America Reborn 1978

😁The story is interesting, the pace is tight, and the characters are vivid and interesting. I just got into it today and have already voted for 7 recommendations.

The writing is a bit messy, but it's not messy, it should be scattered. If you want to start with newspaper media, don't write about things related to banks. It would be redundant to write a lot of twists and turns. Although the problem was solved in the end, the loan was not rushed to be repaid, and an extra amount of money was borrowed, the ending was not satisfying. You might as well have taken over the newspaper normally from the beginning, and then used your own knowledge of future generations to develop and grow it, which would make Lairan readers happy. The author should not write too many inexplicable things. The protagonist's life and interactions with teachers and classmates are acceptable, but inexplicable conflicts with classmates are not necessary. The introduction is beautifully written, but the content is not focused. The person in the bank is so disgusting to the protagonist, but the protagonist doesn't have any revenge. The person is so disgusting in the beginning. The revenge should be more hateful, so that readers will enjoy it, otherwise it is better not to write it. The author should know that people who read online novels are all looking for something to relax their minds, and they all want to find an imaginary world to empty their minds. What you wrote is neither relaxing nor happy, and rather scattered. It's hard to find me interested. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

What is it about? Does the night battle have something to do with the protagonist? There are so many nonsense, psychological descriptions, and social descriptions. Fight on the street

The pace is too slow. We have all worn the old beauty, complete primitive accumulation as soon as possible, make a fortune, and experience the dire straits of capitalism. Later, I will develop directly to the Tianlong people.

I'm really annoyed by those novels where the protagonist is the enemy of everyone and is constantly in trouble. It's disgusting.

Come on, you should be killing it in finance instead of going to a nursing home. It's boring to write this.

Can you tell me what you are writing about?

You don't have an outline, right? The tactic of being the enemy of the whole world is no longer popular. I read dozens of chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. The Bank of Capitalism is at the top of the food chain. You just said a few words and added the threat of dirty information to get someone else done. This is too childish!

There are dozens of chapters from the beginning that have nothing to do with the main plot. The plot was randomly branched out before the main plot was written, and the rhythm of picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon was lost.

Please sort out the outline carefully. Don't talk about comrades fighting at night. Is this related to your main plot? You can't even rely on your introduction, right? Yours is not a gangster novel, right? For the business development stream, just write about business development properly, and don't engage in random things. Originally, it seemed that the development of a newspaper was quite interesting. Some of them were about night battles, and some were about comrades. The drama was very serious, so I felt that it was written in another way. It's a novel, but it still doesn't have a main character. I really don't go off topic. I feel like if I don't go on like this without 20 chapters, I'll be too censorious 🙂 If I can't do it, I'll delete the useless ones before they're on the shelves. It's too discouraging 😅

I waited patiently until I read Chapter 30. What on earth do you want to write? You have to clean up the bank. Why are you spending time with the nursing home every day? Even if there are shady transactions between them, how much of the bank can account for it? Even if it is publicized, do you think people hate the nursing home more or the bank? You just hit the mosquitoes with a cannon and can't tell who is who.

What I wrote after it was put on the shelves was even more inexplicable. He has always boasted that he had studied economics in his previous life. He insists on spending $80,000 to buy things that can be bought for $60,000. The explanation is that he wants to establish a cooperative relationship. Let me ask, this guy who sells shoes is at the end of his rope. You are already conscientious enough not to lower the price, but you also take the initiative to increase the offer? It was too late for him to be grateful for being able to buy the other party's things when he was at the end of his rope. He foolishly pretended to be a saint, which obviously didn't make sense logically, so he said goodbye 🙏

Write well about how to develop a newspaper, and slowly start a business. Don't write about those things that have something but not enough. The military and other things have nothing to do with your main story. It is not a gangster novel. The plot is scattered and confusing. It is very interesting to write about how you run a newspaper. Some of you did not lay the groundwork in the early stage and it is easy to fail. Nowadays, there are very few articles about the development of modern foreign business. If you write well, many people will read it. Sincerely don't do it 🙂

What is the use of the businesses you wrote in your profile? Do you have core competencies?

The plot is too scattered and unattractive

This book is bound to be a hit. The first 30 chapters are written like shit. The writing style can't even compare to Tomato's brainless and cool article.

I just finished watching The Bank, and it feels good to summarize it. It thoroughly reveals the crux of the old American society. Mr. Lu Xun's cannibalism is too profound, and it is inadvertently humorous. A person born at the bottom has become a dog of the upper class through hard work, but when the interests are inconsistent, he still keeps the secret, leaving the owner to continue to be confused in the foggy forest. This paragraph gave me an understanding, and I finally understood what the saying about why not eat minced meat was about. But the requirements for readers are too high. If you can't read slowly, you won't be able to understand. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

The pace is a bit slow, so there will be fewer and fewer readers.

Shennong is here. The first seven are coming soon.

The subject matter is pretty good, it's straight out of Hollywood. At that time, there was, Audrey Hepburn

Excuse me? As for the protagonist, is he American? Still Chinese, why do you still have Chinese ancestry? Can this protagonist and this author write?