The Peerless Tang Sect's Yin-Yang God King

Kneel down and lick Shrek, that'll be fine

It would be boring if the Sun and Moon Martial Spirits did not start in the Sun and Moon Empire. Licking Tang San again

To be honest, I didn't want to read it when I read the title. I am in Shrek and have a relationship with the Ice and Snow Emperor of the Far North, and a group of Silver Dragon Kings. To be honest, I want to vomit, because all the fans write like this. Even if you all conspiracies like Brother Demon Seed, it is more fresh than this one. Speaking of which, there are too many fans of Douluo now. To succeed, it is a commonplace issue - innovation. The above is just a personal suggestion.

I have to write a flashy martial arts spirit. Can't you write something normal?

Frankly speaking, some of the settings are completely nonsensical. For example, in the first few chapters, Yan Shaozhe and Qian Duoduo had a relationship that was both brothers and competition. Later, they fell in love with a woman, Xian Lin'er, and the relationship later became a triangle. They have no relationship with Fanyu at all. How old is Fanyu? How old is Yanshao?

Yin and Yang merge into one, wouldn't it be good to evolve chaos, and directly become the God King of Chaos?

It is difficult to write a good fanfic, but as long as you justify yourself, some people will be willing to read it Those who are born with arrogance and prejudice will naturally not read it. After all, they criticize the original work and read the original fanfic again and again

I thought the protagonist was an hermaphrodite, that yin-yang martial spirit

You must have made too many typos. It feels so uncomfortable to read.