Hogwarts: Making the Lord of the Rings

It is obvious that the original text of this article is not in Chinese, and there are traces of organic translation between the lines. Including but not limited to differences in language expression, incorrect literal translations and different translations of the same person's name. If you want to avoid jerky reading in Chinese, you have to work hard on proofreading the translation. Although I like this article very much and am looking forward to updating it, I have to remind the author: the work of translation is very hard and tiring. The author probably wrote in a foreign language, and posted it here at the same time as it was published on the Internet, right? But this workload is actually very large, and maybe 3,000 words in a foreign language can be translated into 10,000 Chinese characters. If you proofread it again, you have to rewrite all the sentences that do not conform to Chinese expression habits, which is very energy-consuming.

Oh, my friend, please sort out the layout of these pieces. I can't even see who is talking.

So many people say there is something wrong with your layout, can't you change it? Are you so stubborn... I glanced at the layout and lost the desire to read any more. Do you think your writing skills are so good that people can endure to read every word?

The story is very interesting, but when I read it I felt there was something wrong with the layout. It felt weird when I watched it

Why not just regenerate into Lord of the Rings? Bewitching the host, controlling the host, causing trouble, subverting the plot, how interesting it is

I only paid attention to segmented layout after more than ninety chapters. People have already run away.

The content is still good, but it seems to be a bit grows. After reading more than 20 chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

The content is okay, but it always feels like a computer translation when reading. Do you want to find an author who is used to writing in Chinese to polish it for you?

Looking at the previous chapters, it's a bit strange. The spell cast by Harry's mother has failed? Dumbledore's behavior feels too bland.

After reading the first six chapters, it felt strange to read. Author, where are you from? Many of the words and expressions are strange and difficult to read. The idea of ​​System + Lord of the Rings is still very interesting. Can any Shen Nong tell me what is written next? I stopped reading after reading the first six chapters, and if it continued to be like this, I gave up.

I think the translation is pretty good, and it quite restores the feeling of foreign language dialogue.

The paragraphs are too long; the characters have too many ideas; the main plot is unclear, I hope it can be marked, such as growing up; acting with the purpose of killing Voldemort; ignoring matters that have nothing to do with oneself, etc. The above minor problems are not conducive to reading.

It's not very coherent, the limited statement is pure and the translation is very unsound.

I read a few chapters. I found that sometimes I missed a little bit of the plot from time to time. It seems a bit incoherent. For example, the part about going to school for the first time and coming back feels a bit jumpy.

The translation is very strange and the words are very crowded.

It's a very interesting book, and the Lord of the Rings setting is very interesting. Who can tell me who the heroine is? Is this book a eunuch?

It feels like it was translated, and the content is good, but the result is a bit incomplete, as if it was translated by a foreigner learning Chinese.