The Fiery Age, Flying Life

I've been keeping it for a few days and I finished reading it all today. It's a watershed moment when it's released. In one chapter, the author said he was trying to code on his phone at work before it was released. I believed it. You can read it before it is put on the shelves. The plot is average and the book quality is good. After it was released (the protagonist started going to college), the characters became more fleshed out and three-dimensional, and the plot was no longer slapstick like before. I haven't missed a chapter until today. I got 6 points before it was put on the shelves and 8 points after it was put on the shelves. In fact, every character in this book is interesting. Let's talk about the protagonist first. From the beginning, he wisely protects himself, gets involved in an accident, and then goes to the south to pick up people (this plot is understandable, but the writing is too bad). His mentality is unbalanced (this change is incomprehensible), and then he listens to the advice to go to college (the earliest I remember is that the protagonist wants to go to college). The protagonist shows his self-worth. From here on, I decided to continue to follow and look forward to the follow-up development. The character that impressed me the most was Li Wei, maybe because it was so miserable. The veteran surnamed Song also had some impressions. At first I thought he was a steady soldier who truly loved the protagonist (we could get together), but I didn't expect him to be a braggart in nature. Then there is Professor Huo Cheng, who seems to be a stranger. The impression may be that he appeared in the latest chapter. There is also an instructor who appeared after it was released. He feels the same as the instructor named Song. He felt very stable when he was a passerby at first, but then became petty, vindictive, and funny. He is a very interesting character. He feels like true love when he quarrels with the protagonist (the instructor named Song and the protagonist are together), and the small details of secretly drinking are also very cute. To be honest, it's better to have these three people together, because the heroine really has no sense of existence. I hope there will be a real heroine in the future.

I don't know if it's poisonous or not, but the writing is good, there are flaws, and it's not brainless. The person next door complains about being brainless and has no common sense? He said he didn't have an eight-pound hen. What a coincidence. I ordered one from the chicken farmer in our village yesterday. He killed it and delivered it today and it weighed more than ten pounds. He still raises free-range chickens on the mountain and eats bugs. He occasionally feeds corn, rice and other grown-up native chickens, let alone modern feed chickens, which will only be heavier. You insist that the chicken taken out from the protagonist's space can only weigh five or six kilograms. This is just like an ordinary person who is 1.7 Meters tall and weighs 65 kilograms. Suddenly a big guy of 1.8 Meters tall and weighs 90 kilograms appears. You insist on saying that it is impossible. He is like an alien. Does this author have no common sense, or does the poster from the building next door have no common sense?

Why does this book look so much like a courtyard house?

I gave it up, I can learn from it, the bloody plot is OK, and I'm not close buddies with Shazhu, and during the holidays, I just eat a meal cooked by him and talk about everything? Or make a lot of noise in public places in the kitchen and call people widows a bus! The news got out and the widow's job was going to be bad! Don't tell the truth. If you want to help Shazhu break up, you can mention it secretly in private. If you want to fix the widow, you can disguise yourself and find idle people to spread the gossip in private. You don't tell the truth with this loudspeaker. When the people who spread the news ask the truth, the person who spreads the news will definitely tell the truth! So and so said that! The source of the spread is only you. You won't say anything to other people in the factory, nor will you say anything to the factory leaders! A widow who doesn't hesitate to kill her son knows it's easy to stab you twice! You are not afraid if there are cheats, but so are your family members? Have you been watching? Or do you eliminate the trouble and silence it?

To be fair, the first ten chapters of stealing chickens and blind dates look like a courtyard house, but the characters are completely different. The widow in the protagonist's courtyard is very similar to Qin Huairu, but not at all similar. After the tenth chapter, the whole character in the book is completely different, and the transformation is very natural. The main plot of the book is roughly revealed in the twentyth chapter. It should be daily life + testing in the early stage, earning achievements in the middle stage, and joining the political and military in the middle and late stages. Because of the space setting in the later stage, I guess the protagonist will definitely go to sea to do business. It feels pretty good so far. The character creation is good, and the plot is logical and not bloody.

I would like to recommend a book to everyone, The Mage in the Late Qing Dynasty, it's really awesome!

The quality of today's update is not good. Let's wait for a while and then check it out.

There are too many flaws, and it is a completely mindless and enjoyable article. Can't go into details.

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The writing is very good, but there is a very important question. Why are Siheyuan and Silly Pillars added at the front of the book? That is to attract traffic and has to be done. The author changed everything about the name, which is not good for the book. If you just use the original names, your results will be much better.

Have you considered writing this into a modern urban novel? Personally, I think it should be possible. Open a poultry and vegetable supermarket to make money.

Who are you, the heroine? There are disadvantages to having one of you appear in these chapters. It looks like Aquaman.