Brother Daiyu of Red Mansion

The writing, plot, and characters are among the best among Red Mansions fans (I dare not say the first one, everyone is interested in it). The number of words is still small at present, and we will wait and see the aftereffects Disadvantages: 1. It is not exciting enough (or the plot is not exciting enough, but it is still setting the stage) 2. The name of the novel is not attractive enough, and we don't have the brains to come up with a good name 😅 Finally, I would like to mention some personal opinions. The protagonist's path is different from that of the nobles, that is, the path of the civil servants. From a practical point of view, age may be a limitation (it is difficult to get a young person in a high position if you take the imperial examination). Refer to the next door Wan Tianqing (the likes of high-minded and low-ranking, with increasingly poor evaluation). He takes the path of the nobles, and does not care what the civil servants think or say. Or counting romantic figures, that book is very similar to this one, with more than 8 million words written in my lifetime (the writing and plot are also good, but it is true that the old lady's foot-binding cloth is true). The number of words in this book is not many at present, and I will wait and see the follow-up, hoping to take a road that has never been done before! ! ! Of course, according to this writing style and concept, even if it is not interesting in the later stage, there should still be results. Gold will always shine. At the very least, I can't write it 😢

It's a pity, actually I think it's quite well written, maybe most book lovers nowadays are more impatient. In my opinion, the detailed description and information inquiry are much better than that of The Red Mansion Scholar. That book now feels like a studio work to me. The Red Mansion novel that I thought was pretty good last time was still overwhelming.

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It can occupy a place among many Red Mansions essays. The writing style is smooth and eloquent, and the structure is reasonable and the conception is clever.

All I can say is that if I had read 100 or 200 chapters of your book, I could still accept the 50+ foreshadowings in the previous chapters, but now there are less than 60 chapters and more than 50 foreshadowings. The ambush environment is getting more and more gloomy and depressing. I don't feel any better after watching it.

Okay, okay, I finished reading it in one go, faster and faster

See you in the next book, you can do it daily or in officialdom, come on

I don't quite understand, but it's really weird that Lin Ruhai calls the protagonist "Xiao Zhi"

Are you so bold that even the censor dares to kill him openly?

In just one year, can modern people directly take part in the ancient scientific examination? Let's not talk about whether you can write eight-legged essays, but it's not necessarily whether you can write calligraphy well. It's ridiculous. It will take at least 5 years.