Bird Soul: Unparalleled National Warriors at the Beginning

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Contents of this book: "Mahjong is Metaphysics" is not a science or a thousand skills, but a simulation of ghosts. The story imitates the two-dimensional ghost possession genre such as "The Soul of Chess", but the writing style is stretched. As a result, the protagonist won every game. Before winning, he would be in a desperate situation and suffer all kinds of verbal ridicule. An old routine gathering dust. The author is obviously a fan of small life culture. No evaluation here.

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I saw that some book friends said that the protagonist was a bit aggressive in the early stage. I can understand it. After 25 chapters, the author also wrote a good game, but I personally think the beginning is very good The male protagonist is equivalent to a mortal awakening. He first enters the fairy world and fights with the gods who use super powers to play cards. Book friends who have read Gastrodia Gastrodia and Crazy Gambling should be able to identify with the original characters. The quality of the game, and the first game of this book is when the last national warrior is against one when being targeted in 1v3, which is a top-notch cool game in the Quehun game However, the book friends who read it cannot all read the same book. The author really needs to consider the perception of passers-by, and the current quality of this book is at Sanjiang level for passers-by, and the author will not have any problems if he keeps it up

This book is really useless, I really don't understand it, but according to the author's description, the protagonist is a poker player who is very skilled and has bad luck. As a result, his opponents are all wrong, so the protagonist will lose less at most. How can you win? Also, at least in July, readers have reported this problem here, and the solution and reference objects have been arranged for you. The author also said below that what he said is good, and he is ready to copy it. What did you copy? It's September now, and the protagonist is still like this. Is this the result of your copying? Are you trying to mess with the readers or are you copying them without understanding? The title of the book also opens with "Kokushi Musou", which is really appropriate. After all, there has been no "Kokushi Wushuang" since the beginning. The protagonist does not look like a mahjong master with strong card luck, but more like a mahjong veteran who memorizes time. The obscene emphasis on technology in metaphysics mahjong is like emphasizing that the protagonist believes in science in a horror novel, which makes people speechless. And because he is the protagonist, he can only win continuously, which is even more disgusting. Since the previous reader told you to read that Go book, I also suggest that you take a good look at that Go novel to see if there is any lengthy popular science about Go or the author's own insights into Go. Take a look at your picture today. Half of the 25 pages are about Japanese hemp science. Is it necessary? Is the hydrology so watery, and it's still a paid content? My money is not money? If you want to read Japanese popular science, I don't know Baidu. It doesn't cost money. You are really a talent. The number of words in one chapter is as much as two chapters of other authors. Unfortunately, the content is not even half of that of other authors. The protagonist of your book has a weird character, and the content is supported by empty comments and self-exciting jokes. Why didn't you explain it when you made jokes? Isn't it possible to continue filling water? After all, not everyone can understand your jokes? Finally, let me tell you, your shady content will only give excuses to readers who watch pirated copies. And although you are indeed the only one who writes Japanese and manga fanfiction on the platform at present, it does not mean that you can write whatever you want in this book. If you insist on not correcting me, I can stop reading your book and read other books or play games and watch short videos. I don't just rely on you to kill time. Of course, if you completely feel that your original intention is to write a self-interested novel, and it doesn't matter if you don't make money, then you are welcome to delete my post and ban me directly, because it is my fault that I express my objection to a completely self-excited novel.

