I Handed over to Another World

However, the author's experience is not enough, and his thinking is very self-centered. He does not try to figure out the psychology of the characters, but writes whatever he thinks. A soldier is not like a soldier, an official is not like an official, and a scientific researcher is not like a scientific researcher. . .

The idea is good, but the writing is too poor, and there are a lot of flaws in the logic. The creativity is too deep, and you can't grasp it as the author. This requires at least a level 5 master, so a master can take it away 😄😄😄

It is true that it is very important and cannot be used as a saint in front of others. However, the rights of the protagonist are too small, and the other female supporting characters are also coy and coy. You can either accept them all and stop talking about them here, or don't write them, and write them all about infrastructure exploration.

There are a lot of loopholes in the setting, as well as the plot, and chapter comments will be deleted. Real cooperation will not let the protagonist run around, causing many accidents at the portal. We use association to refer to the country, but apart from wanting to eat alone, the association is mentally retarded. There's something wrong with a bunch of arrangements. In addition, the waves of water planets will not affect Haiti at a certain depth. This is the same as the earth. Have you ever seen a submarine sunk by a typhoon? Then the base arrangement is also mentally retarded. Can't the glass tube be directly connected to the water? Be sure to get a platform under the door. Then they piled materials that would damage the glass on the platform to destroy the lift channel. They were all discussing it in a meeting, but they didn't even notify me when things got worse five minutes ago? Because the big guys are speaking, two or three thousand people can be sacrificed? Then the protagonist can solve the problem with just a roar! What nonsense? Are you the deputy secretary of the Republic? The same goes for the emotional plot. Lin Yun must be included. He obviously has no emotions, but Lin Yun's father designated him to have feelings immediately? Then the elves and princesses can be discarded! The magic setting is also a mess. At the beginning, there is a floating stone, which can also work on the earth, and then it will deplete. Later, it is directly said that the magic will disappear instantly in an alien plane. Then there is no ability to store energy crystals. A bunch of settings either conflict or have problems.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh please write one more chapter, there are really too few themes that can make my eyes shine now. Please seal it with your monthly pass, please add more.

After looking at it all the way, it is generally very good. Let me talk about a few of the poisonous points that I personally think. 1. When the protagonist first demonstrated his ability to the relevant departments, he actually did it openly in the restaurant. I can't understand it 2. The first time the team explored a different world, the team found gold in an underground cave. Without knowing anything about it, they made the idea of ​​a team exploration. The reason is that if they get the gold, they can get back their money by exploring this time 🤤. Brother, this is a national-level mission, and you have to risk it with a third-rate person. Like the team, they are basically brainless 3. The third point is the safety of the protagonist. In addition to personal danger, the most important point is that the author has completely failed to consider that the existence of this portal is completely dependent on the protagonist. In other words, if the protagonist dies of old age, the portal will be gone. It is conceivable that in the future, at the end of the day, the profits brought by this portal to Guo Jia may be hundreds of billions. In this case, the protagonist is not equipped with the best nutritionist, personal medical staff or something?

I suggest the author change the reporting process. Listening and reading are confusing. When encountering something with a clear confidentiality level, it is better to go directly to the military area where the People's Liberation Army is standing guard with guns than to make a phone call to poison the readers. I don't know where the military district went directly to the city public security bureau and said that I had several 500,000 yuan affairs that threatened the safety of myself and my family. Someone will take it seriously. Although it may be troublesome, it is better than deliberately poisoning. It is slightly safer if you see the city level or military district or regiment level or above. Any organization you call is a scam.

The first chapter is silly. If you really have the ability to open portals and want to report it, go directly to the police station. After arranging on-site demonstrations and proving the relevant information, the relevant situation will be reported directly to Tianting within an hour. Then the supreme leader will directly instruct to arrange the highest level security, a biosafety level five laboratory, and arrange various wired and wireless drones and robots and other detection systems. Environmental parameters, including gravity, ambient temperature, radiation, air composition, comparison with Earth's day and night time, detection of environmental microorganisms, and collection of animal and plant data and specimens. If humans can adapt to the local physical environment, armed personnel will be arranged to wear full spacesuits to explore, and an exploration base will be gradually established. It's childish to report the whole folklore research association. The portal technology and the different worlds connected to it by living creatures are of immeasurable value. If such a thing really happens, it will be very fast to follow the normal reporting procedures. Afterwards, those with knowledge will be required to strictly abide by confidentiality regulations, and they and their family members will be transferred to relevant departments. Or, just like during the period of research on the atomic bomb, the family members only know that the person is still alive, where they are, and what they are doing, but they have no idea at all.

Hahahahahahaha, so funny. There are people who work alone and want to cooperate with the state every day and turn it over to the state, and there are a lot of people who don't believe this or that. Why are you reading the book?

