Licking Friends, Please Stay. I Really Don't Want to Fall in Love After Being Reborn.

It feels like your plot is moving too fast. I didn't see the so-called cool points, so I just narrated the story and talked about the time, space, location and why. The image of the male protagonist and female protagonist is not established, I can't even imagine what she/he looks like. Also, the change of time and place was very abrupt, and I didn't even know where the male protagonist was when he spoke. The heroine's remorseful state of mind was so natural. You should write that she was too arrogant to send any news, and then the male protagonist had an affair with the new female protagonist. She learned about it through the mouth of her best friend who happened to see the affair, and then she panicked, and a series of plot contradictions were promoted. The main passiveness is regrettable. I read five chapters and finished them in two days. Come on

The novel Eunuch is too cool