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The writing is a bit exciting and too dense. The pace is very fast and almost never stops. I suggest adding some entertaining variety shows or daily life in the middle. It will be much better.
Oh my god, the opening scene is awesome, the protagonist sings the most dazzling ethnic style right after his adoptive father dies, what do fans and netizens think?
After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. My DNA was about to riot. Your father died and you sang the most dazzling ethnic style. You even pulled your sister to sing along. How happy are you when your father died? Why didn't you dance on the grave or dance in the mourning hall?
From 37 to 44, I was still in Shanhe. I clearly finished copying the lyrics quite quickly before, but why is it so slow now? It's like being a different person. If you are kidnapped, I just blink. If I can't save you, I'll give you a 🚓. If there is nothing to write about, why not write about daily life. Anyway, my sister's affection for my brother has begun to deteriorate. Why don't we all change together? Start running in both directions, sprinkle some dog food, interspersed with singing songs, and add those shocking and exclamatory words to the lyrics. It is best not to go past 3-4 chapters. Now it's not on the shelves and everyone doesn't spend money. It's no big deal. Once it's on the shelves, readers start spending money. If you still write like this, you will definitely get half the time (maybe more). If your grades are not good, you will start to show off, and the more you show off, the worse it will be. Then, eunuch, you have lost your character and you haven't earned any money, and your time has been wasted. The plot you thought about in your head, and the words you typed with your hands are all scrapped, and you are losing blood on both sides Unless you can imitate the eagle, the price is tens of thousands per day, and the thousands of words in the middle cannot be seen at all. The main focus is on large quantities and sufficient management.
Too much poison
Obviously, when describing a very sad moment, the author used words such as innocent boy, innocent girl, beautiful face, big watery eyes, and fairy sister. This is only the content of the first two chapters. What is even more amazing is that after passing through, he is actually interested in his own sister. Can you be a human being? The 18-year-old innocent boy and the 16-year-old innocent girl in the back sang the most dazzling folk songs even though their father had just died, making the brothers happy. They couldn't handle it, it was too poisonous.
Who copied whom?
The first three chapters are directly fed to the readers💩
Although I am an adopted son, I am disgusted by the lustful way of writing about my sister, so I directly persuaded him to quit the book because of the way of writing about relatives in the third chapter.
The author's writing is still within the standard, with many poisonous points and many bright spots. I really can't accept the love between brother and sister. I also have a younger sister. Thinking about it makes my head explode.
Good guy, you sing a song to pave the way for one chapter, the beginning of one chapter, the opening of singing for one chapter, the singing process for one chapter, and the influence of the song for one chapter. If you write a song like this, you can write five chapters. If you are shameless enough, the middle lyrics and the psychological activities of the protagonist can even cover one chapter.
It's not as good as "What does Getu have to do with me? I only have a few words"
It's disgusting. I saw my sister changing clothes and going to take a shower. She was distraught, and she was still hinting that she couldn't do it at least for the time being. Your adoptive father just died, and you have such thoughts about this girl. It's really disgusting.
A rubbish book title will make you XX, but you will XX in the end. As disgusting as listening to persuasion
I'm really annoyed by people who write novels and make movies while singing. Will there be any poetry, calligraphy, etc. Done later?
Xu Feng: Roll up, roll up! Damn it all!
I couldn't stand it anymore after reading the second chapter. Even my sister, who I grew up with, had some beastly thoughts and gave up decisively. Those who didn't read it were also careful to be poisoned!
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The sister who is not her biological sister is one of the most disgusting plots. It is either directly set as a lover or directly set as a biological sister. People who grew up together cannot become lovers, except for perverts
Things are going well in the front, getting better and better. As a result, I started to work hard from Chapter 63 and let myself go. I didn't understand the meaning of it, and I didn't see any advancement in the main line of the novel's career. Having died of poison, bid farewell.
Seeing that my ability to write novels and directing has faded, I don't like to watch all-round protagonists. Originally, writing lyrics and composing music is enough, but I am afraid that someone who is proficient in all instruments will come to direct novels. . . Bye-Bye
Is it unlucky to sing "" at the New Year Party?
After reading the comments, I feel that they are not very friendly. To put it another way, my family is so poor that I can't blame them. I make money to support my adoptive father's biological daughter. Personally, I feel that there is nothing wrong with whatever I do. It is all about repaying the favor.
If you want to ask for leave, just ask for leave. If you want to be a eunuch, just ask.
What is the difference between these two books?
What is the difference between these two books?
Is this considered plagiarism? All are Phoenix legends
Poisoned to death in the first chapter, forcibly creating a protagonist who is poor and owes money
Slipping away
Maybe it's not suitable for me. At the beginning, a group of relatives come to demand debts from a group of relatives who have just died and are talking crazy. Although I know that this kind of thing happens in reality and is even more outrageous, it is really annoying when I see it in the novel, because I feel that even if my relatives want money, they will not rush to find the two children just after their father died and force them to sell the house to pay back the money. The money will definitely be asked for, but you can also think of a way. You insist on making people look lifelike to death, and are you not afraid of being used as a piece of meat by others? After all, I can't even afford bread, so robbery is nothing.
I can only read the first 10 chapters. The rest of it is a mess.
It's a bit like a mortal taking a plug-in and starting to upgrade. What I wrote in the front is in line with the main plot, but I don't know what I wrote in the back, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. Three songs were not enough to establish a foothold, and then I started making movies and TV shows and writing novels. In the end, I couldn't do any job well.
I retreated after reading one chapter. It was the first time I saw time travel without any background introduction. The setting at the beginning was so poisonous that I didn't even know what these authors were thinking.
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There is a reason why he published his book earlier, but his grades are far inferior to those next door.
Every time you spend money on krypton, the gold rises tenfold. If you spend six times on krypton, it will be tens of billions. When Father Ma comes, he will have to scream 🤫