Reborn, I Slacked Off, and the Gods Fell to Their Knees on the Spot

This is not a witch, but the Great Holy Mother.

When will her brother be written out of the story? This hypocrite, stubborn, prejudiced, and ungrateful wretch—don't let him be forgiven again! He deserves to be tormented, cast aside and forced to live with Shen Yuerong. He calls himself a gentleman? He's just a hypocrite with a sanctimonious facade. His whole family are ungrateful, vicious bastards; they deserve to be tormented.

The second most speechless book I've ever read. Plain and straightforward, the plot is nonsensical, and the content is completely irrelevant… Maybe it should be renamed "The Tragic Memoir Before Rebirth"... Successful rebirth is the ending.

Even Tomato (a famous Chinese writer) doesn't have a book that's so idiotic.

How could a book like this get on the recommendation list? It's exhausting to read; it's illogical and lacks any intelligence.

I haven't read the book, but there's a typo in the author's bio. It should be "" (zhe), not "" (di).

The female lead is the Virgin Mary? It's all flashbacks.

As above, I've heard of legitimate daughters, but never of legitimate immortals. The author should first distinguish between legitimate immortals and banished immortals before starting to write.

This book is well-written; you shouldn't write any more. If you're going to write, start by learning how to draft an outline.

Hello everyone! I'm the author of "You Shouldn't Be the Last Straw That Broke Her Off." I'm a newbie author, so please be kind. This is based on my personal experience, and I welcome any feedback. I'd like to ask if anyone knows how to get more people to know about my work?