Da Qin Arrested the Alchemist, What Does It Have to Do with My Qi Refiner?

Can't see anymore. Even if I lose my brain, I still feel like I can't see it. What is it? You are just a Qi practitioner, you can't open up valleys, and you don't have any magic. How many people can you kill in a fight with Da Qin? Oh, forget it, what you wrote is very bad, damn you are so awesome, are you so afraid of Qin Shihuang? ! Don't write dog-licking articles like this. Nowadays, people with brains can't stand it, and people without brains can't stand it either. Seriously, QQ reading is suitable for you. You are worthless at the starting point and have no prospects.

I have read dozens of chapters in this book. It is about practicing Qi and cultivating immortals. The animals under my command are so powerful. There is no dialogue and no storyline. I don't understand what it means.

It's hard work. Others can finish the content in four or five chapters. You have been working hard for forty chapters. You are really a talent.

I've been reading online articles for 20 years, and this is the first time I've seen water like this. It's about the level of a reservoir mixed with a handful of rice. It's amazing👍

Personal opinion: Please do not use the rhythm and method of mainstream literary novels to read this book. The book must be a good book, but the good thing lies in the author's intentions. It is very troublesome to imitate the words, sentences and narrative methods of the ancients. The narrative is very clear and the author's own rhythm is there. When reading fast books, you can read all the books based on your own needs. If you feel that it is too cumbersome, you can just skip it and just watch the chat dialogue to advance the plot. The tedious narrative can be used as a reference when you encounter something you don't understand at critical moments. There are also a lot of useful knowledge in it This is just a new book. If you don't give it time to settle, how will it return you? If you are too anxious, you will not be able to appreciate the interesting story. After all, novels are only for leisure time. This is not a cool novel with ups and downs of the plot and frequent thunder and lightning. It may not be completely appropriate to have expectations. Don't rush to criticize    The book contains many of the author's own views and opinions, but the author has already explained it in the text with narration. And isn't this one of the interests discussed as a reader? It's interesting to have arguments. What I think may not be right, but it can continue to develop only by saying it. What's the point of blocking it with one sentence This is just a new book, less than a hundred chapters. The start has not yet been firmly established, and the story has only unfolded the tip of the iceberg. Whether it is good or bad has to continue to be observed. Those who are upset and angry will not be able to enjoy the most simple pleasure of Tibetan. Of course, the essence is that people with different moral principles should not seek to meet each other. Reasonable comments and friendly coexistence are the essence.

Really know how to count words. After making more than 7 yuan, I was still so poor that I gave up the book.

Let's put it this way, I have read a lot of bad books, and this one is not bad. The only bad thing is that we are here to read novels, not to read a bunch of popular encyclopedias that you can search on Baidu. I am just writing here for fun.

It's a book that I threw away my brain and couldn't even read.

The writing is grinding, what the hell is it writing?

Actually it's not bad, but the pace is a bit slow and the nonsense is a bit too much.

Over 100 chapters, it's really baffling that the writing style suddenly changed to a newbie's way. I was already struggling with it.

Poison, a running account. I wrote dozens of chapters and the main character appeared two or three times. I couldn't tell the priority. I just mentioned the Qin Dynasty briefly in ten or so chapters. I wrote dozens of chapters about the cultural contradictions of the seven kingdoms, the underlying form, the inner monologue of the First Emperor, etc. I came to see people cultivating immortals, not to see the interpretation of history by cultivators. I wasted two dollars and set up a post as proof. If I don't change it, this book will collapse.

There are more than a hundred chapters, and the topics are not prioritized. The progress is extremely slow. It is one of the most popular books this year.

The novel is pretty good, keep up the good work 🙂🙂🙂

How should I put it? The writing is acceptable and the plot is twists and turns. However, the biggest problem is that the plot is too twists and turns. In just one chapter, the first third is about the First Emperor, the middle third jumps to Zhao Gao, and the last third jumps to Fusu, but the plot does not make any big progress! In addition, the protagonist, somewhat inexplicably, had nothing to do after living in Yunmengze for so long. When he met Fusu, he ran away to Langya. When we arrived at Langya, we saw that the First Emperor was approaching and he went to sea again! It would be fine if he had some purpose. For example, Yun Mengze felt in his heart that his chance (mount) would appear in Langya, so he left. This makes sense. After all, there is no need for a Qi practitioner to rush to hug the First Emperor's lap. But he didn't explain anything, as if the protagonist was hiding on purpose, just hiding, and he just left a thought for others, as if a goddess was deliberately trying to lick a dog! In conclusion, overall it is a good work, but it is not suitable for following reading. The too slow plot rhythm can easily make people angry. But it is a good choice for friends who like to keep books... Although the number of words updated every day is not many...

