My Girlfriend Is a Magical Girl

Regarding the plot of ex, I thought I saw the previous book again, but the time didn't match up. That book has hundreds of chapters. It couldn't be the same author that I accidentally read before, right? They are all powerful female plotters who plot against the protagonist, causing the protagonist to be in danger of death many times. The protagonist saves her in various ways, and finally develops into a heroine. The protagonist of the time traveler + system + the younger generation is invincible. The female is not the first female, her name is xxx Liuli, she is also a shrine witch. The male protagonist's name has a feather in it, seems to be called Hanyu? If you are scolded for writing this kind of plot, why do you insist on writing it?

Forgive me for my rudimentary talent, but I would like to ask about the introduction: Sweet love, unparalleled national scholars. Does this sentence have any special meaning? Or does Guoshi Wushuang have other meanings?

😓I feel like the first few chapters were okay, but after five chapters it started to get complicated. The protagonist seemed to have lost his own subjective initiative and took whatever others said. He was an inexplicable and self-righteous person who acted like an NPC was forced to issue tasks, and he even specifically set up the task. As a righteous partner, you, a normal person, are kidnapped, threatened, and pointed at a gun and still don't care, while a group of others are holding weapons. Is the protagonist really too arrogant or too brainless? Do you really think that you can get in and out of a crowd of people with just a gun? The next moment, a monster appears, and the hero saves the beauty and captures the heart of the underworld lady. It's so fucking bloody! Also, who cares if you are a woman? Women can do whatever they want? I feel a lot of grievances and anger, so why should I save you selflessly after being threatened and coerced by you? Just because she is a [female], I am really convinced. After getting in the car, I can run away but not run away. It seems that the protagonist knows in advance that the other person is a female and very beautiful, not a bald person. I always like the protagonist and want to cheat on the protagonist. It's really frustrating to watch. Normal people know how to avoid dangerous areas. [Protagonist] seems to have abandoned this most basic biological instinct since it appeared. As the saying goes, it will run wherever there is danger. After being in danger, it will fight back. This senseless danger can be avoided from the beginning. If you have a brain, just don't use it, just for fun A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall What I think is particularly outrageous is that the protagonist's lower biological suppression is really immune to male special attacks, while women are immune to all, and there are only a few places to activate it. The rest of the time, it seems that the sex is not activated, right? When I first watched it, I thought the plot would be triggered by this skill. There were various misunderstandings and coincidences, and I got to know some interesting characters, male and female partners. I didn't expect to just fight monsters on the spot and upgrade.

You are a time-traveler, you were an adult before you time-traveled, you have a system, you are a demon king, you are still timid when you want to be with the heroine, here you are having a childish Qiong Yao drama with the heroine, the heroine is afraid that she will bring trouble to the hero, the hero feels that he is not worthy of the heroine, and thinks that the heroine will have a better life when she returns to the family, it makes me feel aggrieved, has my mind been tamed by the chaebol after traveling to the past? Chen Sheng, who was born as a farmer, can still shout the slogan "Princes, generals, ministers, would rather be born". The protagonist has super powers. In a sense, he is no longer on the same level as ordinary people. Actually, because the heroine's family feels that he is not worthy of her, he is there to feel miserable and useless.

The protagonist is just a metamorphosed insect. The front and back are completely different. The outside is extraordinary hardware, but the inside is filled with the core of an ordinary person. If you feel that you are not worthy of your beloved son, you really can't stand it anymore. Brother, you are a devil after all. If you were a native, I would understand, but as an adult time traveler, has your brain been reset after reincarnation? Live a little proudly, okay?

Can you change the character of the protagonist quickly? It sounds like a Japanese Asashi at best, but it sounds like a coward and trash who can't recognize himself. The part where the protagonist says he is an ordinary person shouldn't be too poisonous. If you don't change it, why don't you change the protagonist's setting to an aborigine. The time traveler and the devil king panel tell me that I am an ordinary person. It's really disgusting.

After typing several lines back and forth, I finally gave it up. Those who can accept the so-called Japanese gentleness and mindless reading of novels can feel free to read. The entire male protagonist's behavior was forced by other people, which makes people feel disgusted and aggrieved.

