Justice Came from Heaven at the Beginning, and I Was Targeted by the FBI

Keep writing until the universe dominates. After Earth, we will continue to write stories about river systems and science fiction stories.

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When I was looking through the fan names, I found that Jian Xilai next door was resurrected. I thought thoughtfully, and sure enough, you are also alive 🙂

Hundreds of people fought, using machine guns, missiles and drones, and nearly a hundred people died. They even used large transport planes, which were simply a publicity card and could not be concealed at all. It seems that the protagonist is very awesome, with various powerful companies and strategic technologies in his hands, but in fact he is still a gangster. Acting too far

The first hundred or so chapters are okay, they are a bit fresh and can be read, but later on I feel tired. Also, I don't like the role of rookie. A Siya is okay, and a female killer is barely acceptable. Now that we have a female agent, will there be a female president later? 🤔

A little suggestion, the protagonist should be a big shot, or about to become a big shot. Things like the bloody engagement party, the live broadcast of real chicken eating, etc. Should be untouchable and inappropriate, and other customers and viewers will not recognize the protagonist. Those who engage in this kind of business should be like Epstein. His career requires him to get to know celebrities. Like Epstein, he would not arrest Trump's daughter to entertain other rich people. The protagonist is either invited to be a customer (there should be a period of contacting customers to conduct surveys or something), or he is disguised and not recognized. . . Otherwise, I really can't think of anyone who would find a gangster godfather + military contractor boss for excitement.

These latest chapters, treat people as fools, right? Live broadcast on an network, others don't know you? 6

I couldn't stand it. I saw that the doctor was surrounded by police officers, and two of them had received orders to control the doctor. He rushed to a female police officer and took out a scalpel to threaten the surrounding police...

A new book in the "Live and See" series has been launched

The more I read this book, the less interesting it becomes, and the more I read it, the more brainless it becomes. People have no IQ, and things have no logic. It turned into a brainless pretense and a slap in the face, very cliché. I really hate the character of Rookie, it's a pure failure.

26 Photos of Vegas, why don't we bring some bodyguards when we go out? A sniper rifle can blow up the protagonist's dog head. What's the use of a group company? I'm really speechless, dog head.

It's a bit boring to let the boss do the work himself

When reading online articles, as long as they are written fluently, it is a good book. This novel is really enjoyable.

The new book is good, but it's too magical. Every contract the system gives to pigs is very dangerous, especially military industry and black ops teams. The CIA may kill pigs at any time. Rather than the so-called protection

It looks good, but the pace is too fast and can easily break down. It is recommended to slow down a bit, so that you can take on the daily life of the underworld. Integrate Hollywood crime movies, such as some super heists or passers-by as backdrops for 007 and Mission: Impossible, or add something like the High Table Organization in John Wick.

The most frequently used word in this book is "Fuck, Fake"😃😃

A big boss has to do everything by himself. This...

My talents are exhausted and there is nothing left to write about, so I started writing about hydrology.

The previous article was very good. I subscribed to it as soon as it was released. But gradually I felt something was wrong. The writing method and the beginning were different. It must have been written by someone else. If you don't believe me, scroll forward when you see the back part. It's amazing.

I just read about the Loli Island incident in the United States today. The author actually wrote a similar chapter long in advance. It's awesome.

When will Lao Deng be able to write stories with infinite pretentiousness, reasonable plots and wide-open imagination?

The more I write, the more confusing it gets. I have no motivation to continue reading.

Authentic refreshing article, enjoyable to read and taste. But it looks a bit boring

Criminals such as drug dealers, human traffickers, fraudsters, child abusers, serial arsonists, serial murderers, and those who emit pollutants that cause death should not just be sentenced to death or imprisoned for a few years. They must be dealt with in the same way.

Overall, the writing is quite attractive, but the part about the scavengers' civil strife, which requires IQ, is a bit more toxic. When writing a book, you must know how to avoid your own IQ shortcomings.

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So pretty, but a bit short

I found it. I said, does it look familiar? It starts from Chapter 108. It is an American movie killing game. You will know after watching the movie and then reading the novel.

What I Discovered Missing Person Returns

The missing person returns, new book to support, hope not to die young 😚