The author's writing is good, but he doesn't know how to write online articles. He recommends learning the Go AI next door. That is to say, it is a business-level push at the beginning, a professional push at the mid-term, and a push at the later stages of the competition. It has a double harvest of performance and reputation. Mahjong is the same as Go, there are no repeated games, and there is no shortage of materials and tricks. There is no need to force the protagonist's luck, use bad cards to show off defensive skills, and there is no need to suppress cheats. Use it once every few days or one game at a time. Take some of the more popular mahjong series as examples: Legend of Dou Pai, Tianhe Street, Feng Pai, and Que Puppet. . . No one dares to set up a protagonist with extremely bad luck, and then rely solely on defense to play cards. Even the ghost god Akagi has ghost-level skills + super luck. If he only relied on skills and no luck, he would have been drained to death by Wasiko. If, I say if. In another timeline, at the beginning, the protagonist was directly possessed by 10% of Wasiko in the chess and card room, and used the skills of his previous life to kill everyone and shocked passers-by. Then Wasiko appeared as a ghost and said "Akagi, I'm back from hell" in front of Akagi and K; then he upgraded by 20% and went home to play mahjong with his three sisters. At the beginning, there was There was a back and forth, mixed with introducing the character characteristics of my sister's classmates and how lucky they were. The last game of National Warriors Thirteen Sides let them know what true unparalleled luck is; then upgraded 30% and the three-player mahjong with Yumeko Snake Ghoul. At first, the two of them let the sister play, and in the last game, the two of them used their strength to start a full-on battle, and ended with the sister's double blast. . . Would it look better this way?

Making mafia mahjong too powerful is outrageous. Suture Gastrodia, there are real ghosts and gods in the world view. In the Age of Gods, you directly ask the gods to control the whole place. What's the use of having unlucky luck? If you don't make a card, you won't make a card. Unless the order is artificially changed, simply fixing the cards is the best of the three. Even mafia mahjong directly goes to the competition to catch people with bad luck, which is a headache to watch. According to you, a person with incredible luck, you are worse than the God of Death in Quegui. Anyone who dares to mess with his cards will be sent immediately on the spot. In other words, the protagonist Sakurai is fine, and the others are all affected. The mafia mahjong is so unscrupulous and they still look down on the white mahjong. The white mahjong is already playing mahjong with super powers, but your mafia is still in the three major schools.

The way you write it, it doesn't matter that Yu Wushuang consumes luck, and so does the miscellaneous fish. If you play cards continuously, wouldn't it mean that the miscellaneous fish can defeat ghosts and gods in a round-robin battle?

I would like to give the author a suggestion: get rid of the many role-playing aspects of the system as soon as possible. You only have four or five characters to play, and there will be more and more in the future. Novices can't grasp it, and the length of the chapters doesn't support you in filling them all. If you write like this, some characters will definitely disappear as you write. It is better to choose the most brilliant and practical ones. Don't deliberately abuse the protagonist. For example, the setting of bad luck is completely inexplicable, unreasonable, unreasonable, and unpopular with readers. Why don't you hurry up and give the protagonist a cool nickname based on his characteristics, so that his reputation can be spread first. The trick of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is old and bad. Think about Tianhejie, does Ikawa feel good about holding his teammates back all the way? It's still the Akagi kind of feeling that comes from a shop that tastes just right.

To be honest, if you write the protagonist's growth like this, it will make people feel that you are abusing the protagonist. If you combine Dragon Fruit Universe and Gastrodia elata, you must face the so-called conflict between Pai Lang and Gastrodia elata skills. Tianmali's portrayal of card luck basically focuses on skills, just like the duck's mastery of the card mountain can invalidate Da Xingdan's skills. It is a kind of skill restraint, not pure card luck. Now the protagonist's role-playing system is neither good nor bad. When Wasizi's role-playing value and Tianjiangyi's role-playing value are now about the same, the protagonist has obviously acquired some of Tianjiangyi's skills, but Wasizi can only see luck and has no actual use on the card table. Even if you say that about 40% of Wasizi's performance can vaguely feel the wave of cards, and can cooperate with Tian Jiangyi's "Haidilaoyue", I will consider you to have worked hard. As a result, now that you have messed around with the settings, your luck has been suppressed by Miyanaga Saki. The most important thing is that you forcibly gave the protagonist an African character, and Gastrodia elata and fighting cards are things on the table that only affect the table. Wasizi will not be unlucky just because he touches himself. I think it would be better if you let the protagonist forcibly use the side effects of Wasizi to force luck to stay on the card table. For example, 40% Wasizi role should be the peak of heart-changing hands according to the Dragon Fruit universe. Instead of being unlucky after riding the wave like now, and there is no specific description of the misfortune, it makes people feel that it is the protagonist's excuse to skip school.

