You Were Made a National Treasure, but You Became a Pet and Was Controlled?

After reading about ten chapters, the design of one segment is pretty good, the writing style is okay, but the writing style needs to be improved. I have to say that the ideas here are really good, and I am looking forward to the two "people" confessing and collaborating.

The book title is formatted like a studio script. 😅 The plot is quite attractive so far. 👍

Kung Fu Panda😅

Why don't you change that understanding to be a specific number? After all, this understanding is not too heaven-defying.

I don't want to say anything, but I recommend the introduction, and the two books are complete in one go.

Open a suggestion thread. If you have any suggestions and opinions, you can directly submit them. 😭😭

Your sonic boom is not powerful enough. I suggest you take a look at the lion's roar technique used by the renter and the renter in "Kung Fu" when he fought against the Fire Cloud Evil God.

After reading the first chapter, I felt that it was a good start. Why did the author fail to write it? Give me an idea. The core selling points of your book are 1. The interaction between the male and female protagonists, 2. The male protagonist's uniqueness as an anthropomorphic panda (such as helping the female protagonist train other pet animals, and doing some anthropomorphic things to surprise humans). You can write a little about the daily life of competing for pets, and share it with others. The pet should be well designed. For example, the male protagonist can have a dark panda character who specializes in exploiting the resources of his master and other beast pets, but also leads them like a big brother... For this kind of subject, I don't know why I only have 5,000 collections. There is a slight problem with the title of your book, but it's not a big problem.

Write quickly, there are too few 😃😃

All the flags of Pet Beast are planted,

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

Panda + warrior? Got it, it's Jianguo Poseidon!

Come on, the spirit beast card maker is also good-looking. He also has a bear-like beast

If you really want to take up martial arts, I suggest you take a look at the martial arts bear master and watch the evolution.

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