I've read Chapter 30 and want to complain about how toxic this female researcher is? Let the protagonist play with experimental weapons? It's so fucked up that your hands are the most important part of your body, why are you allowed to play like this? The security guard and this woman around me should be transferred without being shot. Please give me some logic. In the next chapter, the protagonist is encouraged to open a portal privately and take her to another world. I am speechless~ I hope the author will stop doing this. I will give you a monthly ticket~

What feels most abstract is that the management actually agreed to let the protagonist move freely in another world with a few people to protect him. You must know that if the protagonist dies in an accident, everyone in the other world will not be able to return.

When developing a different world with a country, these two prerequisites must be added to prevent it from appearing poisonous. 1. The first world is particularly dangerous. The protagonist almost died when exploring alone for the first time, and then he searched for a country. 2. The ability to travel is bound.

Doesn't the author think there are too many bad guys and moles inside? There are also many people who are living without food, and people who are willing to sacrifice their lives for profit. The protagonist should directly demand that all the bad guys in the country be eliminated after realizing his ability to do this, otherwise the door will not be opened. This condition is beneficial to the country and you personally, and there are many greedy people in high positions. Moreover, the protection of the protagonist is not rigorous, and it actually allows the protagonist to play with guns that explode. If the protagonist is gone, they will have nothing. I, an ordinary person, understand this truth. It makes no sense that so many think tanks at the national level do not understand. This kind of thing has already involved the national destiny. At least arranging for 24-hour protection is a basic operation, right? What if there are one or two people who hate the Kuomintang? Or what about some accidents? Who can guarantee that. The author still has not raised his thinking to the level of national and national interests, and a large part of it remains in the personal adventure style time-travel plot. And once this kind of news is leaked, it may become a major national event targeted by the whole world, and not everyone can participate. It is impossible to write this kind of article if your thinking is too limited. After all, it is an entire world's resources, extraordinary power, and the possibility of increasing your life span. This kind of thing can already be raised to the level of fighting the Fourth World War.

This type of protagonist can just be a door opener and a television set, but if the author keeps adding drama to the protagonist, it will be disgusting.

I read a book where the protagonist was about to turn in the book but was cut off midway. He was tortured for many years and then finally died and was reborn.

According to the level of security in this article, the protagonist would have died eight hundred times.

Let's talk about a practical question. If an ordinary person really has this kind of ability, he must find the best solution for the country. Ordinary people only pursue fame and fortune. These benefits must be given by the country the most.

Generally speaking, I still support the author's writing on this subject matter, but it can be seen that the author's writing is relatively shallow and casual. I only looked at the first few dozen pictures. A new world, and then said that the value of this world has increased by one dimension after the discovery of gold. Haha, the end point of a new world does not lie in resources. It first lies in the expansion of human boundaries. Just like it does not matter what aliens look like. As long as the news of the existence of aliens is confirmed, human society will have huge changes. Therefore, the value of a new world first lies in the expansion of human boundaries and the improvement of human consciousness, rather than the importance that has increased by one dimension after the discovery of gold. Not to mention planning to immigrate in three months haha.

Before I finished reading the first two chapters, I was fed by Shi. The first few chapters of any novel are where the author needs to pay the most attention, and this author is very good and has successfully screened out his target users. Share the defense and give everyone a taste. At the beginning, the protagonist awakened to the portal. He was not in a hurry to enter. He tried it with items. It was very good. He was very cautious and sensible. Like it? Then, start feeding rocks. The protagonist awakened the portal, and the first thing he did was to post it in the group. I understand that the author here wants to express the joy, surprise and bewilderment that ordinary people feel after getting a golden finger. Later, I wanted to express it through the reactions of the group friends. Most people would not believe this kind of thing. It was pretty normal up to this point, and then it was a big mess. The protagonist wants to report Goldfinger. Some people will scold the protagonist. I understand, because the main plot of the book is to cooperate with the country, which is okay. But what I don't understand is the protagonist's brain circuit, or the author's brain circuit. If a normal person makes a report, they can think of either the police, the military, the fire department, the national security, or even the administrative center or the neighborhood committee. I can understand it. But the protagonist refused, saying that if he reported it to them, he would be arrested as a mental illness, and then he found some unnatural research institution in a country that was so unpopular that it couldn't be unpopular. What's the result? Others still don't believe it? Are you kidding me? If both sides don't believe it, then what are you trying to do to make this department believe you by just telling you the contents of Chapter 2? Of course, some people will refute that this is God's perspective. Before the protagonist made this call, he would not know that the other party did not believe it. Then why don't you take a look at what the protagonist was thinking before. Also, do you want to think again about why this official institution is so unpopular that it can no longer be unpopular? The above are the superficial reasons that made me die of poisoning, but the author's ability behind it was the main factor that made me abandon the book. It's just that the author's ability to conceive plots and control online articles does not meet my requirements. Submitting Goldfinger itself is a big poisonous point in online articles. Because of this, the author is afraid of being scolded, and even limits the comments of fans. He also leaves a leaflet saying that some readers don't even read the title of the book and scold them when they come in. But how is this possible? You're not even level 5, is it necessary that you don't even read the book, and then I just spray you? So, I guess the author's thinking is similar to the fact that I have written the title of the book and want to hand it in, so why are you still scolding me? They must all be little Heizi. But in my opinion, the author did not clearly explain why the protagonist should submit it to the system. Has the protagonist written a purpose in Chapter 1? No. What about Chapter 2? No, he is "seeking" the trust of the organization. The first two chapters are not there, so why should we bet that you have what we want behind you. From this point I can see that the author cannot grasp the readers' thoughts and does not know what we want to see. (This is subjective) The author's idea also made me laugh. I don't know how I came up with this scenario of reporting to an unpopular organization. It kind of exceeded my imagination. You are the author and haven't thought about it. He can innovate an organization that is not popular among the public. You have to say that he has thought about it. I feel that this report is no different from directly telling other departments that he thinks about it. (The prerequisite for accepting this is to ignore that the protagonist can easily prove himself) Quite humorous. Of course, the above evaluation is mostly subjective. Feel free to comment.

