!) →Using the resurrection technique and the kaleidoscope to summon the souls failed (can it work? Xigou) →It turns out that it is due to the delay in network speed. There is a delay of about a day from the signal from the Yang world to the underworld (Yin Yang Dao makes a grand appearance) →Very good, prepare (Resurrection, my love!!!) Losing my love, everything is defeated

After so long of preparation, Madara was pulled out to fly Gundam, and then forced to kill the four-generation couple in the story. It really ruined the appetite, especially with the modification of the original plot to have Madara come out and protect Konoha. Returning to the original world line is too disgusting.

Do you know why I gave up the book? You will regret it if you continue watching

Are you willing to pay me to watch you write the original plot? Obito turned black, Rin died the same, Orochimaru's defection was nothing, he knew what the Nine-Tails would do when Naruto was born, but he didn't make any preparations, Madara severely injured the Nine-Tails right next to the protagonist and died the same way as the fourth generation couple, oh, they lived one more leaf bank 😄 than the original. Anyone can die, but the protagonist's woman cannot die.

The Night of Nine Tails really exploded! The protagonist has done so many things before and after, and it is a kaleidoscope, and it is foreshadowing Madara and Izuna, causing age spots and White Zetsu™ to ignite, and there is no such thing as Susanata Buddha, but the plot remains the same, the fourth generation couple must die, and the protagonist has The resurrection technique, but it didn't work, was patched later, saying that Madara had tampered with the protagonist (disgusting). The protagonist's biggest role was to successfully disable most of Uchiha's combat power. Tobirama's resurrection had to give the protagonist a big thumbs up! Praising him as a good Uchiha, Danzo would have to say that the protagonist is a good teammate, and Fugaku would have to ask the protagonist for advice on how to lead the Uchiha clan!

Yecang

I think if you exclude the heroine, this book is 90% good. As I said again... The heroine is not a necessary character in a book. If you can't write, don't write…

It's disgusting. The emotional line is disgusting. If you want to accept a harem, just say so. The protagonist loudly says I don't want it, I'm not that kind of person, and then creates some double-hearted plots. It's not that you don't want to accept a harem. You, the author, said it's okay to accept a harem. Readers know, but then you write a protagonist who treats female characters like a fool. How do you plan to develop the emotional line. Originally, Ye Cang's emotional line was well written, but it has not appeared in more than a hundred chapters. She plays house with Tsunade every day, causing Mikoto to misunderstand her. Every time she wants to explain clearly, she makes a abrupt twist to let the story move into the next plot. It's not that you can't write about these girls, but you can write it better. The main character is written like a bitch

The author most likely didn't write an outline. The further he goes, the more he writes. It's all about daily life, and the plot doesn't move forward at all. The heroine doesn't appear in dozens of pictures, and the protagonist licks Mikoto, Tsunade, and Kushina every day, which is inexplicable. I don't know how to write about the night when the clan was exterminated. Loulan jumped through time and came to the past. I also wanted to see how the author dealt with the Uchiha family, but in the end, they were all wiped out in one stroke. It's hard to write some plot, but something has gone wrong in the last few chapters, so it's estimated that there will be dozens more daily chapters. I couldn't stand it any longer. I skipped through the last few dozen chapters and said goodbye.

On November 24th, Chapters 258 to 283 will be replayed. These chapters are not good to read, so it is recommended to skip them. This country of bears is inexplicable. Write a silly star ninja who likes to brag. He sacrifices others inexplicably. He can get along with Susana Go50 inexplicably. The sacrificed person is alive, the inexplicable rude and unjust so-called love of the two-star ninja, Summary, this article about the Bear Country, battle water, plot water, dog feeding history, if you read this paragraph and want to read what is written, skip 258 to 282, just go to chapter 283.