After reading other book friends' comments, I won't talk about Qiong Yao's drama-style separation of the male and female protagonists and the male protagonist's personality. The setting of the magical girl is quite interesting. I think it is much better than the superpowers on the street. Personally, I think the biggest poisonous point is the removal of the ferocious passiveness - this is equivalent to directly changing the character, and it is a big change. The outside is cold and the inside is hot, and the fierce face is inside. The kind-hearted protagonist simply ceased to exist, and the halo of the boss vaguely brought about by the passive name also evaporated. The Demon King panel existed in name only, and by changing the name, the Hero panel was completely fine. Then the plot in the next chapter lived up to expectations and fell into the cliché... When the protagonist's characteristics are eliminated by the author, he can only be a useless wimp with low self-esteem.

To avoid the poison for you, although the protagonist is said to have a demon king template, he is a complete loser and has no arrogance of a time traveler at all. I don't understand why the author didn't read it when he wrote it? Doesn't he even feel sick? So don't think about getting some followers and writing comments to criticize the author, because the author is also making money while you are getting followers.

Although there are no cows, it is contaminated by the spirit of cows, so it is not suitable for people like me. This thing is very popular when it comes to girls

A book with good reviews may not necessarily be good, but a bunch of books with bad reviews must be toxic. If you don't delete your comments, you will definitely be on the street. If you delete your comments, you can trick some people into reading them, and then you will be on the street again.

It's a classic Qiong Yao-style love story, with all kinds of classic poisonous points. After reading Chapter 69, I really can't stand it. I've been reading books for so many years and I rarely post anything, but I really can't stand this one.

When I saw Chapter 68, I couldn't stand it any longer. The two were forced to separate, right? The male protagonist also lamented that he was a hammer, but he was still a person from two different worlds. The last time I had such a stomachache was the last time. At this time, you, Asasi, are a hammer, and your stomach hurts (ಥ_ಥ)(ಥ_ಥ)(ಥ_ಥ)

I wanted to write about a harem but was afraid of being scolded, but what I wrote turned out to be even more disgusting. A woman did this to the protagonist for so-called freedom, and the protagonist was still licking her. I was really convinced.

Is the author going to go through all the pitfalls of writing a light novel? Is this your first time writing a light novel? The subject matter is good, but the plot and characterization cannot be said to be very different from the light novel's light-hearted theme. It can also be said to be completely irrelevant. Is it in the wrong category?

At present, I only feel disgusted by the two women, especially Liuli. It's really disgusting that the male protagonist is so hesitant.

I have always emphasized that I want a peaceful life but don't show too much power, but in the end, the villain threatened the male protagonist's life with the lives of ordinary people he didn't know, and broadcast it all over the world, so that he could drag the people around him into danger and kill more people, right? 😆

After reading the latest chapter, do you feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain? First of all, has the protagonist forgotten his own strength? How can you still have this idea of ​​not being worthy? Is there something wrong with your brain? Another one, how long has it been since my beloved son was almost violated? Judging from the front, the Yuan family is not a kind family! Are you so confident that your son will go to the Yuan family? I really doubt what is going on in the protagonist's mind? Is it filled with water, or is it filled with chaff? And why was my previous comment deleted?

I'll go to your daily guide, it's too poisonous, it's too poisonous. Although most light novels are very poisonous, I really can't accept it because it's so strong and has a renaissance effect. I can just ignore it if it's logical or normal. Alas.

I don't want to watch the male protagonist Asasi, who is accommodating to others, and doesn't help others correct their mistakes. This thing itself has nothing to do with me, or it is a gang to the end. Don't always think about something for your own good. What's the use? Then you meet his mother and sell it again, right? 🤔🤔🤔

Before I show off, I always like to engage in some outrageous plots, which gives me the feeling of plating a cool novel with an ollie.

In order to save the lives of hundreds of people, they did not directly blow up the underground laboratory, causing the whole world to fall into chaos and causing even greater losses. It is estimated that there will be all kinds of troubles later, which is completely contrary to the protagonist hiding his identity at the beginning. And the protagonist looks particularly useless...

No, is there something wrong with your setting? The protagonist can detect that someone is following him, but not that someone wants to kill him. I just said that as long as there is no heavy firepower, he is not afraid, and then he is shot in the head by a man with a pistol. The heroine's story earlier can be said to have the beauty of an ancient novel, but if I don't say a word in this paragraph, I feel like there are ants crawling in my body. You can at least level up by overcoming the opponent. This paragraph can only be said to have the beauty of Kunjo Satori.

No, why did you stop updating?

That's it. It's over. It's still a bit unfinished.

It's okay, but the update is a bit slow

I'll give you a monthly pass and update it for me.

Come on, author, this month's vote is for you, don't stop.

I thought it was discontinued, but I didn't expect it to be finished. You might as well write a declaration of completion.

Ah? That's it, this bad appendix