Across the Heavens: Starting from Bajiquan

Read it, don't like it. If you meet Ba Liming or communicate with him through the system, it is better than paying to find him and then going directly to prison because of your admiration. You need money but no money, and you need connections but no connections. If you can get to know this person, you have problems. When you ask about this person, you may be stunned. It's really eye-catching.

It's been a long time since I've seen a fan who writes about Dragon and Snake. I can give the author some ideas. For example, after writing about Dragon and Snake traveling through other worlds, and then growing up, interspersed with several worlds, some basic martial arts or middle martial arts worlds, and then traveling to the Galaxy Emperor. Galaxy Emperor is the novel after Dragon and Snake, and can be regarded as the second part of Dragon and Snake. Although there are few people who read this kind of writing, everyone who reads it is almost the kind of person who doesn't care about the book. After all, there are a few novels about Chinese martial arts.

I think it feels a little short, come on! Write more

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The people in Dragon Snake are not bad at seeing the gods, and have a very high spiritual realm. They just lack nutrients and cannot physically ascend, so their performance is not very good. As long as they go to a world with spiritual energy, replenish their energy, and forget to show their saints every minute, why go to martial arts?

I gave up the book when I saw the main character killing people and robbing Quanzhen Neidan Kung. It just feels baffling. Does the protagonist lack skills? There is no shortage at all. If he lacks it, he can use the golden finger settings to give him more powerful skills. He has to pretend to create his own skills, and the reason for killing people is actually to steal the skills. Rubbish plot.

If you don't know how to write, don't write. You wrote it before you even understood the original work. The way of sincerity is written as if it were not.

Eye examination of Ding Zhen, identified as: Pure NT novel The protagonist can block the impact of a car traveling at high speed, and then beat a brown bear for a long time Write a sincere way. In the original work, danger can be sensed from 800 miles away, but it is the author's turn to write it. Not to mention 800 miles, even if 80cm launches a sneak attack, the protagonist will not feel it😥😥😥

There are so many unreasonable things about you. First of all, you copied songs. This is not what ordinary people do. Also, in Tang Zichen's realm, you, who have a clear purpose, should have feelings. What's more, it's a coincidence. Wang Chao, an ordinary person, met Tang Zichen by chance and you appeared. When others check, you will find that an ordinary social beast suddenly wrote a few songs. An ordinary person with more than 20 years has become Ming Jin. When the master looks at you, he finds that you are skilled in Bajiquan, but your body does not show any traces of hard training.

It is recommended that the author write more about the ordinary world to quickly accumulate knowledge and then move closer to "Technology + Fantasy" such as Devouring, Star Transformation... Also please refer to Wang Wu's Three Thousand Golden Pills in Lingjian Mountain. After all, the protagonist has trained his body and should be able to withstand this huge energy😏

This book follows the plot, but it is tasteless and disgusting to read.

When modern people say they are literate, they are considered literate people, but the meanings of some words are misunderstood. Taoist couples are not limited to the pleasure of sexual intercourse, Taoist couples are companions on the road of pursuit. A life-and-death acquaintance who is both a teacher and a friend. When many people look at a Taoist couple, they think of a woman. It can be seen that many of them are superficial people, which is really degrading to gentle people.

The way of sincerity is the same as not writing it, the protagonist's IQ is a bit weak

Has the author seen Dragon Snake? You really can write whatever you want. You don't even have the will to fight, so you have to be sincere. In the original book, Wang Chao sees that God is not bad, but he doesn't even have the way to be sincere. You are so simple. When I met with Tang to discuss, your little Kalami, who was just a strong warrior, was just a little bit behind when she used the dragon-snake combination attack. However, she almost missed when she hit the unknown warrior later. What do you mean by being the leader of the Tang Sect? Nausea. . . .

So rubbish? The protagonist is useless

In fact, you don't have to go directly. Under one person, if you stay from Dragon Snake for a few more decades, your spiritual energy will revive and you can directly enter the plot of Galaxy Emperor. The upper limit is still very high.

What the hell did you write? You're almost at the emperor level, and you even went to Taixuanmen to take the entrance exam.

The world of Journey to the West is really a waste. He has been constantly provoking and seeking death in front of the big boss. He has no strength at all. The only Tai Chi figure he relies on is someone else's. He can't fully control it. There are all kinds of virgins. He is really speechless. In the end, he has to escape back to Yangshen. Journey to the West recommends skipping the three views that have seriously affected the previous establishment, just like changing the author

The Dragon Snake is followed by the Galaxy Emperor, but you end up joining the martial arts. What's the difference between this and joining the Chinese army in 1949?

Let's just start now and delete some of the copied songs in the first chapter. If you don't want to delete it, why don't you just add some patches? Even if you say in advance that the protagonist is a composer, it's not difficult to describe it in just a few words.

The author is so brave! I dare to write even if I don't understand the most basic things.

The author should read the original work carefully before writing. Is this right?

Here comes my first recommendation as a newcomer! I need some effective reading these two days, I really need it! Effective follow-up is for book friends who have spent the starting point coins (one is acceptable, for example, a reward of one coin) to follow up to the latest chapter. Since we are destined to meet each other, let's work hard together! I drew a picture for everyone

It's so poisonous, please read

It's not very exciting. It's like a running account. Simply put, it's just an upgrade flow. There's nothing interesting in the middle. It's either fighting or fighting.

I haven't seen it yet. Is this a eunuch?

The writing is still very good. I like the character of Master Ma the most. Thinking about it, he is very brave and handsome. I hope the author will continue writing.

Not enough

It's really poisonous. I imagine that I will be beaten by other people. This has nothing to do with other people.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?