The best book I have ever read is City: Starting from Train to Busan. The protagonist has a stable IQ and is online. He sues the country about being able to use portals to travel through various worlds. There is a nationwide secret mobilization. The protagonist's security level is armed to the teeth. The supreme commander gives him rights higher than his own. Then Begin to lead a modern group army to conquer the zombie world, martial arts world, magic world, animation world, etc., And bring the people and combat power of these other worlds to conquer the starry sky, outer universe, etc., And the United Civilization has risen from less than level one at the beginning to the god level, great god level, and misty level above level nine,? Super civilization and so on, it is still being serialized. I feel that this is the best cross-dressing cross-dressing article I have ever read 🙂

The country's attitude towards the protagonist is too lax. As for the importance of the protagonist, the head of a country cannot compare with it. A country is composed of multiple interest groups. If each faction wants to move forward, they have to focus on the protagonist. However, in the article, the people in the system around the protagonist are too two-dimensional.

The protagonist's mysterious operation: ① After discovering the cheat, send it to the black group immediately. ② I didn't know how to contact the country, so I found a phone number in the phone book on the corner of the boss's desk? IQ is worrying

Like this, if the protagonist is not irreplaceable, he will definitely be replaced. If he is irreplaceable but does not have invincible force value, he will be subject to various restrictions and research. If the protagonist is irreplaceable and has invincible power, then sooner or later the country will become a vassal of the protagonist!

What can I say? After reading the previous article, I highlighted a protagonist who is not afraid of death or harm to his family. The confidentiality of the handover process is basically written to pieces. After verifying this set of procedures, the information has not been released for a week. Even if the spies' 500,000 yuan is nothing, they are nothing 🙂

At first, I was wondering why I couldn't get out of the circle, so I added a hundred dollars to say that I pulled it out after seeing Chapter 29. The protagonist went to experiment with firearms and exploded the chamber. It was a bullshit plot.

If a capable person can do something, the world will be a lot whiter, that is, a man can only have a relationship with one woman in his life, and vice versa for women, unless they are divorced and remarried, and if they remarry, they can only find someone who is also divorced. Those are strict restrictions, because most men in power have wealth and sex. Power and fame, because wealth and sex do not separate families, and the relationship between the sexes is restricted, people's pursuit of money and power will be much smaller. It is enough to support the family and have a surplus, and they cannot mess around outside. Most people will only run the small family well, pass on the family line and raise children, and will not go to great lengths to be greedy, because they will not use it.

Has the author read too many manuals for conquering other worlds? Many of the plots are very similar to that, such as Gaussian weapons, electromagnetic pulse bombs used by the opposing country, and so on. It is recommended that the author learn from the "Time and Space Development Guide", "Did You Make a Mistake in the First Time Travel and Hitting the Hydrogen Bomb", and "A Nationwide Developing a Different World". This book has a better treatment for the protagonist than the "Time and Space Development Guide", but it is too stupid. How can the protagonist be so brainless? My evaluation of the "Time and Space Development Guide" does not open a harem. My evaluation is average, but you are the main character. Can't the characters be shaped seriously? And don't always write with a smile. How many times has this book appeared and said with a smile? The author should write less like this. It's really okay once or twice, but why do you always write like this? It makes me very annoyed. I suggest that the people in it should laugh less or not laugh at all. I guess your book is very different from "Handbook of Conquest of Other Worlds". The plot is too similar.

Don't be a eunuch, this book suits my taste very well! !

I have a map, but I don't have a sense of location every time I look at it.

It feels like the author has forgotten all the people and things at the beginning. The elves disappeared, the spells were lost, and he walked all the way to Gao Wei until the end.