Rubbish, it's so annoying!

All I can say is, if you are stuck in historical novels, can you check the information before writing? The people who burned books and enslaved Confucians are basically Confucian scholars.

You should go to the fantasy next door instead of the History Channel... Forget it, it's still ridiculous.

Just a bunch of words, no point, rubbish

I insisted on reading more than 30 chapters, and I became addicted. . . . The First Emperor sent people to follow the army to monitor, but he did not follow the front army to understand the actual situation. Instead, he acted aloof when questioned by the Chinese army, and was still kept in the Chinese army when something went wrong. Is this what the First Emperor sent people to monitor? It is extremely poisonous. This kind of logic makes me feel that my IQ has been insulted by the author.

I jumped to read it every 10 chapters. The plot is still relevant and the author is also talented. The First Emperor died and he didn't die for almost 20 chapters. What was the author thinking?

It's so poisonous that all the people they praise are so talented. I'm sick of it. If you want to survive the tenth chapter, please leave a message here.

I read a similar book about traveling through the Qin Dynasty and then Fusu found out and reported it to the First Emperor. That book was too boring. After the First Emperor found out, he sent Fusu to test to see if he was a real alchemist, but he didn't believe it. I saw the latest one was still testing Taimoji. I hope this one won't be too boring.

This book is good. Although there are only five chapters, the beginning is quite interesting. I just hope that the author can downplay the position of force. In the world view of Weiwodufa, all princes, generals and ministers should have nothing to do with the grass and dust in front of the protagonist. In this case, the protagonist should have the mentality of being aloof and innocent. After all, they are just mortals. How are the princes and generals? How about a high-ranking official displaying his nobility? How about being called the emperor? Just a mayfly that lives and dies? Maybe I can eat at your table once I retreat, and I can see my children and grandchildren once I travel again. The kind of contempt that extraordinary immortals have for mortal short-lived species. I hope the author can create it! 🤝🤝🤭🤭

This author is not here to write novels, but to copy information. One chapter is almost full of nonsense.

The long, long inner monologue is really upsetting to watch.

A poisonous weed: 1. Indiscriminately tampering with history. There is no use of imaginary history, it seems to be writing normal history, but it is tampered with indiscriminately. For example: The royal family of the Qin Dynasty was surnamed Qin. Mistakes and omissions such as this have appeared, and the author self-righteously explained it, but it makes no sense. 2. Very poor literary knowledge, making up random things. "Tao can be Tao, but it is very Tao, and its name can be famous, but it is very famous." Anyone with a little common sense knows that it is "Tao Te Ching", but Meng Tian said it is "Yi". Lao Tzu is a well-known figure in the Spring and Autumn Period, and Meng Tian will not be confused by his works. 3. Abandoned. If anyone can read it, you can read the remaining poisonous points yourself. I can't stand it.

I mainly read the comments if I don't believe it. I clicked in and read it. I suppressed my nausea until I got to chapter 50, and I basically skipped past it because I was afraid that I would still eat shit. But I am not writing this review to criticize this novel. The main thing is that I saw a paragraph comment "I think it's poorly written, so I'll write a book myself." I don't know how many years of genius it takes to say such a thing. What kind of genius speaks? Don't you think you can't say that when you go out to eat at a restaurant and you eat so much, you have to go home and make a portion yourself, and then you can scold him if he makes it more delicious than others? It's not that my brain can't say such things. The key is that I have seen this kind of shark more than once 👃. My main purpose is also to hope that everyone will criticize it once they see it.

1. The general heard that there was a god in so-and-so, and wanted to kill him but was frightened by the magical scene 2. After returning, he told Fusu 3. Fusu didn't believe it, and then the two sides argued 4. Fusu and the general went up the mountain again, and were frightened by the magical scene again 5. Then he planned to tell the emperor There are 50 chapters in this. What's there to see? Pretending to be cool and planning to write a book? Really awesome

It's 57 chapters. It's about loneliness. The summary of the plot is that the protagonist travels back to the Qin Dynasty and becomes an immortal cultivator. He is discovered by Meng Tian and tells Su Su.