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To be honest, the more I watch the protagonist, the more frustrated he becomes. Although he seems to be winning all the time, he is almost not happy at all. It says at the front that the protagonist's personal strength is so great, but he is embarrassed and suppressed when he touches a monster. He uses it less and has a lot of side effects, which affects his fortune and even his own strength later. If you want to cheat the protagonist but are afraid that his strength will skyrocket, then you might as well not add this template cheat. You might as well just give the protagonist a fortune + his own strength and be done with it.

Usually when I see mahjong questions raised in the comment area, I will revise them, but there are some things I really want to complain about. I have not even deleted five comments on this book on my own initiative, and then there are always people saying that I deleted the comments. And the funniest thing is that someone said that I was not good at writing that paragraph, so I directly changed that paragraph and the following paragraphs, thinking that there would be no problem if I changed it. As a result, he said that his comments were gone. This author did not accept his own criticism at all, and he was a stubborn group. What do you want me to say? Let me explain again. When the author sees comments or typos, he will simply revise them. This process will cause some replies to be deleted by the system. If the comment has been deleted, please go back and check whether the paragraph you requested to modify has been changed. Also, when I delete chapter reviews and book reviews, they usually involve two things: insulting words, and the kind of comments that are just for one glance and then leave because of the recommendation. What is the purpose of not deleting such a review that is of no use other than to provide rhythm?

In the early stage, it can be said that it was grass jelly, but from the middle of the national competition, there were more and more surprises. The most terrible thing is the inappropriate content, which uses various reasons to play with girls. If you really want to write about Xue Bai, just choose a female protagonist and write a good emotional line. This kind of open and closed, I am not responsible anyway, it is all for various reasons, which is quite outrageous. The writing is both good and bad, and everyone who writes light novels about pseudo-harems will also read it. That's not the problem. The problem is that the tone of a book should be consistent. The difference in style between the front and rear is too big, just like the goods are not exactly right. I really wanted to endure it and read it. After all, there are not many books on this track. I couldn't bear to see Xiaoqing being raped, and then making fun of the protagonist in front of her boyfriend after being rescued.

It's time for the national competition, it's time to release the protagonist's suppression. I can't play anymore if I push back further. It's a death match or a world championship. The protagonist will die after a strong game. There are so many templates for the protagonist that are not upgraded or used. He always upgrades temporarily and then fights hard. After fighting, it feels like he is about to die. Don't use fantasy upgrades anymore. It seems fun for others to survive a narrow escape, but you, the protagonist, look unhappy.

It feels like the protagonist is becoming more and more separated. On the one hand, the plot on Tianma's side is overwhelming the protagonist, and there are obviously a bunch of templates to build a national competition with various climaxes, while on the other hand, in the other world, he is watching the awesome and coaxing, and any big boss can get through two tricks. Your upgrade stream, the invincible stream, is totally different. You jump around, and the impression is really bad. It is true that both sides are not pleased.

The protagonist blows so loudly that it sounds like a basket.

Hey guys, show me the red temperature. It seems that cheating is not enabled. The game is not that important when the soul is cheated. Instead, it is crazy cheating in online mahjong. It's really numb. When you encounter a stronger hand, it will definitely start to suck, and you will start to torture yourself violently. Did the author have fun writing it? Difficult to understand.

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I have a guess. The author originally wanted to write a system, but halfway through writing, he found that the system was wrongly written. Otherwise, there is no way to explain why a role-playing system has not been played a few times from beginning to end. So the mistake was rewritten into what it is now. The system provides some initial abilities, and then uses various reasons to not become stronger, and various small cards. , No matter how big the wave is, it can only be accumulated to full. The conservation of lucky energy only takes effect on the protagonist, and no passerby has this rule I can only say that you want to read a mahjong novel that is similar to various TV series and Japanese mahjong. This book is not your thing, and it is even a reverse ingredient. Please be careful, I give up, the three views and facial features are not in harmony.

I finally understand why I felt that the protagonist was weak and aggrieved when I read it. The author used the pen and ink to focus on the perspectives of other supporting characters! And it's a lot of pen and ink! I wanted to use foil, but it had the opposite effect!

Still suppressing the protagonist? That's almost it. It's fun to read novels, not to watch the protagonist get angry, suppress, suppress, suppress your uncle?

