Endless Reincarnation: Beginning with Prohibition

A journey through a fantasy world? What? Are you going to see Dr. Chen?

I hope the protagonist's character and abilities are worthy of the title of the book

I'm speechless. Pig's trotter won 10,000 US dollars in a gang boxing match and was able to take it away safely. Does the author have some misunderstanding about gangs? Doesn't he think they really have rules? At this time, a Chicago typewriter was only $200! What's even more speechless is that he still dislikes the lack of money!

The protagonist's previous performance does not look like someone who can cultivate to Sanxian. I hope the author can improve it.

In fact, it's okay, but I don't feel that the protagonist has a character who has cultivated to immortality, and he looks like an ordinary person.

What kind of god are you? If you don't understand, please go to Baidu and look up the immortal's abilities.

The quality of a novel is not decided by the author, but by all readers and data. If the novel is really good, then the data must be good and the author's income must be high. It makes no sense for one or two readers to be in the dark. If the novel is not good, no matter how much the author tries to whitewash it, it is just Wang Po's self-praising.

There is actually nothing wrong with the protagonist's performance. If he is really only in his twenties, then he is undoubtedly an elite. But once you remember that the protagonist has lived for a thousand years and will become an immortal soon, the protagonist's performance seems particularly immature, making people feel that he has lived for a thousand years in vain.

I suggest that the character of the protagonist in the first chapter should be changed. It's a big trap and unsightly. The loose immortal should be replaced by a novice qi-training monk. The weapon used to survive the thunder tribulation was jumped by the immortal in the box, but it was still a real immortal jump! Forget about the immortal jump, let's talk about the way the protagonist stores the weapons. What kind of ancient immortal cultivation setting is this? Could it be that the protagonist is in the web drama Hua Qiangu? A world where one can be called an immortal if one enters spiritual practice? Nowadays, almost all fairy cultivators, fantasy and even wizards have means of being absorbed into the body or placed in space equipment. It is really unbearable to see the protagonist cry out in grief and then immediately fall into a thunderstorm and be snatched away from the reincarnation. The first paragraph is about the identity and panel of the protagonist. You can read other suggestions and skip it otherwise it will affect the reading experience.

I used my friend's selfie to create a picture of the heroine. I hope you all like it.

I just read the first chapter. The background setting of the protagonist. The background of the character is too far away. I didn't expect the author to be able to write a style that suits the background of the protagonist, so I canceled it.

After reading the first chapter, I summarized the infinite space reconstruction of the immortal who experienced the love disaster and failed. I personally hate the setting of powerful reincarnation and immortals in previous lives. Moreover, this immortal still has complete memory. Knowledge = power. I am curious about what I am planning to cultivate again. I hope someone can reply to me after reading it.

Niche themes are not very eye-catching. Summary: It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The author's second volume seems to have been written by a different person. In the first volume, the protagonist's words, deeds, and psychological activities can generally match the character's identity. The second volume, just like the online broadcast of a certain ugliness review anchor, the drama of gods descending to earth, Wu Anjun Bai Qi, moving axis, big guy, let me perform it for you. . . Are you sure this is Wu Anjun? Instead, dear fellows, let me blow your head off? Although the author said that it is just a novel, but the character changes are so sudden and the character's behavior is irrational, he is really trying to overwhelm the readers. With the author's style in the first volume, nearly half of the readers attracted by the second volume will be persuaded to leave it. If it is just put on the shelves, the results are worrying. I strongly recommend that the author refines the second volume. I don't have much objection to the plot, but I do have objections to the writing.

The choice of specialization at the beginning is a bit taken for granted. I am a master of martial arts and have great control over the physical body. Learning firearms is not a matter of minutes. As the saying goes, one method can apply to all methods, there is essentially no difference between firearms and swords. It is a waste of talent.

I just have a question. I practiced to Sanxian in my previous life. How do I start boxing? After all, I have to practice some exercises or something, and then do the mission.

Pictures of the male protagonist running on AI, during the period of cultivation

Everything was explained at the beginning. No suspense at all

The Ziwu Yuanyang Yue that book friends want to see looks like this, like two antlers spliced ​​together.

Because the author updates 5,000 times a day, he is considered diligent in the field of civil servant novels. Come on.

You have messed up the settings in the first chapter, just write that you practiced martial arts in your previous life and then obtained the system to travel through the world infinitely. To be honest, the settings in the first chapter are too redundant. Because the first chapter drove away many people,

In the late Ming Dynasty, a biography of Shushan Swordsman could be written

Does the author have a group? If you don't have a group, can I create one?

I have applied for a name change, and after it is approved, I can finally delete the comments from a group of fans openly. Next time, I will use a popular novel name like Infinite Horror and Thriller Paradise from Gu Huo Bird~