The Heavens Begin with a Small Broken Window

Just write the plot? It's better to watch a TV show

Is the protagonist here to be a nanny? The setting is unreasonable, the logic is illogical, and the plot is forced

I went to Broken Window for the first time, I hope there is more plot 😐

Shu Ci is the first role, great ✌️✌️✌️

After reading more than sixty chapters, the protagonist is just a soy sauce guy?

To put it bluntly, the emotional lines between various characters have prerequisites. 1. The intersection between Gu Yixin and Pan Zhen is hamburger. Without this premise, if you want to make their emotional line reasonable, you must create a new story 2. Bi Shisan respected Lu Qiaochuan because of the intersection that occurred during the tuition fees and then exchanged food. The author solved the problem in advance here. To be reasonable, there must be an original plot. The same is true with Gu Yixin. Their intersection point was Pan Zhen at the military training base. The Hamburg incident was resolved in advance. Their intersection point was almost non-existent. Then he really fell in love with Gu Yixin because of the tuition fees and was solved by the protagonist. They had no soil for feelings to sprout.

This is not easy to write. Even if you have less education, you won't be able to understand. It's all emotional drama. Write the hodgepodge to make it clear and fresh. Not easy. . . . Not that much passion. Everyone has their own feelings, and the expression is not extreme. A master of writing this. . . . The author wants to start with this. Not easy. . . . I have read it dozens of times. . . . The characteristic of this game is the youth of ordinary people. . . . It's like watching flowers. No thanks for the flowers.

I should have found the author of the novel earlier, then I would have to advise the author to consider it. I have a friend

You've traveled through time, and you still have a lazy personality? How was it cultivated? As the saying goes, environment affects character! Don't look!

After reading a little bit, why does Luo Xue have to have a relationship with Bi Shisan?

Does the author like Bei Weiwei very much? We really shouldn't write like this that the protagonist likes Bei Weiwei. It feels a little bit submissive. I even wonder if there is a different author.

I've read a few chapters and don't know what it's about? Copied TV series?

What does "Little Broken Window" write about? 😢 It's just spring being a nanny. It's better not to write about it.

I hope the author will either write without a female protagonist, or at least not be a member of the protagonist group, thank you

How many chapters are left in the first world?