Romance of Gods

Although the author's writing style is not up to the level that satisfies me, I feel that he wrote it carefully. If you practice more, I think you can do it. Come on, author.

I hope this book can help you spend some boring time, and everyone is welcome to rationally discuss, criticize or affirm it. But please don't be too violent (abusive). The author hopes to write a long novel that suits his personal interests, and also hopes to gain some financial benefits in the writing process, so a stable mentality is indispensable. Finally, all proceeds from this book will be used for the author's big fish and meat, Hu Tian Hu Di. I hope you can participate in my path of depravity.

Wang Lingguan!

The martial arts is unlimited, so far it seems pretty good. The only problem is that I am really worried about him being a eunuch, not to mention Gu Huo Niao. I watched Jiejie Sheng during the period of fire and the first eunuch in Jinmen. It feels like the curse suffered by the founder of the sect has been passed down to this sect. I have never seen a complete book so far. I hope you can break this curse.

The writing is good, but it is too literary and has turned away too many readers.

He placed Taoist gods in a Buddhist context and wrote a book, and the plot didn't dare to be unsophisticated at all. What can I say, I can see it. But I have no interest in pursuing it.

The battle scenes are well written, but the plot is all Hong Kong drama elements, and the characters have no explanation. Those who are not familiar with Hong Kong dramas will find it confusing.

The writing is great, the style obviously has its own thing, and the setting also has a feeling of innovation. It is different from the Cuckoo Bird. The first volume is very interesting, but I don't know what will happen later. I hope it can be written carefully. If it is written according to the standard of these chapters, it will definitely be a masterpiece In addition, I hope the author's mentality will not explode. I have read many books of this type and may have poor initial results or be criticized for being autistic. You must stick to your own ideas and write what you want to write.

I always feel that the characters in these new chapters are not well established, and the author has reached the second copy. Why is he still recreating the path of Gu Huo Niao? You can't write it. The blind character in Gu Huo Niao is too three-dimensional. . .

It feels like the Eight Dragons will be the back-up man of the Jiu camp. The person who gave the protagonist this thing was possessed by Jiu. In addition, the Jiu who gave away the head is very suspicious.

Using cigarettes to kill people is very bluffing at first, but later on it doesn't quite match the value of force.

The main problem is that the writing style is too concise, and it is difficult for readers to understand the clues at a glance.

Could it be that some big boss opened the trumpet, and then the eunuch?

The two generals, Turtle and Snake, are Tianmen generals transformed from Emperor Zhenwu's internal organs. When Emperor Zhenwu was practicing cultivation, he did not eat grains, and his stomach and intestines were so hungry that he upset him, so he took them out and threw them at his feet. Later, after Emperor Zhenwu became an immortal, his intestines and belly were stained with spiritual energy, and he became the two generals of turtle and snake, becoming the goalkeepers of Ertianmen (the first statement, source from Baidu Encyclopedia)

It's too chaotic, and I like to jump into the plot. I suddenly jump into the next plot without explaining the causes and consequences. I don't even know what the protagonist is doing? I thought I skipped a chapter, but when I looked back carefully I realized that I didn't say anything at all.

The author is too miserable. He only has 500 collections. As popular as Guhuoniao is, Lianguhuoniao is just as miserable!

There is no need to write so detailed descriptions of skills. Sometimes it is enough to be able to understand them roughly.

The skill introduction is too long-winded. You can clearly explain it in just a few sentences, but you have to go on and on a lot, making a simple introduction more complex and difficult to understand. Do you want to reduce the word count or show your proficiency?

Come on