From a good mahjong book to a simple novel 🤐

After watching the ending of the legendary night, I still can't calm down for a long time and have endless aftertaste. The ghost god Akagi who replayed the cause and effect was defeated because of it. The first chapter was in the mahjong parlor and the destined national warrior Wushuang was the cause. The end of Legend Night is the end of an era and the end of this book, but it is also a new beginning for Nan Yan and his partners. Their story will never end. This book is the second two-dimensional mahjong book I have come across. The first one, Tokyo Dragon Bird, ended in haste. The experience of this book has been full of twists and turns, and it is not easy to finish it. The county-level competition chapter or the Gastrodia elata chapter is the one with the most investment in characters in the book. It not only describes the protagonist Nan Mengyan's journey from being at a loss after being hit by the Universiade to slowly integrating into it. From not adapting to the template character to gradually mastering it, from scientific mahjong to superpower mahjong. It is also an article about the growth of the author's writing skills. The author focuses on depicting the protagonist's psychological changes, and the too detailed description of adaptation and growth makes it a bit dragging. There is actually nothing wrong with the author's description, but it does not suit the current impetuous environment. Generally speaking, it is still at a food level. It contains popular science about Japanese mahjong and a lot of practical descriptions, which is very interesting for a brave man like me. This article also spends a lot of pen and ink to describe the many beautiful girls in the Gastrodia world, which also adds a unique scenery to the boring mahjong game. I never expected that the protagonist would have a unique relationship with many beautiful girls in the later period. The National Competition chapter is a turning point in the book, and it is also the chapter where the author breaks through the original work (Gastrodia has not finished the National Competition for more than ten years). The protagonist in this chapter has gradually mastered and skillfully used the plug-in ability to reveal the oppression of the strongest demon king. Although there are some flaws in the description of the finals of ghosts and gods in the last thought, overall he has broken away from the semi-satisfaction and started to crush other players. Some people think that the National Competition can be the end. But at the beginning, in addition to the Gastrodia worldview, the author also quoted the Pitaya Mahjong worldview, so I had to taste the dark mahjong and the legendary night, the showdown between Akagi and Wasiko. As the heir of Vasizi, there must be a battle in destiny. However, the author's physical condition and the performance issues of the work almost caused the final chapter to be aborted. Fortunately, after two rounds of interruptions, I wrote the most essential chapter of the book (in my opinion) Dark Mahjong Chapter! In fact, at the beginning of the article, I was so stupid that I thought that the author had changed someone, and how could he write such a plot that makes people scratch their feet. But fortunately, Beichuan Puppet appeared on the scene and began to show the game of dark mahjong on human nature in a different writing style from the first two articles, reducing the details of the game and focusing on describing the psychological changes in the game. Dragon God War is a break away from the traditional mahjong battle, and is more of a game of human nature. Black and white 6v6, Tian, ​​Daqian, Kitagawa Puppet vs. Ghost and God Akagi, World Youth Championship Nanyan crushes Italy's strongest player Marc and French Saint, and Bai Zhumu's double half ghost crushing twin sisters plots are all exciting. Not to mention the legendary one-night reenactment of the final battle at the Prime Minister's Office is a perfect ending. However, there are many shortcomings. Due to the rush period, most of the love lines were deleted, and Shen He's plot (the essence was harmonized) caused the protagonist to change from a dull protagonist to a maniac who likes female characters (sex devil?). I never expected that the love line would actually be a harem collection, all under my wings. Although there are some flaws, it is good to have a complete ending without the eunuch author. We have witnessed the protagonist's gradual growth from a scientific mahjong player with an unlucky physique to the Yu Wushuang ghost and god who finally masters bad luck and good luck. I am deeply pleased and envious! I also have the author's new book in my collection, but I haven't started reading it yet. I would like to make some suggestions to focus on writing like the dark mahjong chapter, and at the same time grasp the intensity of the protagonist, and add some refreshing elements to make the story more refreshing. More whispers. Ha ha

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When will I write about Akagi's funeral? I'm very curious about what Akagi will say to the male protagonist 🙂

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It's August, where are your mahjong and love stories?

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